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Old 2009-08-13, 10:39   Link #81
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Yeah sorry about that. But yeha you have understand, i like this version better Good job. ^^
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Old 2009-08-13, 11:44   Link #82
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Whoa that's some very good animation! But I guess you might need to improve the readability of the text, maybe some glow/stroke effect?
Thanks for the recommendation. I just found out that glow really sucks on low-color gifs, but I did the best I can:



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Old 2009-08-13, 13:08   Link #83
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First draft.
I wonder if this fits the criteria?



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Old 2009-08-13, 13:59   Link #84
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It took me a moment to focus on it, but yes it fits the criteria.
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Old 2009-08-13, 14:49   Link #85
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how about this one?
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Old 2009-08-13, 19:48   Link #86
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how about this one?
I like it...the rain makes it look like there's a storm in the clouds
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Old 2009-08-13, 20:35   Link #87
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how about this one?
Im not Solace but to me even though Beatrice is close to us the viewer it seems more of a side view to me then a scale. The animated rain is nice though.
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Old 2009-08-13, 23:15   Link #88
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First Draft ..



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You know, all that text at the left side make it kinda 'boring' to see. XP

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Well the signal lost part and static part was put int there as if it was a view of from a camera. Though I guess I might only need the static part.

Maybe, I might not need a better way for the loop.

It is bit fast, I should flow it down to makes it more like floating it in space.

Would this be bit better?

Anyhow still need to fix this a lot.
The static still doesn't convince me, looks a bit fast and it "breaks" the animation.

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A new version, made the render less yellow-ish and cleaned a little her hair.




C&C anyone ?
The rendering work on the upper hair looks a bit rough.

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Question : Is this eligible for entry? If it's OK then this will my be entry until I've updated it. "Perspective" is just kinda confusing...
The shade on the lower part of the girl make her look like if she were a giant.

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Do prefer this one better, the "wine" color gives it a great feeling of depth.

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Thanks for the recommendation. I just found out that glow really sucks on low-color gifs, but I did the best I can:



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Doesn't the animation looks a bit rough?

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First draft.
I wonder if this fits the criteria?



You know? It took me a while to figurate what it was, perhaps it has too many efects (all the lights and shades mainly) maybe a bit less efects would make it look better.

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how about this one?
The animation is good, but the colors look a bit saturated with 'red' and it looks a lso very dark.

I have to agree with Manju that it looks more like a sideview rather than a perspective sig.
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Old 2009-08-14, 00:13   Link #89
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@KholdStare :
Seems better for the text now...

Version 0.2, I'm changing the perspective, brighten Mii-chan's lower side, using darker overlay color for the character and moving the text :



Or is this one better?

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Old 2009-08-14, 00:21   Link #90
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Well, this is way far more better than your previous one, it catchs the idea of perspective very well and the sig itsels is nice!
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Old 2009-08-14, 04:28   Link #91
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I tweaked my entry
now with border, text and added some c4d's


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Old 2009-08-14, 04:57   Link #92
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@KholdStare I am not the best for juge animation but somethi ng seem wrong with this one.
@ Escimo I still don't know what on your sig after staring at if ofor a few minute
@ Furuno you should go with the second sig, it's a better one and it fit more the theme.
@ Fraility I am not sure than it's the best place for placing your text.
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Old 2009-08-14, 06:52   Link #93
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Thanks for the comments. Second draft. Hope this is a bit clearer on what it's supposed to be.



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Old 2009-08-14, 07:06   Link #94
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A very quick draft. Does this qualify? CnC appreciated.
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Old 2009-08-14, 08:56   Link #95
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@Frailty :
Maybe it's just me, but it seems that I read the text as "Towards the Flight".

Well, I guess I should change my entry then... Here's the updated version, resized to my new 360x120 px standard :


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Old 2009-08-14, 09:05   Link #96
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@ Frailty: I agree with ganbaru about the placement of the text. Where it is now diminishes the pespective effect. It halts my eye traveling down the tunnel. Maybe if you placed it at the bottom on the sig on the same horizontal level as the person?
@ Moonie: I think it qualifies.
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Old 2009-08-14, 09:19   Link #97
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Third draft. Toned down the lighting and got rid of the text.


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Old 2009-08-14, 09:39   Link #98
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replaced the text as ganbaru&LKK said
sharpened the lightened part a bit


@Furuno
it's just Light
the character before L is kinda like a design, it's a leaf-like brush I used
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Old 2009-08-14, 09:49   Link #99
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replaced the text as ganbaru&LKK said
sharpened the lightened part a bit
I like this placement better. The sharpening helps a lot too.
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Old 2009-08-14, 09:56   Link #100
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Text needs rework, but I was somewhat uncertain if it qualifies. To me it does have grand scale but that might be me... some of it was lost due to size.
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