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Old 2009-09-05, 14:17   Link #21
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First attempt.



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Old 2009-09-05, 16:02   Link #22
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Thank you ^^. Here i tried another version
V1
V2
V3
V4


Ganbaru: I like the last version better
Ayu-sempai: The last version too. even if, maybe can you try to put the same color as the border for the text?
Urei : Wonderful
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Vanda: Looks great, miku scares me abit
LKK: This looks simple, but it looks Good
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Old 2009-09-05, 22:43   Link #23
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@ Urei somehow I think it look morfe like some ''fancy'' clothing than some cybernetic part.
@ LKK THe green background might not be the best idea...
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Old 2009-09-06, 00:11   Link #24
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I took out the render at the side, re-did the brushes. I hope this looks better.

Looks a lot better. Just try to add the border on the sides as well.

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Not bad, but normally the animation on the "danger" text should be faster.

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Thank you ^^. Here i tried another version
V1
V2
V3
V4
I'd like V4 with the text style of V1.

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In fact the ''white spot'' was a lens flare
4th version, I removed the text ( exept her name, the only thing than I would think of placing on this sig wouldn't fit , not enough room ) tonned down the render, added a photo filter, and added some lens flare over the first one. C&C would be welcome.
The second lensflare doesn't look that bad, uh?

When using lens flare, try to play abit with Filter/ Render/ Lighting efects (onmi) as well to add more realistic styles.
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Old 2009-09-06, 07:31   Link #25
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I don't know which I like best, opinions please;

Ver.1

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Old 2009-09-06, 09:35   Link #26
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@ Miko Miko I would go with version 2 ( too bad than the ''gun'' won't fit in the signature.)
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The second lensflare doesn't look that bad, uh?

When using lens flare, try to play abit with Filter/ Render/ Lighting efects (onmi) as well to add more realistic styles.
You are talking about something like that ?


C&C would be welcome
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Old 2009-09-06, 10:38   Link #27
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@ganbaru - hmm, I'm not so sure.. but this time the rest of the sig looks too dark..

@Miko Miko - version 2 too x)
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Old 2009-09-06, 11:19   Link #28
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I don't know which I like best, opinions please;

Ver.1

Ver.2

Ver.3
V2 looks better to me, but I'm not sure about the text.

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@ Miko Miko I would go with version 2 ( too bad than the ''gun'' won't fit in the signature.)

You are talking about something like that ?
Yeah but adjust it so you don't have it to dark on the sides. Just try to make the focus point on the gun's light.
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Old 2009-09-06, 11:35   Link #29
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Indeed, this version is much better.

@LKK Hm, it's good although in my opinion the background is a bit empty.
@Risa chan Certainly V4, although the text is not visible enough.
@ganbaru Hm, the lens flare goes well with the effect although as Rick said, tune it up to look more realistic. Also, if it's too bright the background suddenly loses it's appeal.
@Miko Miko V1 or V2. You could also add up those color schemes into one graphic

v1


v2


version 2 of the previous signature. Tuned up and cleaned a bit the upper segment. C&C?
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Old 2009-09-06, 11:39   Link #30
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version 2 of the previous signature. Tuned up and cleaned a bit the upper segment. C&C?
I think it looks really good. The text is a bit hard to read but it's a minor problem.
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Old 2009-09-06, 11:40   Link #31
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@Urei - glad to have you back

well then, your sig... 1st it's creepy D8 a girl kissing a skull can't be a good thing
2nd hmm, now seriously, I think the sig is good but it's lacking something.. I'd love to know what, but I have no idea sorry D:

edit: oh wait, there's text? O_O didn't see it until Rick pointed it out O_o you should work on that

@ayu-smepai - also prefer the version Urei mentioned

@LKK - danger should be faster and.. hmm... I don't know but it's lacking something too, I just can't seem to know what, sorry D:

@Risa chan - I say the same Evil Rick said
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Old 2009-09-06, 14:40   Link #32
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Urei Great job really like the second version although I agree with Rick that the text is kinda hard to read where it is.
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Old 2009-09-06, 15:32   Link #33
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C&C would be nice.
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Old 2009-09-06, 22:32   Link #34
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C+C greatly appreciated
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Old 2009-09-06, 22:33   Link #35
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C+C greatly appreciated
The animation causes a serious problem of quality myu friend.
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Old 2009-09-07, 05:49   Link #36
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WIP .. C&C welcome ..
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Old 2009-09-07, 05:55   Link #37
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@Evil Rick - love it looks about perfect to me

@Endrance - agreed with Evil Rick, the quality suffered a lot... you should work on that

@KiNA - the bubbles seem awkwardly animated... other than that, seems good to me

now my new versions - I worked on the text and tried to leave it without any text at all but it was lacking something so I redid the text in many ways and now I can't choose x.x

v2


v3


v4


v5


v6


C&C anyone?

*btw a curiosity - I know C&C means something along feedback but what does it mean exactly?*
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Old 2009-09-07, 06:03   Link #38
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Disabled some effect on the right ..


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Old 2009-09-07, 06:14   Link #39
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^ oh thanks x)

now, your new version.. it wasn't much the other effects, it's just that the bubbles don't have a 'natural' speed to them... or they don't seem to me at least...
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Old 2009-09-07, 07:11   Link #40
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