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Old 2009-09-07, 07:19   Link #41
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Urei ver 2 is better ,but I can't read it.
Evil Rick I think it's good that way.
Endrance the animation might be a problem, by itself and for the quality
KiNA exept the issue of the bubble than need a little work, it good
vandakiara I can realy choose betweem 4 and 6

I reworked around the lightning effect and the brightness and I don't know which one is the best. C&C would be welcome.



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Old 2009-09-07, 07:46   Link #42
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@ganbaru - I like the first because you can see her face better...

and now I have a v7
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Old 2009-09-07, 09:01   Link #43
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Ok now that I've added a border I'm not sure what else to do ...
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Old 2009-09-07, 11:01   Link #44
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Disabled some effect on the right ..


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Good animation as always, but at some point, the borders look kinda darker, don't?

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1st draft ~su.
CnC appreciated.
Perhaps more color would be nice.

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I reworked around the lightning effect and the brightness and I don't know which one is the best. C&C would be welcome.



I like first as well.

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and now I have a v7
I like how does it looks now.

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Ok now that I've added a border I'm not sure what else to do ...
Looks good this way.
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Old 2009-09-07, 11:08   Link #45
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Disabled some effect on the right ..


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The lighting is different every 4th frame, making it jumpy. Unless that was intentional?
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Old 2009-09-07, 14:14   Link #46
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Old 2009-09-07, 14:35   Link #47
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@Evil Rick I like it's color scheme and seriously, I can't find anyting wrong with it
@Endrance Indeed, the quality is the major issue here. Your signature is screaming for a certain effect that is widely used today. You know, that ball of light loading effect? The one where the energy blast becomes gradually larger as it's positioned at the end of the barrel, only to suddenly blast away.
@KiNA Like it, but as it was pointed out, one frame is a bit different then the rest.
@Moonie As Rick said, a bit more variety in colors,
@ganbaru Hm, the last one looks the best. Do you intend to keep the withise border? And remember to keep as much of the sharpness of the character as possible.
@vandakiara Nothing to complain here
@ayu-smepai Looks nice. I like it as it is, not so overshot like some other users *looks at his and whistles >.>*

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Decided to skip the text because it got in my way too many times >,< Thx for all the feedback C&C?
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Old 2009-09-07, 14:45   Link #48
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@Urei - I don't rememer why I thought anything was missing because now I have nothing to complain at all it's just beautiful <3

@ayu-smepai - I love it it's cute and... well, it's cute
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Old 2009-09-07, 16:46   Link #49
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Moonie I won't complain about the lack of color ( anyway it's not like I can talk... ), but the elements of the background could be more present.
vandariaka & ayu-smepai, I would let it like that.
Urei maybe put a little more element on the background

Thank everyone for the comment, I reworked the brightness at a few strategic spot, C&C would be welcome.




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Old 2009-09-07, 16:48   Link #50
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@ganbaru - first but you really have to work on that text - I couldn't see it at first and then the font isn't the best choice x.x
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Old 2009-09-07, 17:05   Link #51
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urei.. I so wanted to give you c&c

You should update your signature... its 3 months overdue ^^v
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Old 2009-09-07, 22:11   Link #52
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Old 2009-09-07, 22:32   Link #53
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Old 2009-09-07, 23:38   Link #54
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@KiNA Is this perhaps any better? You speak of painful thruth, you! Didn't notice untill you pointed it out
@Cyz I'm not an expert on text, but souldn't it be a little more focused?
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Old 2009-09-08, 03:52   Link #55
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Cyz, the sig is too dark and the text need some work.
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urei.. I so wanted to give you c&c

You should update your signature... its 3 months overdue ^^v
The same way than mine is 1 month late....
As time pass, we will have more entry than remind of others themes.

EDIT: my newest versioné I reworked some of the brush's layer, the text and the brightness at few spots. C&C would be welcome.

( should I keep the white border or change it ? )
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Old 2009-09-08, 04:57   Link #56
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@Evil Rick, Urei and ganbaru - thanks for the comment and the 3 of you guys are quite right ~su.
I'll be working on the background and the colors then ~su.
Or maybe I should add some animation ~su.
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Old 2009-09-08, 05:42   Link #57
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EDIT: my newest versioné I reworked some of the brush's layer, the text and the brightness at few spots. C&C would be welcome.

( should I keep the white border or change it ? )
I didn't even know there was a border... yeah, you should change that.. and the font is still not the best ._.
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Old 2009-09-08, 08:25   Link #58
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Second draft ~su.
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