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Old 2010-08-20, 18:07   Link #261
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A new chapter starts!

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Some minor spelling mistakes and punctuation, but otherwise not bad. Misora's cowardice and trolling always appealed to me. I need to check out the fanfic in general (less sung characters = amusing reads), but Misora caught my attention.

Wow, I wonder where the sudden interest in Misora is coming from, and well, I guess I'm getting swept up in it, too. I've been wondering what an AU focused on Misora would be like--a focus on her church, her buddies, as well as how she'd see 3-A. I'd switch some roles around (Misora's specialty is speed, not massive magical power, though Cocone might have that for herself).
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Old 2010-08-21, 01:56   Link #262
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I finally managed to write a new chapter of 'Taken Day by Day'. Happy day.

Prequel
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Day 2
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Day 12

Uh... fair warning? I suck at writing action. Just.... really.

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Nice, nice!

The fight was great, enough thoughts and movement and tension to keep me riveted.

Though I thought that Zanmaken Ni-no-Tachi couldn't slice into humans, just demons? Makes sense for it to carve up Setsuna, but if Tsukuyomi had hit Konoka nothing would have happened, right?

I liked how Setsuna thought that she would have killed Tsukuyomi, but letting her bleed out wasn't right. It's an interesting fine line that shows a lot about Setsuna's character.

I'm totally fine with how it was just Setsuna and Tsukuyomi's fight that was written out in detail, since like you said, this story is just about them. Great new chapter!
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Old 2010-08-21, 04:28   Link #263
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It's not the Lawful Good way. Period.

As for the rest: Oh, that's it! I'm whipping out some good stuff now!

Spoiler for Day 2, morning:


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Old 2010-08-22, 10:30   Link #264
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Some minor spelling mistakes and punctuation, but otherwise not bad. Misora's cowardice and trolling always appealed to me. I need to check out the fanfic in general (less sung characters = amusing reads), but Misora caught my attention.
The whole thing so far (Work In progress...) can be found here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6228161/..._and_Emotional

Here's a set of short pieces I wrote before it for the TV Tropes Forum. Very possibly naughty content:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6260479/...ame_Threesomes

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It's hard to say. It's a hot topic of consideration for myself regarding my story, too (although it wouldn't happen until at least the Mundus Magicus arc anyway. But you could see some Yuri stuff before that).

Ultimately, it's up to you to decide if it fits the frame of the character development you intend to portray or not.
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Old 2010-08-22, 12:07   Link #265
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Old 2010-08-22, 13:52   Link #266
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It's hard to say. It's a hot topic of consideration for myself regarding my story, too (although it wouldn't happen until at least the Mundus Magicus arc anyway. But you could see some Yuri stuff before that).

Ultimately, it's up to you to decide if it fits the frame of the character development you intend to portray or not.
It should fit, but here's the thing: I can't really decide on the matter for myself. Personally I want them to, but my friends on Skype says otherwise. So I opened the poll to be fair about it. Since I got "permission" from Glorious Burden, an author specializing in lemon to write this, you could see where I want to go with this, but with the readers' support as well.
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Old 2010-08-22, 14:31   Link #267
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It should fit, but here's the thing: I can't really decide on the matter for myself. Personally I want them to, but my friends on Skype says otherwise. So I opened the poll to be fair about it. Since I got "permission" from Glorious Burden, an author specializing in lemon to write this, you could see where I want to go with this, but with the readers' support as well.
Hum. In that case, I'd suggest making the scenes skippable. So you can still post them elsewhere, but anyone reading the version not including them wouldn't be missing anything plot-relevant.

Unless their problem is with Negi having sex at all even if it's offscreen. In that case, all I think I can suggest is: stick to your vision and don't let anyone to deviate you from it.
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Old 2010-08-22, 17:05   Link #268
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End of a Chapter...

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And the start of another:

Spoiler for Not posted yet at FF.Net::

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Old 2010-08-23, 00:10   Link #269
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So you're saying I should let Negi and Theo have sex at the end of the fic, regardless of what my friends say, just to get good reviews?
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Old 2010-08-23, 06:51   Link #270
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Well, like I said, it's all up to you.

Fanfiction, ultimately, shouldn't be all about getting good reviews, but about getting to tell the story you want to tell. Stick to your guns, whatever they are, as long as you are sure it's the story YOU wish to tell.

If it bothers you so much, leave it vague, for the readers and the other characters to interpret. Since Negi is too much of a Gentleman to talk about it, and Theo will probably prefer to leave it vague if anyone dares to ask, it shouldn't be hard to portray it that way.
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Right then, it's settled. I've decided what to do with this.
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Old 2010-08-23, 13:52   Link #272
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I'm moving snail like for this week, I've had lots to do, work wise... but I think I finally have sometime to write for my own stories. Crack is not a new idea for me, but it certainly is a new one to write for...Kurush, do what you wish, of course. It's your story.

Just don't end up like me, ehh? I take the unpopular route a bit too much for my own good, neh?

I swear, one of these days, the way I go on, I'll be typing eighty words a minute and still calling myself slow.
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Old 2010-08-23, 19:13   Link #273
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Old 2010-08-24, 18:37   Link #274
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Continuation:

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Old 2010-08-25, 18:45   Link #275
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It goes on...

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Old 2010-08-26, 12:39   Link #276
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Finally, some work done, but it disapoints me.

Resistance Hertz, Chapter Three.

It took too long and has next to nothing funny in it. Bah! Still, it's a build up I suppose.
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Done with chapter 40 now.

This might bring me back into the loop.
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Old 2010-08-26, 19:05   Link #278
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Continuation.

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Old 2010-08-28, 22:40   Link #279
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There we go again.





Spoiler for Negi, Misora and Sayo:
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Old 2010-08-29, 16:16   Link #280
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And again...

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