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Old 2010-08-30, 15:58   Link #281
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*Hates being a word processor, but finds grammr being the only thing "wrong".*

I feel like I'm being disrespectful every time I do point out these things. Or hypocrticial...but, none~the~less.

A few small points.

- I'm certain you don't mean to say "Eva-chin."
- "hurted her": Either I'm wrong or you, but I'm pretty sure it's "hurt" here. I don't think hurted is a word.
- What kind of person is her?: I'm sure this is "she" here.

After that, I'd have to re-read to touch another point I think I missed...nope, can't see it.
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Old 2010-08-30, 18:19   Link #282
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Thanks for the technical help.

Good call on the last two, but I indeed intended to say 'Eva-chin'. I have seen the 'chin' term as a more disrespectful, condescending form of '-chan' before. For instance, Tina adresses both Mayu and Chika with that suffix in Ai Yori Aoshi.
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Old 2010-08-30, 20:34   Link #283
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Though I thought that Zanmaken Ni-no-Tachi couldn't slice into humans, just demons? Makes sense for it to carve up Setsuna, but if Tsukuyomi had hit Konoka nothing would have happened, right?
I think it slices through pretty much whatever the user wishes it to. Rakan destroys a rock when he's showing it to Negi, Tsukuyomi uses it against Fate (though it is Fate, so...), and Gödel destroys the Knights' clothing with it.

*searches briefly* Ah, here we go.

Gödel: In the proper hands, it can have any number of uses. (ch. 254)

Right... new chapter from me now.

Prequel
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Day 1
Day 2
Day 6
Day 7
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Day -17

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Old 2010-08-30, 23:27   Link #284
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Old 2010-08-30, 23:32   Link #285
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going to go massive X-over? or?
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Old 2010-08-31, 17:40   Link #286
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No massive x-overs by now, although you'll get the sense these characters exist in some sort of shared universe.

By the time the Mahorafest starts, however, all the school might get involved. With everything that involves, probably.
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Old 2010-08-31, 21:54   Link #287
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Conclusion of this chapter...

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Old 2010-09-01, 04:12   Link #288
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Oh, now I'm back and I'm bad. Here's another part of Nodoka's adventures on Tu'narath.

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With that in mind, what school do you propose that Nodoka should specialize in?

As well as your thoughts?
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Old 2010-09-02, 15:15   Link #289
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Old 2010-09-02, 23:53   Link #290
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Another chapter starts---

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Old 2010-09-03, 00:50   Link #291
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Old 2010-09-03, 22:55   Link #293
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Old 2010-09-04, 00:24   Link #294
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Old 2010-09-04, 16:07   Link #295
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Finally, I am back, because of Internet Explorer is acting up and refuses to open. I have therefore decided to switch to Mozilla Firefox, instead.

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instead of leveling her shortcommings i'd say it would be much more logical to improve her strong suits, since she arguebly have some strength in those, one way or another ... therefore its honestly no question in my book ... Divination with Evocation as prohibted
Well, I've given that some thought myself.

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Old 2010-09-04, 23:44   Link #296
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Old 2010-09-05, 15:15   Link #297
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Yes, this thing still is on:

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Old 2010-09-06, 15:04   Link #298
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hmm ... anyone have an idea about what i should jump for a good Fanfic exploring Yue/Nodoka ... without Negi as a (dominating or even active) third wheel? ... from my tries to find some i've failed and honestly my creativity sucks to hard at stuff like that to dare going down on writing one myself
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Old 2010-09-06, 22:35   Link #299
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Pairing Negi up with someone else first is a must. Then have the girls... finding solace... on each other. That would be my suggestion.

Anyway, here's more of my stuff. I wish you good luck with yours.

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Old 2010-09-07, 01:23   Link #300
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@Merctrin: Crap, I realized that I haven't reviewed your latest chapter yet @_@. I'll get on that!

Speaking of things that I haven't gotten on lately, I've finally finished Chapter VII . This one was tough, it just wouldn't come until the last few days when inspiration struck.

Love and Duty Come in Chains

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