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Old 2010-12-09, 19:44   Link #401
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Hey everybody. Overmaster recommended this board for getting some more input on my writing, so I though I'd drop by.

My fanfiction.net account is here, for those who are interested.

Now I have to go familiarize myself with the stuff that's been posted in this thread.
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Old 2010-12-09, 20:43   Link #402
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Hey everybody. Overmaster recommended this board for getting some more input on my writing, so I though I'd drop by.

My fanfiction.net account is here, for those who are interested.

Now I have to go familiarize myself with the stuff that's been posted in this thread.
I see you're the one who made Artifact Abuse, nice stuff. And what's this? Almost all Negima fics? Hmm, gonna be a nice way for me to spend some free time...
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Old 2010-12-09, 20:56   Link #403
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Yeah, Artifact Abuse and Nerima are probably the two most infamous ones.

Glad to here that somebody here is at least aware of it. Thanks, by the way.

Right now I'm looking for more feedback on that Christmas story, mainly because I want to get it done before Christmas.

Any thoughts on Nerima would also be appreciated. I'm still looking for that ideal balance between sticking to the events of the manga, and modifying them. I still haven't decided exactly how far off the rails I want to go. I've been experimenting more with different viewpoints, which I think keeps it from being too same-y when compared to the source material. Any thoughts would be great.

And yeah, I have a lot of Negima stories. I have some ideas for stuff involving other works, but they keep getting stuck in the brainstorming stages.

I look forward to seeing what you think of my other stories.
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Old 2010-12-10, 06:03   Link #404
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...I think I'll leave the backlog for another day.

For now, here's a new chapter of Taken Day by Day.

Prequel
Prologue
Day 1
Day 2
Day 6
Day 7
Day 11
Day 12
Day -17
Day 14
Day 18
Day 22
Day 23

Spoiler for Day 29:

Spoiler for Notes:

Thanks for reading!

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Old 2010-12-10, 23:30   Link #405
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Birthday Gifts, Part 3:

Spoiler for The Cake is not a Lie:


Yes, I know Nagi most likely didn't ever kiss any of his manly Ala Rubra pals. Yeah. Sure. Creative license. That.
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Old 2010-12-11, 01:30   Link #406
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Well, this can only end in disaster.


I'll probably get the next chapter of the Christmas story uploaded and posted here tomorrow sometime.
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Old 2010-12-11, 09:16   Link #407
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Oh, boy. I wish I was in Negi's situation on that one minus the vampire in the closet and the girls on the balcony and the drunk dog in the showers.
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Old 2010-12-11, 11:02   Link #408
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Okay, Chapter 2 of The Night Ala Alba Saved Christmas is up.

Chapter one is here, for those who want the background info.

Reviews are welcome.

After this I'll start posting my writing in chunks, like OverMaster has been doing.

EDIT: Here's the beginning of chapter 3.

Spoiler for Next section of the Christmas Story:
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Old 2010-12-12, 16:03   Link #409
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Two mini crackfics:

Spoiler for Insane (Literally!) Crossover::

Spoiler for Dammit, Ken, just Finish the Damn Arc already. Unless this gets to happen::
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Old 2010-12-12, 18:19   Link #410
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Next very small section of the Christmas story:

Spoiler for Christmas:
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Old 2010-12-13, 16:56   Link #411
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Okay, now I need to catch up.

Straight from the coming chapter 5 of the honeymoon.

Spoiler for Negi's talk with Argenta:


Spoiler for Notes:


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Old 2010-12-13, 17:55   Link #412
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I'm not entirely familiar with the rest of the story, so I really can't make a useful comment. I didn't see anything wrong with it, though

Anyway, here's a really weird short thing I wrote in response to a comment on the TvTropes Negima forum. I won't say anything else because it would spoil the surprise.

Spoiler for OH YEAH:
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Old 2010-12-14, 14:39   Link #413
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Well, you can look it up here if you want to know the full story behind that behavior. I would also like it if you voted on the poll in my profile, it's for the main story.
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Old 2010-12-14, 17:49   Link #414
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Wow, you wrote a lot of stuff... It'll be quite a while before I have anything that long... I wish I had more time to go through it all...

Anyway, here's the next section of that Christmas story; this should finish up chapter 3.

Spoiler for Christmas:


EDIT: Chapter 3 is uploaded.
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Old 2010-12-16, 21:20   Link #415
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New chapter of More than Fifty Four...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6260479/...ame_Threesomes
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Old 2010-12-19, 17:43   Link #416
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New chapter of Unequally Rational and Emotional:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6228161/..._and_Emotional
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Old 2010-12-20, 02:44   Link #417
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6228161/..._and_Emotional
Hmm... mind telling the full story behind Misa's artifact? You know, for completely author business-ish like affairs? For future references and notes?
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Old 2010-12-20, 05:23   Link #418
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I like this one the best:
Spoiler for :
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Old 2010-12-20, 18:04   Link #419
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Hmm... mind telling the full story behind Misa's artifact? You know, for completely author business-ish like affairs? For future references and notes?
I actually took the idea from the Negima?! anime series. I mixed the design of her Armor card and Artifact with the Cosplay card's inscription. I made the needles light-based ones so they could pass through forcefields; I actually took the idea from a Grant Morrison JLA story where the microscopic Atom can pass through Darkseid's forcefields because he could see through them, meaning light passed through them.


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I like this one the best:
Ah, SCM added that one. I had Hakase fixing Chachamaru in class before, and this is a continuity where the accepted public weirdness scale is a bit higher than in the manga, so I assumed it'd be fair to assume Iincho is sharp enough to notice Chacha's true nature. The likes of the Baka Rangers (minus Yue) probably are dense enough to NOT get it yet, though.
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Old 2010-12-20, 22:52   Link #420
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Chapter 4 of that Christmas thing I'm writing. I wish I had a little more time to work on it. I had to rush it a little.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6533509/...aved_Christmas
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