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Old 2010-07-12, 16:06   Link #81
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Old 2010-07-12, 19:05   Link #82
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I think you need to dull the sharpes of the fireworks they look TOO sharp Good idea though, he's definitely flying
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Old 2010-07-12, 20:59   Link #83
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thank you very much White Manju Bun and Evil Rick
2nd version: change the border, remove some vectors and add outer glow effect for the wings
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Old 2010-07-13, 09:21   Link #84
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My not very good and rather late first attempt:



I need lots of c&c please
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Old 2010-07-13, 09:52   Link #85
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Softened the fireworks some.

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Old 2010-07-13, 15:03   Link #86
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thank you very much White Manju Bun and Evil Rick
2nd version: change the border, remove some vectors and add outer glow effect for the wings
(sorry for my bad english ")
Don't really like the ant-file border. :/

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My not very good and rather late first attempt:



I need lots of c&c please
Perhaps too much blue, specially on the lower part.

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Softened the fireworks some.

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Sorry but technically speaking it's imposible for anyonw to flu just at the side of a firework, in this case, the green one which is at the left side of Astroboy, having it on top of the Astroboy render makes the sig unreal (and a bit absurd), also, there are no fireworks with such sntrong bright colors (as pure red or green) normally, fireworks are a bright white with an outher glow of the especific color.
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Old 2010-07-13, 15:28   Link #87
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Naoto, it's still rather loaded... maybe tonning a little down the rainbow near the fairie ?
Haladflire65 The effects is soo hard than it look like than the rendre is on it
LKK as Evil Rick said, the firework could be more realistic
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Old 2010-07-13, 17:05   Link #88
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@Halad, I like it but it does look a bit dark, espc on the left side.
@Sensei, Im inclined to agree with Rick, I was hoping theyd look a bit more realistic if softened but the red, green and yellow jump out far too much. I like the white ones in the background, they look like actual fireworks to me.
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Old 2010-07-13, 20:09   Link #89
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Thanks for the critique, everyone

Ver. 2


I made the left side a bit brighter, changed a font and lessened the effects a bit, also changed the filter settings.

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Old 2010-07-14, 12:56   Link #90
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Thanks for the critique, everyone

Ver. 2


I made the left side a bit brighter, changed a font and lessened the effects a bit, also changed the filter settings.

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Yeah, looks a lot more clear, good work on it.
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Old 2010-07-15, 01:19   Link #91
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Old 2010-07-15, 01:54   Link #92
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Yeah, looks a lot more clear, good work on it.
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Hmm, I don't really think the font fits very well, and the signature looks really low-quality overall. I'd also add a border

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Old 2010-07-15, 14:03   Link #93
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Not sure about the colors for the hearts or the font, as sugested it may also need a border.
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Old 2010-07-16, 01:28   Link #94
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another drafts:
i need more advice what kind of font should i use, so, c&c?

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Old 2010-07-16, 17:05   Link #95
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I reworked the colored fireworks. Comments?
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Old 2010-07-16, 17:46   Link #96
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I reworked the colored fireworks. Comments?
I really love this one you worked out, better then the others.
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Old 2010-07-16, 21:18   Link #97
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To further expand on this rule:[indent]2A. Unless proven otherwise, all entries made by contestants are derivatives of works made by someone else. Thus, no claim of "ownership" shall be made in reference to the image(s) used in the signature entry.

2B. Misrepresenting someone else's signature work for your own is prohibited and will result in an immediate expulsion of the entry and disqualify the contestant from the current month's contest.
What? So, if I draw my own art for this contest, I'm gonna be hounded as a theif and/or require "proof" I made it? Because I have no idea how to make/find vectors, so if I enter, I'll be drawing. However, I don't want people thinking I'm stealing just because I don't acknowledge that I'm grabbing vectors from other artists like most everyone else is.
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Old 2010-07-16, 21:25   Link #98
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What? So, if I draw my own art for this contest, I'm gonna be hounded as a theif and/or require "proof" I made it? Because I have no idea how to make/find vectors, so if I enter, I'll be drawing. However, I don't want people thinking I'm stealing just because I don't acknowledge that I'm grabbing vectors from other artists like most everyone else is.
No, no, you're missunderstanding, the rule refers that you must not claim an image or stock used for the entry to be your creation unless you can prov it.

As example: I submit an entry with this image:

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And I claim that I made the stock image when it's not true. That's what the rule refers.

In various previous months, some designers used their own drawings and no entry was disqualified.
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Old 2010-07-16, 21:43   Link #99
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And how would I prove it? >.> Link to my DeviantArt page?
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Old 2010-07-16, 21:47   Link #100
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And how would I prove it? >.> Link to my DeviantArt page?
Yeah, that's something I guess.
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