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Old 2010-12-05, 17:09   Link #1
MasterKakashi
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The End of the Universe

I have posted this story on two other forums, and it started a good discussion on one of them. Some of you may consider this as a lot of reading, but in order to post a sensible question or comment you will need to read the whole story. If a mod feels that this thread should be deleted for any reason, I would appreciate it if you would notify me first.

This story is about a world where humans and fictional characters (toons) exist. Basically our current world still exists, but with the addition of toons living here as well. So the simpsons live in springfield illinois, naruto lives out in japan somewhere, and the star wars galaxy is not to far away. The story is about the world ending due to the alignment of the planets. I sorta got the idea from that 2012 movie. Down below is the actual story. The story is kinda lengthy, but I suggest you read the whole thing. The story starts in the year 2009. By "toons" I mean cartoon characters,anime characters, video game characters etc.
The End of the Universe
A coruscanti scientist named Holando Nomen, was studying the stars one night when he notices several differences in some of the stars that he had not noticed before. He goes to his lab deep under the surface of coruscant and finds that the changes in the stars are effecting the planets core. He reads through several books on theory, and one book seems to say that the end of the world will take place once the stars begin to heat planet cores. It says that natural disasters will begin to take place once the planets of every galaxy are aligned. Being an astronomer, Holando knows a lot about the planets of the galaxy, but never before have all the planets in all the galaxies been aligned. So Holando sends probe droids to five planets in the star wars galaxy, five planets in another galaxy, and Earth. Each of the droids reveal that the planet cores are all hotter than normal, and that calculations say that the planets in these galaxies have a high chance of being aligned in the next two or three years. Holando Nomen then begins to believe that this is a universal crisis, and he gets the message to the jedi council.

With the information, the jedi council decided to call a mass meeting of planetary and national officials from the three galaxies, and master Yoda spoke to the 1 million present leaders of establishments in the universe and gave them the news. During this meeting, it was decided that massive transports capable of dimensional travel should be built in order to preserve the existence of the species in the universe. They decide to build the transports on earth in a desert region of China. They hire Asian, Geonosian, and Galvin workers (A Galvin is the little grey alien species from Ben 10) to construct them. Yoda was put in charge of deciding the majority of what would be preserved, but little did he know that tickets to board the ship were being sold to pay the workers. By the year 2013, 10 arks had been built, with one more well on the way to completion. But also in the year 2013, the planets of the galaxy had aligned, and natural disasters had begun to occur. The boarding process then had to begin, as people from all over the universe boarded the 10 transports in order to be transported to another dimension to start a new world.

In order to board a transport, a person would need a ticket.

Red Ticket-Leader:These tickets were given to leaders (Kings,Presidents,Prime Ministers,Hokages, etc) for free.

Pink Tickets-Reproducers:These tickets were given to individuals who would be the primary reproducers for their species/race/ethnicity.

Green Tickets-These tickets were given to those who were willing to pay high amounts of money (trillions and billions).

Blue Tickets-These tickets were given to those who were needed for preserving (teachers,doctors,scientists).

Well thats about it. I will begin the discussion by asking a question.

What species do you think they would focus more on preserving?
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Old 2010-12-05, 18:44   Link #2
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This story is about a world where humans and fictional characters (toons) exist.
Sorry stopped reading right there :/
Thought this was something serious about our universe ending, it reminds me of Justice League Crisis on Two Earths
Preserving animals pickings isn't easy since all is in balance with one another, many cannot survive without another vital species which rely yet again on another, plants or animal certain rock salts etc. they cannot survive without another.
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Old 2010-12-06, 05:28   Link #3
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1) What is this, some sort of Dalek plan to use a reality bomb?
2) This premise is just stupid. If you want a Noah's arc, you save a bit of each.
3) Why do you need to resort to toons and jedis and not be original? Or at least use different names for the same thing.
4) Galactus prequel deja vu!
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Old 2010-12-07, 20:14   Link #4
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Lol, the first website I put this on was the only one that gave me a discussion. I guess I wont get that type of response everywhere.

If by December 14th this thread doesn't gain any disscussion, then a mod can delete it.
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Old 2010-12-08, 02:51   Link #5
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There is nothing to talk about dear. You are trying to make a Kindom Hearts story with Simpsons and Jedis and everything is based on tickets. Does not sound good at all.
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Old 2010-12-08, 18:36   Link #6
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Did anyone actually read the story? Oh and I actually got disscussion from the people on Talknaruto.com, so I guess its not the story, just the people whom I present it to.

But no worries, a mod can go ahead and delete this.
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