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Old 2010-12-26, 12:57   Link #21
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How about a series where there is this one guy, and he is surrounded by mostly girls. Plot doesn't matter.

I'll make millions.
It already is. It's called the porn industry...
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Old 2010-12-27, 18:06   Link #22
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How about a series where there is this one guy, and he is surrounded by mostly girls. Plot doesn't matter.

I'll make millions.
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How about a series where there is one girl surrounded by mostly boys. Plot doesn't matter either (isn't it like that in most animes anyways?)
Fruit Basket...

Frankly, the hole premise can be as superficial as you can get, as long as the presentation value is high.

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Might as well,
  • great has-been for martial arts master finds abandoned demon girl
  • raises her with the help of his pessimistic wannabe disciple to "human standards"
  • girl is weak to daylight, and has affinity to dark places, also immune to fire
  • girl is weaker then disciple dude
  • girl has pet crow
  • girl grows up to become demon hunter (demons don't have conscience so...)
  • turns old worthless martial arts master had a even more worthless son
  • worthless-son dies... leaves behind monster loan; money he borrowed using his father's (former) status
  • worthless-master is now not-so-happy inheritor to his sons loan, and guardian of his son's lazy-bumb for a daughter
  • (its been 20 years since he found her) master adopts the demon girl and appoints her guardian of his sons daughter; thus freeing himself from the obligations of his son
  • now it falls on the two girls to pay the loan... somehow
  • to make matters worse (or better) the loan has been split into smaller monthly payments
  • every month the payment goes up (so as to meet the "maximum time for return" set for the loan -- counting for when useless-son first made it ages ago)
  • ...insert the girls swindling, robbing, pillaging, selling, treasure hunting in a attempt to pay back the loan. Each arc covers exactly 1 month; and time is not relative; the current time and time it took for events to happen is "hinted" (always).
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Old 2010-12-29, 00:46   Link #23
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What we need is less bishonen tragedy's and "epic" fight animes.
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Old 2010-12-29, 17:24   Link #24
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What we need is a lot more bishonen with "epic" fights

Fixed It for you Mr's Otaku~
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Old 2010-12-31, 02:34   Link #25
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What we need is a lot more bishonen with "epic" fights
Fixed It for you Mr's Otaku~
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Old 2010-12-31, 19:28   Link #26
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Fixed It for you Mr's Otaku~
No, I mean it. Too many novels have been sold because of the handsome guy or the epic explosion on the front. All I want is a decent story with memorable characters.
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Old 2010-12-31, 19:38   Link #27
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No, I mean it. Too many novels have been sold because of the handsome guy or the epic explosion on the front. All I want is a decent story with memorable characters.
I might pick up the novel and look at it bcuz of the bishonen guy..put if the story boreds me to death or any reason I hate it for. I am gonna put it to side...
I'm not good at reading novels =_=.. It takes me along time to get it done..
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Old 2010-12-31, 19:48   Link #28
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I might pick up the novel and look at it bcuz of the bishonen guy..put if the story boreds me to death or any reason I hate it for. I am gonna put it to side...
I'm not good at reading novels =_=.. It takes me along time to get it done..
But It's not the novel I have a problem with, it's the eye-candy on front to make up for a lack of story. expl:Bleach
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Old 2010-12-31, 20:43   Link #29
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But It's not the novel I have a problem with, it's the eye-candy on front to make up for a lack of story. expl:Bleach

At least it doesnt look crappy, no mangaka wants there character to have a crappy intro on the front.

As for you on the lack of story, (this goes for almost everyone) ppl are just to picky these days on the whole "story" thing. Nothing impresses them. If something in the story doesn't tell you more about something don't freak out >_< that just shows that they can always go back and keep on the story going.. and keep the anime alive. But no one appreciates that.
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Old 2010-12-31, 20:58   Link #30
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At least it doesnt look crappy, no mangaka wants there character to have a crappy intro on the front.

As for you on the lack of story, (this goes for almost everyone) ppl are just to picky these days on the whole "story" thing. Nothing impresses them. If something in the story doesn't tell you more about something don't freak out >_< that just shows that they can always go back and keep on the story going.. and keep the anime alive. But no one appreciates that.
True... but everyone has individual tastes and I feel not many manga or anime reaches toward my demographic.
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Old 2011-01-01, 04:12   Link #31
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I don't plan on writing this as I'm terrible at writing fiction.

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Old 2011-01-01, 04:38   Link #32
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I don't plan on writing this as I'm terrible at writing fiction.

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Thats really interesting o.o I got hooked on reading it and even visited the dream world for a minute....OH!
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Old 2011-01-01, 04:43   Link #33
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I don't plan on writing this as I'm terrible at writing fiction.

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I must say, that is actually a quite beautiful idea here.

Romance: 9/10 (Its a beautiful combination between the two, as they both need each other in a certain way, and as they slowly continue on through life through their first encounter. Even with all these difficulties of being invisible, or being paraplegic, they still find a way to grow feelings for one another.)

Comedy: 7/10 (I can see where the comedy will go like If the invisible guy pushes the girl's chair, people will think her chair is actually moving and since he can turn things invisible, he can do... Quite disturbing things )

Slice of Life: N/A (Can't think of any Slice of Life ideas)

Supernatural: 6/10 (Invisible guy that can turn anything he touches invisible, girl that has a special ability to see him. Works perfectly)
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Old 2011-01-01, 05:01   Link #34
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Thats really interesting o.o I got hooked on reading it and even visited the dream world for a minute....OH!
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I must say, that is actually a quite beautiful idea here.

Romance: 9/10 (Its a beautiful combination between the two, as they both need each other in a certain way, and as they slowly continue on through life through their first encounter. Even with all these difficulties of being invisible, or being paraplegic, they still find a way to grow feelings for one another.)

Comedy: 7/10 (I can see where the comedy will go like If the invisible guy pushes the girl's chair, people will think her chair is actually moving and since he can turn things invisible, he can do... Quite disturbing things )

Slice of Life: N/A (Can't think of any Slice of Life ideas)

Supernatural: 6/10 (Invisible guy that can turn anything he touches invisible, girl that has a special ability to see him. Works perfectly)
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Well, I msuppose I might as well throw out this idea, if only to post the link to it and get more hits... or at least, get some backfeed about the idea

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and this is only one of many stories I have planned for the named character... that's what I get for reading too many novels/watching too much anime
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Old 2011-01-01, 05:34   Link #36
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That's sounds like a beautiful story Tempester. 10/10 (The boy is actually just her imaginary friend right?)

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So it's about a daughter magus who mind controlos desert something and seeks immortality.... uh...

I think it needs to be simplified a bit to make it more accessible. Also maybe it's just me but character having multiple "focus in life" ie. immortality, conquer the world etc. seems a little hard to grasp. Also, there are a lot of people who hate mind control abilities -- since it's really cheap .
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Heh... I still didn't put the cheapest part. But basically, there's about 3 plotlines running in the story, since I still excluded some stuff. This is where you can see the fantasy novel influence- multiple storylines running that all converge together

And it probably doesn't help that I was somewhat intoxicated and extremely tired when I posted it... I'll write up a better summary when I'm 100% sober and well-rested
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Old 2011-01-01, 05:59   Link #38
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Heh... I still didn't put the cheapest part. But basically, there's about 3 plotlines running in the story, since I still excluded some stuff. This is where you can see the fantasy novel influence- multiple storylines running that all converge together

And it probably doesn't help that I was somewhat intoxicated and extremely tired when I posted it... I'll write up a better summary when I'm 100% sober and well-rested
Looking forward to it.
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Old 2011-01-01, 05:59   Link #39
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Heh... I still didn't put the cheapest part. But basically, there's about 3 plotlines running in the story, since I still excluded some stuff. This is where you can see the fantasy novel influence- multiple storylines running that all converge together

And it probably doesn't help that I was somewhat intoxicated and extremely tired when I posted it... I'll write up a better summary when I'm 100% sober and well-rested
Enjoying New Year's party too much

Well it sorta does sound alot better when you say its divided into 3 stories, but it could be better if you can separate them.
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Old 2011-01-01, 14:05   Link #40
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An idea I've had...
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I want to know what you think and if any ideas spring to mind.
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