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Frankly, the hole premise can be as superficial as you can get, as long as the presentation value is high. [edit] Might as well,
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I'm not good at reading novels =_=.. It takes me along time to get it done..
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At least it doesnt look crappy, no mangaka wants there character to have a crappy intro on the front. As for you on the lack of story, (this goes for almost everyone) ppl are just to picky these days on the whole "story" thing. Nothing impresses them. If something in the story doesn't tell you more about something don't freak out >_< that just shows that they can always go back and keep on the story going.. and keep the anime alive. But no one appreciates that.
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Romance: 9/10 (Its a beautiful combination between the two, as they both need each other in a certain way, and as they slowly continue on through life through their first encounter. Even with all these difficulties of being invisible, or being paraplegic, they still find a way to grow feelings for one another.) Comedy: 7/10 (I can see where the comedy will go like If the invisible guy pushes the girl's chair, people will think her chair is actually moving and since he can turn things invisible, he can do... Quite disturbing things )Slice of Life: N/A (Can't think of any Slice of Life ideas) Supernatural: 6/10 (Invisible guy that can turn anything he touches invisible, girl that has a special ability to see him. Works perfectly)
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Well, I msuppose I might as well throw out this idea, if only to post the link to it and get more hits... or at least, get some backfeed about the idea
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and this is only one of many stories I have planned for the named character... that's what I get for reading too many novels/watching too much anime
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@ Tempester
That's sounds like a beautiful story Tempester. 10/10 (The boy is actually just her imaginary friend right?) So it's about a daughter magus who mind controlos desert something and seeks immortality.... uh... ![]() I think it needs to be simplified a bit to make it more accessible. Also maybe it's just me but character having multiple "focus in life" ie. immortality, conquer the world etc. seems a little hard to grasp. Also, there are a lot of people who hate mind control abilities -- since it's really cheap .
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Heh... I still didn't put the cheapest part. But basically, there's about 3 plotlines running in the story, since I still excluded some stuff. This is where you can see the fantasy novel influence- multiple storylines running that all converge together
And it probably doesn't help that I was somewhat intoxicated and extremely tired when I posted it... I'll write up a better summary when I'm 100% sober and well-rested
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Well it sorta does sound alot better when you say its divided into 3 stories, but it could be better if you can separate them.
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