2006-11-28, 22:46 | Link #21 |
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Sometimes I draw with pencil on paper and then use this particular pen to outline them... I use this only because I don't know what esle to get, it's not particularly amazing. It's Sakura Pigma Micron.
But I suck at outlining with a pen; most of the time I am a lot better at getting outlines with pencils. However there's the obvious problem of it not being permanent, and I'm rather bad at using tracing paper without a lightbox (which I obviously don't have). So sometimes I draw it in pencil to get a good idea of the pose and layout and expression and then clean it up by outlining on the computer - by drawing it out with the Brush tool. Can be very painstaking. And usually ends up as a failure. A few years ago I used to use the pen tool in Photoshop (never touched Illustrator) and make a rasterised "fake vector" outline. For example, this is what I did when I was 14. I coloured it a bit, and never finished it, but I learned a lot trying to do the outlines here. But my way of doing things was rather tedious and I got too lazy to use that method anymore. Sometimes I draw straight onto the computer but it usually looks bad because a. Photoshop simply isn't meant for that sort of thing (should get Painter one of these days already) and b. I've been using a tablet since 2003 but I still can't use it properly. Now and then I wonder if it's because it's A6 that lines won't come out as smooth as I like, but it's probably just me. I think the method I'm most comfortable with now is the first one. And I think CS2 isn't a big improvement over Photoshop 7 and 7 not a big one over 6 either, but I use 7 because that's what's here though I'm perfectly fine with 6 too.
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2006-11-29, 23:57 | Link #22 |
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Ok here is my latest drawing . . .Last night I couldn't sleep so I decided to stay up and just draw . . . . so at uhh . . . well . . . 1:30 am I drew this and did all the digital work around 3:00 am . . . . I was tired but not tired enough to draw . . . I lost track of time
Like the last drawing I posted, I did not ink it, so it came out different due to the fact I also shaded with my pencil . . . . so here it is . . . Lastly I want to apologize for the Japanese text, thier is a 80% chance I got it wrong. More than likely I put the words backwards or something. I tend to do stupid things like that http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...Drawing2-1.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...Drawing2-2.jpg http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...E/Drawing2.jpg So yeah that's it . . . . I think it is the best I've done, but still, there is much I still have to learn and improve upon . . . |
2006-11-30, 10:08 | Link #24 |
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I did a little redline to show some of the things I could point out in there.
http://www.kidoutenshi.net/random/Drawing2-1[1].jpg When you have a position like that, the face will contract back and the nose and mouth will be drawn a little lower than normal, and you got that just right. However, the eyes also are drawn a little bit lower, and eyebrows a bit above them. Remember also that the top line of the eye usually matches the top edge of the ears, so they're not that high up. Normally, the lower area of the jawline that connects to the rest of the face is as high as the tip of the nose, note that for further reference, and so the nose is usually a bit lower than that same line when viewed from an angle above. Also, the top part of the head that gets exposed in that kind of angle is normally as wide as the top area of the face, and it's good to draw a circle first to get the basic idea of how it's going to look, especially for girls. And note the little left-bent curve I drew on the viewer's left side of her neck. It's like I said the other day, when the face moves using the neck as an axis, the neck is maleable enough to bend in or out, depending on the motion. The shoulderline should also be a little higher, and remember that it's normally 1-and-a-half of the head for each side of the shoulder, although it will depend on your style, especially in Anime. Besides that and the proportion part, I don't anything else that I can point out, just practice and practice, and you'll kick ass in no time.
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2006-11-30, 10:30 | Link #25 |
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Zero... wow... you are really good. Impressive!
Gundam, I just finished a tutorial for you that may help you out about drawing correct proportions of the Selena's face. I hope it helps! How to draw a proportional face Tutorial Cheers! Rod |
2006-11-30, 15:27 | Link #26 |
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WOW Thanks everybody for the awesome feedback!
HA yeah I knew I made the neck too long when I finished it but It was 3:00 am and I had done so much work . . . once I get the proportions right then I think I can send out some better drawings . . . like I said I've only been drawing the human face for like 2 weeks now so I still have a lot to learn. I will take into considerations everything everyone has said and I promise my next drawing I post will be better! Thanks again for all the feedback |
2006-11-30, 16:12 | Link #28 | |
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And sometimes, even little tips can make SUCH a difference, like the jawline-nose and eyeline-top of the ear I talked about in that last post. It just takes some time and practice to get used to using them and paying attention, and after some time, they become completely automatic. One of the things that I realized diminishes my ability to draw in more than 50% is the fact that I don't pay close attention to anything - I don't study people on the street, I don't pay attention to how a tall building appears when I look from below, I don't analyze how the branches of a tree connect to its trunk, so when I try doing something more elaborate, I have small or no idea of how they are in the real world. Professional artists study everything, even the smallest things no one would notice, but that do make a difference when you look at them, just like the usage of blue, instead of navy, for a shadow, will give you a different feeling. I think that not being a good observer is something to avoid when you're trying to improve your drawing. Aaaalso, if you draw in a common table, I find it easier to adjust my chair so that I have a higher angle of sight of the paper. Because that, if you look at your drawing from a small angle, things might appear and feel right, but when you look at it perpendicularly, you might realize that your proportions may be wrong, this and that. And I feel glad to help and to share what I learned with you and everyone else, and I think a lot of people in these boards think the same way.
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2006-11-30, 16:30 | Link #30 |
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Well . . . . I do a lot of observing . . . . once I put my mind to creating something weither it be on the computer, paper, or a 3D model . . . I start to analyze everything that has similar attrubutes to it . . . . like when I wanted to make a CG city buldings I looked at every picture I could get my hands on to see how each building differered and how I could make different variations using the same rectangle . . . . just an example though . . . . me being in College and going for a degree in Animation I kind of have a default mode to take a closer look at things and observe stuff closlely . . . .
I now have a passion and a HUGE desire to draw Anime . . . I already have a talent for the CG side of things (which i still have a lot to learn as well) . . . . but drawing has opened so many new Challenges and really cool things to try out . . . . just like the computer CG, practice is what it will take for me to get where I want to go . . . . the last picture I drew was like only my 30th drawing . . . . I don't think I have even made 50 drawings yet . . . . . What is even more encouraging is I keep all my drawings and I look back on my first drawing I did like 2 weeks ago and I say: "wow that is REALLY BAD, I have come a long way already". |
2006-11-30, 23:07 | Link #31 |
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That is true . . . . when I finish a drawing I think it looks terribble . . . . I see all these problems I think it has . . . . then I come back later and it looks ok . . . . I get so involved into my drawings I tend to make more problems than there really is.
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2006-11-30, 23:36 | Link #32 |
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Ok . . . . here is my first attempt of drawing arms and hands . . . even though she is far away it was very hard to make everything even look decent . . . . I think I made the head too big but I have been staring at it for a while so maybe it is not as bad as I think . . . . at least the buildings in the background look cool lol
This will be my last drawing that I will post until I improve significantly and can get my drawings closer to looking like Relena . . . She is not going to be the only person I draw . . . . I just want to focus on one character and get it right before i go jumping around creating my own characters or start some other project . . . . . I have got to get the proportiaons correct and I have got to learn to draw hands . . . ::sigh:: I am going to take a break tonight from drawing, I hink I am melting the lead in my pencil because I have been drawing so much lol Cropped Version: http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...E/Drawing3.jpg Original Version: http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n...Drawing3-1.jpg |
2006-12-01, 21:43 | Link #33 |
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Gundam Zero Force, the body is still too small~ But don't worry, it's a big improvement from your first posted pic~ ^^
Generally, for the hand, it's a semi-oval shape for the hand with te thumb attached to the base of the oval. Then the fingers on top. Spoiler:
Here's some stuff I found bookmarked in my IMG resources tab, maybe it can be of help ^^ http://www.blazedent.com/tutorial_1_3.php Zero Shinohara: That's some nice redlining~ I hope you can correct mine too if I ever do something and not be too lazy to post it ^^; Last edited by celcius; 2006-12-01 at 21:59. |
2006-12-02, 00:15 | Link #34 |
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well . . Either the body is too small or the head is too big . . . . LOL
I think I made the head too big . . . but I see your point . . . the head where it is positioned would mean the body should be bigger . . . .oh gosh I can't wait till I get it right . . . . . |
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However, her left arm ( from the viewer's POV ) is a little too far from the body. Or rather, her torso is too small. Because the breasts start at the same height as the lower part of the arm, it's normally a good idea to bring her chest a little bit down and enlarge it to the sides. Now, I know that sometimes doing breasts can be a pain, because most of the time, you don't want to make them too big. However, even with small breasts, the ribcage would still appear behind the arms. To show more or less how it is: Spoiler:
( I did those in like, 5 minutes and I'm poor with anatomy, so please don't kill me. ) Now, to her hands. Hands are by far the most difficult part to draw along feet, in my opinion. So take your time studying them. They work just how celcius posted above, an oval-shaped form that does not bend, except for the thumb area. It takes time mastering it, so it's just practice. Also, one thing I realized is that you have a pretty good sense of perspective, so that's awesome. Next time, just choose a point of view to draw your buildings from. For example, you choose a point in or outside the paper and then draw guidelines from that point into various areas of your drawing, and then use those to draw your buildings. It's a great tool. And using a ruler to make your straight edges and lines makes every drawing much better. Though I understand why you might not want to post more, I'd encourage that, since sometimes it's through feedback that we can improve. Here's the redline I made: http://www.kidoutenshi.net/random/Dr...;1]redline.jpg I chose to change the hands a little bit, because I just don't like drawing them from profile, but the basics is the same, although I think yours has a better flow to the picture than mine. Quote:
And sure, I'll be glad to redline for you when you get the chance to post. Or rather, you might need to redline for me, I don't know Still, I got interested in how to draw that sort of position, so I doodled a bit on Photoshop and came up with this crap: Spoiler:
It was pretty quick too, so I guess that result is to be expected. It would've been a nice picture if I ever finished anything, lol.
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Wait, of which one are you talking about?
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2006-12-02, 03:17 | Link #38 |
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Well, just don't come to me and ask how you look if you're cosplaying as Great Saiyaman, cause it might not be pretty.
I have that sort of personality, I guess. I normally say what sincerely think, which is good, but sometimes bad in some circumstances. Like, for example, the day I worked as a volunteer in a Democrat convention, by recommendation of my Composition instructor. I was, later, asked "Did you enjoy the presentations? ^^" And I said "Not really, I think some of these guys are nuts". I had to struggle like hell to get a nice grade after that.
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2006-12-02, 03:30 | Link #39 |
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Ov coursu, we're on teh interwebs!
Thing is, I've realized that it's better to assume responsibility for what you believe than just run from it. Of course, certain things you should keep to yourself, but others you're free to say - if people aren't pleased by it, then it's their problem for not accepting your opinion. Anyway, it's almost 4 AM, and I need to get some sleep. Take care guys.
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