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BlackGaruda
2015-04-09, 04:58
”It's a fairly new series which started on January 2 but is ranked overall first on the quarterly charts.”

Author: Yoshioka Tsuyoshi

Synopsis, taken from Japtem:
Thanks to various magic, the human race have been saved from calamity many, many times. Retaining his memories from his previous life, a boy, Shin, was picked up by an old man known to the world as a “Magi.”

Shin was brought up by the Magi, who had retired to a secular place, as his own grandson. With the memories of his past life, he absorbed the Magi’s craft and grew to be able to develop his own magic.

Then, the grandfather told him he has to become independent when he reaches the age of 15.

“Ah, I forgot to teach him common sense.”

The grandson who has grown beyond the level of normal people, lacked common sense; the common sense of the world. So to learn how to socialize, he goes to Earlshide Kingdom City to be admitted to Earlshide Advance Magic Academy.

So far there are only three chapters TL'd and what I can tell from that is:
The MC is a Japanese man ressurected into a world with magic.
And that magic is potentially omnipotent since it is based on imagination.

Won't be reading the raws yet, I'm in the middle of reading raws of several series, too many MTs will get confusing~

The standard questions:
OP? As far as I can tell, yes.
Harem? None for now...

Links:
Raws: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5881cl/
Trans: http://japtem.com/projects/magis-grandson-toc/

Ophis
2015-04-09, 05:18
Oh, seems interesting. I'll give it a try later~.

Thanks for making the topic! :)

xzpwnz
2015-04-09, 05:53
wao
Never knew japtem picked up something new, most of what they host is decent
I'll go read a few chapters on syosetsu to see if I like it

scannatore
2015-04-09, 08:18
The naming sense is as usual a bit off.
Shin? And his grandfather Merlin?

xzpwnz
2015-04-09, 08:47
wao
The chapters are short enough that even I'd be able to translate them in one sitting without going bored out of my mind
wao
Nevermind, the chapters get a lot longer later on

Kyureki
2015-05-08, 22:43
Eh.... Starting reading this, and after about 15 or so chapters, I can see why this series got ranked first in whichever ranking it was. I just can't help laughing at the utter lack of the MC's common sense even though he's reincarnated. The first male friend he makes of the same age as him is also such a troll, to the MC's expense, so more laughs to be had. That said, hopefully the lack of common sense gags don't get repetitive for me or else it'll be difficult for me to read through everything in one sitting.

snenmurai
2015-05-09, 06:26
The story reminds me of dragonballs, guko living in the mountains with his grandpa . Will continue to read it.

HandofFate
2015-05-09, 11:02
The character is pretty interesting.
I'm waiting to see how humble the MC gets and to what extent he hides/reveals his power level, been searching for one just at the right balance that I like, came across many close to bit too far in either direction always.

Okashira
2015-05-09, 12:01
Eh.... Starting reading this, and after about 15 or so chapters, I can see why this series got ranked first in whichever ranking it was. I just can't help laughing

This, I don't know who recommended this one to me, but the sense of humor is pretty good and is kept varied, jokes and themes aren't repeated over and over. There is some seasoning of drama and action mixed in here and there, but that's there just to show the cool side of the characters.

So far my favorite part has been....


Whet he granma + granpa combo start to agressively ship him with one of his classmates; and they even go out of the way to sort of making her the 'almost official fiancee' by speaking with her parents without the MC knowing the discussion topic ("why are they shaking hands?", he should have asked that :heh: :heh: ).

watisit
2015-05-09, 12:07
Wait... so although the MC is a reincarnated japanese he doesn't have a shred of common sense?

Jirachier
2015-05-09, 12:20
How OP is the protagonist in comparison to children his age ?

Okashira
2015-05-09, 13:01
Wait... so although the MC is a reincarnated japanese he doesn't have a shred of common sense?

He was raised in the mountains by his grandfather, the grandfather was pretty happy with him because no matter what he teaches him, he can absorb it.


Eventually it's revealed that all of the instructors that the MC had, are basically living legends with great achievements; the lack of common sense is more in the lines that "he was never taught what's the norm", so the things that he feels that are "a little bit weak" or "a little bit simple" are actually way beyond what most people can dream to accomplish.

He usually uses basic chemistry and common world knowledge to aid with his spell formations; which to him is normal, but since no one else understands the concept of science, he can't get through the explanations to other people; which results in him using more advanced techniques that his instructors.

Riz
2015-05-09, 17:23
^ just like Rudeus did it in his final exam with Roxy right?

kazzuya
2015-05-09, 20:02
^ just like Rudeus did it in his final exam with Roxy right?

Rudy will look ordinary compared to this guy.

Riz
2015-05-09, 20:13
^ no no, I mean, when Rudeus for fisrt time actived his large scale magic as final test from Roxy. though it's look like smaller scale than Shins'

alsful
2015-05-09, 21:53
Thanks for sharing, i'll follow it.

Kyureki
2015-05-10, 00:16
This, I don't know who recommended this one to me, but the sense of humor is pretty good and is kept varied, jokes and themes aren't repeated over and over. There is some seasoning of drama and action mixed in here and there, but that's there just to show the cool side of the characters.

Yea, just when I was worrying about the common sense gags getting old, things changed gears and kept me going for more. The switching between serious and comedy really helps keep things fresh without making hings feel old and repetitive.

One thing that bugs me a lot about this webnovel though is that the reincarnation thing is essentially only there to explain why he's so OP with magic (ie. implementing science logic). Other than that, he doesn't seem like he was reincarnated even the slightest bit, which is a bit of a pet peeve of mine.

steam fish
2015-05-10, 01:58
just read the 9 translated chapters, i really like this series so far especially the character interactions and how all of them are high ranking people xD

iambill10
2015-05-11, 21:38
new chapter out!

Valky
2015-05-13, 04:01
Is there anyone who have read up to the latest chapter? I've read up to chapter 22 and have some things to ask.

1. Will the mc friends become 'useful' later? Up to chapter 22, they seem to be just a tag along, contributing and doing basically nothing other than being amazed and conversation partner.
2. Is the relationship between Shin and Sicily developing later on? The author didn't give her much interaction with Shin so far (well, she only appears for 13 chapters, but still).
3. Will the grandpa and grandma ever fight later in the story?
4. Harem?

It'll be fine if you answer it with yes or no. Well, if you want to add more spice, it's fine too, as long as it's not too spicy. :)

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 04:05
1. yes.
2. yes.
3. no.
4. no.

Valky
2015-05-13, 04:17
1. yes.
2. yes.
3. no.
4. no.

The third one was a bit disappointing, I know the story is about the grandson, but still, since there are cases of badass grandpa & grandma in a lot of manga and novel, so .. :heh:

Well, the web novel only have 57 chapters so far, who knows in the future.

Thanks btw.

Okashira
2015-05-13, 04:23
Is there anyone who have read up to the latest chapter? I've read up to chapter 22 and have some things to ask.

1. Will the mc friends become 'useful' later? Up to chapter 22, they seem to be just a tag along, contributing and doing basically nothing other than being amazed and conversation partner.
2. Is the relationship between Shin and Sicily developing later on? The author didn't give her much interaction with Shin so far (well, she only appears for 13 chapters, but still).
3. Will the grandpa and grandma ever fight later in the story?
4. Harem?

It'll be fine if you answer it with yes or no. Well, if you want to add more spice, it's fine too, as long as it's not too spicy. :)

Far from the latest chapter, but most of these questions are explained quite early.


- The class has to do mandatory study groups to take their knowledge further; the MC becomes the leader of his group naturally since he is the school representative / best student. The group gets an embarrassing name in the lines of "super ultra amazing ultimate magic study" or something, and the topic is the MCs skills, meaning that everyone in his study group start using his custom magics.

- After being royaly teased and accused of homosexuality by his best friend fiance & the prince's imouto "Awawa! an adult relationship!" :heh: He realizes of all the "cowardly things" that he is doing in his "approaches" to Ceclily (like, he takes no risks and is afraid of doing anything until he is sure of success); he then confesses to her in an onsen around chapter 40. Pretty much almost every character so far was spying on them when it happened :heh: Cecily spilled tears of joy, since she thought that it was just a one sided infatuation from her with no future prospects from her perspective; we also learn that MC had actually "fell for her" at first sight (he used his monologue from that time to confess). When he confessed, he was teased that he set up a death flag by confessing before war :heh: :heh:

- Dunno about the gramps fighting, to the point I have read, the war hasn't broken out yet; but I'm betting they'll serve as advisors and will let MC's squad be the aces. The enemy is the magic race which recently destroyed an empire and is building up forces, basically a danger to the whole human race. The oldies are also acting as instructors for MC's squad.

- In most people eyes, The MC is surrounded by beauties that shower him with attention, but I'm not sure it's building up as an harem per se (most girls joke around that they can't stand the intense lovey-dovey aura that usually forms between Cecily and Shin). Time will tell? (I would like the blacksmith shota & chef girl childhood friend combo pairing up btw).

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 04:49
Will break the flag! :T

well, Grandpa and Granma shows up on the battlefield will be awesome :3

Kyureki
2015-05-13, 05:38
Far from the latest chapter, but most of these questions are explained quite early.


- The class has to do mandatory study groups to take their knowledge further; the MC becomes the leader of his group naturally since he is the school representative / best student. The group gets an embarrassing name in the lines of "super ultra amazing ultimate magic study" or something, and the topic is the MCs skills, meaning that everyone in his study group start using his custom magics.

- After being royaly teased and accused of homosexuality by his best friend fiance & the prince's imouto "Awawa! an adult relationship!" :heh: He realizes of all the "cowardly things" that he is doing in his "approaches" to Ceclily (like, he takes no risks and is afraid of doing anything until he is sure of success); he then confesses to her in an onsen around chapter 40. Pretty much almost every character so far was spying on them when it happened :heh: Cecily spilled tears of joy, since she thought that it was just a one sided infatuation from her with no future prospects from her perspective; we also learn that Will had actually "fell for her" at first sight (he used his monologue from that time to confess). When he confessed, he was teased that he set up a death flag by confessing before war :heh: :heh:

- Dunno about the gramps fighting, to the point I have read, the war hasn't broken out yet; but I'm betting they'll serve as advisors and will let Will's squad be the aces. The enemy is the magic race which recently destroyed an empire and is building up forces, basically a danger to the whole human race. The oldies are also acting as instructors for Will's squad.

- In most people eyes, Will is surrounded by beauties that shower him with attention, but I'm not sure it's building up as an harem per se (most girls joke around that they can't stand the intense lovey-dovey aura that usually forms between Cecily and Will). Time will tell? (I would like the blacksmith shota & chief girl childhood friend combo pairing up btw).


First of all, who the heck is Will? The MC's name is Shin.

- The MC's study group is "Ultimate Magic Study Group." And he rather than teaching them his custom magics (since nobody can understand the scientific concepts even when he explains as simply as possible), he only teaches them the proper way to practice magic (no need for chant, controlling magic/mana is the most important thing) and that the mental image is what makes magic happen. Though of course he'll teach em how to use Gate at some point or another since one of the members really wants to learn it.

- Prince's imouto was being all flustered at how Shin and Sicily were being all flirty despite not even dating yet. Not at how Shin and the prince were getting along so well. As for the onsen, Sicily's family's territory is an onsen resort kind of area and they were staying at her family's mansion there during summer vacation for training camp. You got the death flag thing a bit wrong too. The prince said he urged Shin to get it over with now instead of later cause it seemed like Shin would be the type to say "let's get married after this war is over" which is a typical death flag. In other words, it was to avoid a death flag. :heh:

- The society in this world is monogamy, so harem is not a thing, even within nobility. Also, blacksmith kid's childhood friend girl is a the postergirl of the inn her family runs. Not a chief or whatever else it was you were saying she was.

On another note, I love the prince as a character. The sadisity is right in tune with me. :heh::heh::heh:

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 06:00
m'kay,
Shin broke the flag! :T
*shamelessly fixed it

I think Okashira-kun mixed it with someone else :heh:
as for me, I just forgot :heh:

Riz
2015-05-13, 06:30
will from wilford, Shin Wilford

Kyureki
2015-05-13, 06:34
will from wilford, Shin Wilford

It's Walford/Wolford though.

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 06:36
eh, isn't it Wolforde?

Riz
2015-05-13, 06:41
from GT raw I read it Wilford tho . . .
gotta check 'em

edit: it's Walford on GT

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 06:56
other way is to copy paste name to google and search, gugurekasu ding dong.

Okashira
2015-05-13, 07:57
m'kay,
Shin broke the flag! :T
*shamelessly fixed it

I think Okashira-kun mixed it with someone else :heh:
as for me, I just forgot :heh:

I somehow thought that the MC got called Will in the previous page and overloaded my poor little brain? :heh:

About the "chief", I was thinking on typing "chef" (she cooks right (or is expected to in the future)? I actually don't remmber it)....


...... I'll probably should stop posting after a stres inducing full nighter? :heh:

arthand
2015-05-13, 09:03
Another hax main character and a reincarnated one at that , i wonder where did i heard this before ?

BakaRanger
2015-05-13, 14:06
Edit:someone else already answered

amatsunagi
2015-05-13, 18:01
I somehow thought that the MC got called Will in the previous page and overloaded my poor little brain? :heh:

About the "chief", I was thinking on typing "chef" (she cooks right (or is expected to in the future)? I actually don't remmber it)....


...... I'll probably should stop posting after a stres inducing full nighter? :heh:

……I think you should :heh:
full nighter is fine but while induced with stress? bed calls me~

Kyureki
2015-05-14, 02:23
Whee~ Fully caught up now and mai gash, I think I might get diabetes from the scenes of a certain bakcouple~ That girl is just moe incarnate at times. And I wonder what kind of thoughts gramps and grandma will have once the first volume of the new legend is published. :heh:

El Rue
2015-05-14, 02:24
Been reading through this...quite a fun read.

Sicily is very cute. Bakacouple, haha. Cheers for monogamy! It just seems so rare nowadays...

Prince can such a troll. Though also amusing when things turn against him (rare but satisfying).

His pals kept remarking how he keeps breaking the world's common sense but they end up like him in a way.

Funny how he dies a bit inside every time he hears their group name.

His lack of common sense usually leads to funny stuff though his reincarnation background is rarely used or addressed (well, his past knowledge justifies his effective & efficient magic methods). He must have been a lacking-common-sense-innocent guy even in his past life.


Currently in the chapters where Shin & his group fight off the majin guys as well as him trying to crush the stories to be told of his exploits (only to find out that publication has already started of his earlier ones). Just like Grandma & Grandpa...

Kyureki
2015-05-14, 02:30
Funny how he dies a bit inside every time he hears their group name.

Just wait til you see how his second name gets granted to him due to one of the tsukkomi he made. :heh:

amatsunagi
2015-05-14, 21:08
encore of their name all-night long. There's publication of the book as well, and I guess followed with theatrical drama. :heh:

bludvein
2015-05-14, 22:11
Not a particularly original or deep story, but an interesting light read nonetheless. The whole reincarnation angle could've been dropped in this story though. Honestly that's the most jarring thing because he actually acts age-appropriate most of the time. The only time it's even brought up is as an excuse to integrate some simple scientific concepts into his magic or use kanji in enchanting.

It would honestly flow better and be more believable if he was just a smart kid raised in a sheltered environment.

El Rue
2015-05-15, 22:18
Finally caught up. Sicily & her "A~u A~u" moments were quite adorable as always.

Hahaha, so basically his newly bestowed titles that is to be spread around are:

http://i.imgur.com/Wpy6w2e.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/MXgxhoP.gif

...and something inside him dies of shame just a little bit more & more.

NotteBoy97
2015-05-15, 22:20
^ I get why they would call him guy with flaming sword but why would they call him useless slabs of meat? :heh::heh:

Kyureki
2015-05-16, 00:20
Hehehe, latest chapter... Shin's second name is now publicly acknowledged! I can't help but feel sorry for him while still laughing. :heh:

El Rue
2015-05-21, 00:52
Hehehe, latest chapter... Shin's second name is now publicly acknowledged! I can't help but feel sorry for him while still laughing. :heh:
Can't even walk the streets anymore in the latest chapter, the shame was too much to bare. Even Sicily's title is stuck now.

Shin being Shin, his solution is to teach everyone gate magic cus' why not. Alice's motivation was considered "impure" though. It really is tempting & easy to abuse huh...

Seems it's bad for him to not do anything since he started brainstorming about wireless communication & how to make it possible. Gus ain't happy about that & it's implications & consequences.

amatsunagi
2015-05-22, 01:55
Kenja no Mago will be published as LN under Famitsu Bunko Label with new title: Kenja no Mago Joushiki Hazure no Shinyuusei. Release date is slated at 30th of July, with illustration by Kikuchi Seiji-sensei (of BALDR series and Mayochiki fame), seems like there will be no change in story, but still have to undergo lots of adjusment and fix. Author will also write bangaihen as added content. Kyureki might dance now as World Teacher is set to be released on the same month.

Kyureki
2015-05-22, 07:07
Kenja no Mago will be published as LN under Famitsu Bunko Label with new title: Kenja no Mago Joushiki Hazure no Shinyuusei. Release date is slated at 30th of July, with illustration by Kikuchi Seiji-sensei (of BALDR series and Mayochiki fame), seems like there will be no change in story, but still have to undergo lots of adjusment and fix. Author will also write bangaihen as added content. Kyureki might dance now as World Teacher is set to be released on the same month.

Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaq, looks like I'm breaking my wallet now. I already have a bunch of other things I'm gonna be buying in July as well, so fitting in two LNs is gonna make things a bit tight. orz

moneng85
2015-05-23, 02:52
guys, sorry but can someone give a brief summary about his?
what i gathered from you guys is that
shin became the student representative
he go to school make a class project teaching them basic control magic
they go to onsen?
Sicily became his one and only waifu
he have a very chuuni nickname
he become famous till he can't walk on the streets
please correct me if i'm wrong

bludvein
2015-05-25, 00:04
Uh oh. That doom with the magic stone bit finally came back to bite. Shin manages to create one artificially with about 5 minutes of thought based on artificial diamonds. Now he has access to easily made batteries for his toys, although for now he's only planning to make a few for his wireless communication network.

Buggerman
2015-05-25, 04:06
maybe it's too late to ask.. but what happen next with that cart guy?
i suspect that he will become villain in the future..

Riz
2015-05-25, 04:33
maybe it's too late to ask.. but what happen next with that cart guy?
i suspect that he will become villain in the future..

dead in misery-est way

El Rue
2015-05-25, 06:33
Haha, grandma's foresight was spot on. Alice also didn't disappoint.
Uh oh. That doom with the magic stone bit finally came back to bite. Shin manages to create one artificially with about 5 minutes of thought based on artificial diamonds. Now he has access to easily made batteries for his toys, although for now he's only planning to make a few for his wireless communication network.
At least he's making that reincarnated brain relevant again.

Schion93
2015-05-25, 08:13
dead in misery-est way

so he died in misery and despair? awesome! mind sharing details on how he died? :heh:

Riz
2015-05-25, 08:33
so he died in misery and despair? awesome! mind sharing details on how he died? :heh:

the way demonic red bear die. and replace the red bear with dat brat, then you get the answer :D
although it may be quite difference a bi. . . lot ;)

Schion93
2015-05-25, 10:01
the way demonic red bear die. and replace the red bear with dat brat, then you get the answer :D
although it may be quite difference a bi. . . lot ;)

ohoooo~ what chapter does it happen in? and lemme guess...

he was killed cause he tried to do something to Sicily?

Riz
2015-05-25, 10:18
ohoooo~ what chapter does it happen in? and lemme guess...

he was killed cause he tried to do something to Sicily?

forget bout it tee-hee~ :p
also cuz of jelly of shin's performances 'monster', place in class 's', stole his fiance, and tried to kill shin and co(includin Gus). another one is he's a puppet
and Im only read til around tis part

Namorax
2015-05-26, 06:57
Not sure if I should give this a try... reading the thread so far it reminds me of a certain "Oni-sama" at the Magic highschool, only this time there's no danger of incest around... just pure "hax OP" MC, and his goof troop that jump on the XP-Bus the MC symbolises (meaning they become OP simply by associating with OP MC).

Maybe the comedy aspect I've heard about get's lost with all the spoilers...?

Quol
2015-05-26, 08:53
Currently there is only 12 translated chapters but i find it to be pretty funny. Since i only read the translated chapters i cant say much about the relationships but the interactions between Shin and the prince are great :heh:

Im one of the fans of op protagonists so this story is really good for me.

Hokoga
2015-05-26, 09:07
Not sure if I should give this a try... reading the thread so far it reminds me of a certain "Oni-sama" at the Magic highschool, only this time there's no danger of incest around... just pure "hax OP" MC, and his goof troop that jump on the XP-Bus the MC symbolises (meaning they become OP simply by associating with OP MC).

Maybe the comedy aspect I've heard about get's lost with all the spoilers...?The MC is not disliked or regarded as a failure and doesn't have any siblings, so I really don't understand how this could remind you of Mahouka.

There is no game-like sitting so no XP(experience points), I hear the MC does teach his friends how to magic like he does(chantless), I don't know if they become OP or anything.

Namorax
2015-05-26, 13:00
Well, Mahouka isn't about a protagonist that everyone looks down at... it's about a protagonist that is OP despite everyone looking down on him!
And both take their friends and give them a work out that makes them at least bettr than average compared to their peers...

That, or it's just that every "OP Maincharacter is so OP he is able to make his friends Mini-OP" setting reminds me of Mahouka. And it still reminds me of Mahouka... ^^;

Right now the only reason I would take this one up is because I'm looking for something funny, OP maincharacters do not tend to encounter many enemies that could possible pose a problem to them.
And even if they do, most people are more interested in harems and OP-ness... who cares about an interesting story if there are waifus to fondle and/or oogle...

Hokoga
2015-05-26, 13:20
Well, Mahouka isn't about a protagonist that everyone looks down at... it's about a protagonist that is OP despite everyone looking down on him!
And both take their friends and give them a work out that makes them at least bettr than average compared to their peers...

That, or it's just that every "OP Maincharacter is so OP he is able to make his friends Mini-OP" setting reminds me of Mahouka. And it still reminds me of Mahouka... ^^;

Right now the only reason I would take this one up is because I'm looking for something funny, OP maincharacters do not tend to encounter many enemies that could possible pose a problem to them.
And even if they do, most people are more interested in harems and OP-ness... who cares about an interesting story if there are waifus to fondle and/or oogle...You might be disappointed because there's only 1 waifu in this story. (no harem)

Kyureki
2015-05-26, 19:42
Well, Mahouka isn't about a protagonist that everyone looks down at... it's about a protagonist that is OP despite everyone looking down on him!
And both take their friends and give them a work out that makes them at least bettr than average compared to their peers...

That, or it's just that every "OP Maincharacter is so OP he is able to make his friends Mini-OP" setting reminds me of Mahouka. And it still reminds me of Mahouka... ^^;

Right now the only reason I would take this one up is because I'm looking for something funny, OP maincharacters do not tend to encounter many enemies that could possible pose a problem to them.
And even if they do, most people are more interested in harems and OP-ness... who cares about an interesting story if there are waifus to fondle and/or oogle...

I think your worries might be unfounded. The story is to the end more focused on the slice-of-life comedy surrounding the main character. Any and all action scenes only exist because the plot requires them. The author even explicitely stated that in his author's note after one of the chapters.

Schion93
2015-05-26, 20:05
Well, Mahouka isn't about a protagonist that everyone looks down at... it's about a protagonist that is OP despite everyone looking down on him!
And both take their friends and give them a work out that makes them at least bettr than average compared to their peers...

That, or it's just that every "OP Maincharacter is so OP he is able to make his friends Mini-OP" setting reminds me of Mahouka. And it still reminds me of Mahouka... ^^;

Right now the only reason I would take this one up is because I'm looking for something funny, OP maincharacters do not tend to encounter many enemies that could possible pose a problem to them.
And even if they do, most people are more interested in harems and OP-ness... who cares about an interesting story if there are waifus to fondle and/or oogle...

I don't see why you would say Mahouka's Tatsuya has a harem when he isn't even interested in the girls in that way and I like Mahouka cause of the political intrigue and the plot is pretty good, but the way you say its like you think that Mahouka has no story at all

but anyway, if I were to compare, Magi's Grandson is closer to Mushoku Tensei rather than Mahouka

Namorax
2015-05-27, 20:56
I don't think I will be disappointed with the lack of a harem, and I am not exactly sure why anyone would conclude I would miss something like that... I don't think it was worded that ambiguously?

Neither did I want to allude that Mahouka's protagonist had anything like a "harem". If I am honest, it has been quite some time since I last checked the translation but all I remember of the plot can be summarized as "Stuff happened, but then Oni-sama came and saved the day!".
The various political plots were somehow interesting (and compared to the stuff some other LNs try to sell as plot is was rather good) but in the end everything was more or less solved by "Oni-sama" and his judicious application of oni-sama-power... unless the plot involved one of his friends, in which case the friend was able to win the battle because oni-sama kindly supported him/her beforehand.

But in the end it all comes back to Tatsuya. Always.
The supporting characters might be able work hard on their own and become strong without having Tastuya give them new toys/ideas... but what if Tatsuya never existed? There would have never been a reason for them to train so hard.

That was a just a grievance I have with published LNs in general. Unless the author caters to (at least) one target audience's fetishes tastes it never reaches the printing machines, or at least it never reaches this corner of the world as an english version...
I read stories for the plot... if I want to read about "teens" fondling each other and/or do a "Yin-Yang-Union" I go and ask Google for Ero-Fanfics.

(Sorry for slightly derailing the thread)

Schion93
2015-05-28, 02:31
I don't think I will be disappointed with the lack of a harem, and I am not exactly sure why anyone would conclude I would miss something like that... I don't think it was worded that ambiguously?

Neither did I want to allude that Mahouka's protagonist had anything like a "harem". If I am honest, it has been quite some time since I last checked the translation but all I remember of the plot can be summarized as "Stuff happened, but then Oni-sama came and saved the day!".
The various political plots were somehow interesting (and compared to the stuff some other LNs try to sell as plot is was rather good) but in the end everything was more or less solved by "Oni-sama" and his judicious application of oni-sama-power... unless the plot involved one of his friends, in which case the friend was able to win the battle because oni-sama kindly supported him/her beforehand.

But in the end it all comes back to Tatsuya. Always.
The supporting characters might be able work hard on their own and become strong without having Tastuya give them new toys/ideas... but what if Tatsuya never existed? There would have never been a reason for them to train so hard.

That was a just a grievance I have with published LNs in general. Unless the author caters to (at least) one target audience's fetishes tastes it never reaches the printing machines, or at least it never reaches this corner of the world as an english version...
I read stories for the plot... if I want to read about "teens" fondling each other and/or do a "Yin-Yang-Union" I go and ask Google for Ero-Fanfics.

(Sorry for slightly derailing the thread)
I see, well back onto your question, I'd say give this one a try as you wouldn't know if you will like or dislike it until you've read it :heh:

bludvein
2015-05-28, 11:50
If Shin is going for self-propelled vehicles next, he should just skip to a futuristic flying car/ship design unless there is some kind of energy concern. That way all the related infrastructure like better roads and bridges won't be needed. Also, he should totally make fixed teleport gates between cities.

Just imagining the mess Shin is going to create in the next few years...

ooPeaToo
2015-07-03, 08:40
Cover volume 1 :)

http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/86c1/jg7ad9ie6yes110zg.jpg

Breimn
2015-07-03, 08:57
I was expecting him to look younger.

Schion93
2015-07-03, 09:01
I was expecting him to look younger.

yea and with a softer face XD

wuhugm
2015-07-03, 09:25
Who's that green haired beauty?

the artwork is like Baldr Force/Sky Series of GIGA

fallencrow04
2015-07-03, 09:36
Is that Sicily?????

Mahesvara
2015-07-03, 09:41
They look older than my imagination and Sicily :love:

Breimn
2015-07-03, 09:46
Well, there is a chance that in LN they make them all a little older. How old was he when he started school, 12? Kinda forgot.

El Rue
2015-07-03, 09:53
They're around Highschool age so it fits I guess. Sicily's uniform is cleavage custom I see.

Boo, he looks like someone with proper common sense.

anonfr
2015-07-03, 13:53
They're around Highschool age so it fits I guess. Sicily's uniform is cleavage custom I see.

Boo, he looks like someone with proper common sense.

Yes. He really looks nothing like I expected. He looks rather sharp. I guess, I'd say his design looks the similar as what you'd expect from a Stuco president? That's the impression I get.

Hokoga
2015-07-03, 14:47
^ It's not like he was ever stated to be an idiot, he just lacks the commonsense of that world.

anonfr
2015-07-03, 14:50
^ It's not like he was ever stated to be an idiot, he just lacks the commonsense of that world.

It's not that. It's more that, his narrative sounds a bit immature and simple to me. He's obviously pretty smart, since he uses science for his magic as well as he does. Still, his image doesn't fit what I pictured.

bludvein
2015-07-03, 15:13
^ It's not like he was ever stated to be an idiot, he just lacks the commonsense of that world.

It's not like he's an idiot, but he is kind of a care-free runaway type. The illustration doesn't really give that impression. It's not bad though.

Schion93
2015-07-03, 20:07
It's not like he's an idiot, but he is kind of a care-free runaway type. The illustration doesn't really give that impression. It's not bad though.

maybe this is on purpose? to give people and the characters the impression that he is very cool and etc but in reality he knows little common sense XD

Haigi
2015-07-04, 08:07
How would someone without proper common sense supposed to look like anyway?
But I agree they look a little bit more older than I imagined.

sayf82
2015-07-04, 09:21
Cover volume 1 :)

http://www.mediafire.com/convkey/86c1/jg7ad9ie6yes110zg.jpg

where is super granny?

El Rue
2015-07-04, 10:46
From the way he talks & interacts with everyone, that face isn't really the one that pops out really. He's rather polite & down to earth kinda' guy.

What do they call it? Instead of tsurime its more like tareme eyes or something? My pal says a lot of otaku slang that I'm not sure which is which.


Hmm...where is Grandma? From the way people describe her, she's old yet still pretty & noble looking.

Valky
2015-07-07, 08:05
Sicily looks better than expected, can't say the same about Shin though. He looks like he come from an otome game, with his uniform like that.

Kyureki
2015-07-07, 21:59
I imagined Shin to look a little more on the gentle side.... But oh well, I guess it works since he's supposedly handsome by that world's aesthetics. And author himself did say that the character designs are extremely close to how he himself imagined them.

Muryai
2015-07-20, 09:05
Where can I read translated version of chapter 15 and up ?

Hokoga
2015-07-20, 09:32
Where can I read translated version of chapter 15 and up ?Nowhere cause it's not translated yet, chapter 15 should be translated sometime this week by Japtem

BakaRanger
2015-07-20, 13:58
Where can I read translated version of chapter 15 and up ?

The same place you read the previous chapters. Only you'll have to actually WAIT for them to be translated by someone who isn't getting paid to do it so they have a real job that takes priority. For future reference, you can assume that this is the correct answer 95% of the time for the same question no matter what series it is. :D

ooPeaToo
2015-07-25, 06:55
Characters Introduction :)

http://www.enterbrain.co.jp/fb/pc/02sp/02_1508Kenjanomago/images/sw1Contents.jpg

tsunade666
2015-07-25, 06:56
^is the blond guy the prince?

the right side is grandma and grandpa?

El Rue
2015-07-25, 07:10
That's...a very oddly emphasized breasts right there (which seems to be Cecily's, making it double redundant).

Is that really the prince? Grandparents also look rather disapprovingly unwelcoming...weird.

tsunade666
2015-07-25, 07:15
sorry to say this but.... do they even know to wear push-up bra? it looks to me that Cecily's? breast is sagging -_- which is sad :T_T:

If the right side is not the grandparents, then who are they? nobles?

Okashira
2015-07-25, 07:20
Is that really the prince? Grandparents also look rather disapprovingly unwelcoming...weird.

The granpa looks like someone cool rather that "the face of the guy that gets the short end of the stick 100% of the time" (and thus, it fits perfectly :heh: ). Since Grandma was described as looking quite a few years younger and prettier than what she really is, that kinda subsided look doesn't fit my image of her.....

For Aug, I figured him as a little bit more bishouneninsh & noble / strict looking dude consideing what was his circumsntanctes before befriending Shin....


Thinking about it, probably Maria is the only one who fits 100% my idea of the chars (that's totally the face of someone who is always getting late to class :heh: ). Well, the designs probably will grown on us with time, since the drawing style doesn't seem bad.

ooPeaToo
2015-07-25, 07:25
sorry to say this but.... do they even know to wear push-up bra? it looks to me that Cecily's? breast is sagging -_- which is sad :T_T:

If the right side is not the grandparents, then who are they? nobles?

They are grandparents. :heh:

tsunade666
2015-07-25, 08:03
I just read chapter 14. I just remember about this web novel when I saw the update in the thread which is why I checked if there is an update for the translation.

And I didn't expect Sicily would admit that she's using Shin to solve his problem with douche boy.

I haven't read a manga or novel that shows a heroine that admits her fault or for using the MC for her plot. I admit that I read a lot and already forgotten the majority of it but most of the time. Its either the girl say it at front of the guy that's she's using him but not this where she already used and lured him into protecting her (even if shin realize it) by her acting and her beauty.

usually when the deed is done. Its either buried or forgotten. I can't remember right now about a heroine that is like Sicily.

ShadowSamurai365
2015-07-25, 09:16
I just read chapter 14. I just remember about this web novel when I saw the update in the thread which is why I checked if there is an update for the translation.

And I didn't expect Sicily would admit that she's using Shin to solve his problem with douche boy.

I haven't read a manga or novel that shows a heroine that admits her fault or for using the MC for her plot. I admit that I read a lot and already forgotten the majority of it but most of the time. Its either the girl say it at front of the guy that's she's using him but not this where she already used and lured him into protecting her (even if shin realize it) by her acting and her beauty.

usually when the deed is done. Its either buried or forgotten. I can't remember right now about a heroine that is like Sicily.

I don't think that she had any ill intentions of using Shin, though (or at least didn't plan on hurting him). Glad she confessed, though; and wonder how she'll develop in the future.

Hokoga
2015-07-25, 09:35
The one who push her into using him was Maria though so I don't really blame Sicily.

Rageth
2015-07-25, 10:17
The one who push her into using him was Maria though so I don't really blame Sicily.

This
It's been so long since the last update, people actually forgot about that.

Kyureki
2015-07-25, 15:15
The prince and granny look waaaaaay different from how I imagined them... Especially granny since like Okashira said, the WN repeatedly describes her as someone who looks a few decades younger than she actually is (to the point of still looking good in a swim suit).

Xacual
2015-07-25, 15:23
Yeah wasn't the Prince described as being same height and build as Shin for the most part?

Kyureki
2015-07-25, 16:46
Yeah wasn't the Prince described as being same height and build as Shin for the most part?

My issue is more with how he looks like a playboy type of guy to me whereas my image of him was more dignified with a playful streak to it.

Hokoga
2015-07-25, 16:59
If the characters came out looking exactly how everyone imagined then a lot of you will start complaining how the characters look so cliche and unoriginal. :rolleyes:

El Rue
2015-07-25, 17:28
That is possible but when pretty much everyone reacts in the same way, they may have a point. Not really overly negative, more like "Huh, that isn't the look and/or impression we're getting from what we've read".

shadowarc
2015-07-25, 21:17
That mention about his nicknames a few pages back really gets me curious but I guess that's the fun of waiting.

Prongs
2015-07-26, 02:37
update godamnit UPDATE!!!

damn I hope I have those Universal translator like on startrek....

Hokoga
2015-08-03, 03:43
I think the illustrations are pretty damn nice, and even if you don't like it now it might grow on you later as more volumes are released.
http://imgur.com/a/FViVwSicily looks amazing :love:

Kyureki
2015-08-03, 03:48
That last colour illustration of Sicily... I almost thought that was supposed to be her mother. She looks waaaay more mature in that illustration compared to the other ones.

pampz21
2015-08-03, 03:53
Whats with saggy boobs?

From what I felt a more innocence when reading this but it looks like a porn.

Breimn
2015-08-03, 04:12
What age were they supposed to be? They all look lik last year highschoolers.

Riz
2015-08-03, 04:16
What age were they supposed to be? They all look lik last year highschoolers.

around 15 YO

OnegaiDesu
2015-08-03, 06:13
I imagined Sicily to be more of a "It fits in the hands, but aren't too small" size.
Those are like, eh.

Who's this girl?
http://i.imgur.com/dWgsXtm.jpg

Kyureki
2015-08-03, 06:15
Who's this girl?
http://i.imgur.com/dWgsXtm.jpg

It's Maria.

El Rue
2015-08-03, 08:19
Oooh, nice. Thanks for sharing. Nice to see the rest of their class too (well, the females anyway).

That less dressed Cecily does look older. Also good to see that the artist remembered what happens to breasts when girls lie down.
I imagined Sicily to be more of a "It fits in the hands, but aren't too small" size.
Those are like, eh.

Who's this girl?
http://i.imgur.com/dWgsXtm.jpg
Maria is also quite charming neh?

Riz
2015-08-03, 20:46
somehow Maria look much cuter than Sicily whit those boobs comparison . . .

tsunade666
2015-08-03, 21:43
the illustration looks good and it looks like there would be more fights in the up coming chapter.

update.....>_>

Maria is actually quite lovely and charming.

Is that really sicily? in that last colored illustration? she looks to mature that its true that its more like her mom.

kaisis
2015-08-04, 06:21
Yep, I didn't expect the main girl to have such knockers. At least her uniform manages to restrain them.

Riz
2015-08-04, 19:14
Yep, I didn't expect the main girl to have such knockers. At least her uniform manages to restrain them.

barely tho . . .
brat with huge and shaggy knockers is a big no for me. also the design of the uniform make it more big no. if only the design of the uniform, the inner one(aka the shirt) is like one on HSDxD which covered her cleavage up to the neck.

Hokoga
2015-08-04, 20:40
Her breast seem perfectly fine to me, seriously when a woman has large breast and doesn't wear a bra and gravity comes into play then they are going to look something like that.

If her breast really bothers you that much then your probably not really a fan of women with naturally large breast, especially when they are not wearing a bra. (And when I say "natural" I mean "not fake")

As for them appearing older than Highschoolers, please keep in mind that this is not a Japanese sitting where everybody is Asian with a somewhat childish appearance.
When I was a sophomore in highschool I came across few guys who looked like they were in their senior year, only to later find out that they were either freshmen or younger than me.

If you look at the illustrations you can see a clear difference between "Young person"(Shin & friends),
"Adult",http://s3.postimg.org/uhnlgwker/IMG_5191.jpg and "Old person"(Grandpa & Grandma)

Kyureki
2015-08-05, 21:21
Pffft. Godbaba. That's just.... :heh:

Also, this is surprising. Seems stores were in shortage of the LN on the second day of release and there has been an emergency additional printing.

Okashira
2015-08-05, 21:59
Pffft. Godbaba. That's just.... :heh:

Also, this is surprising. Seems stores were in shortage of the LN on the second day of release and there has been an emergency additional printing.

So, unless the label went for like 500 copies, this means we got ourselves a hit? Any sort of explanation for that? I mean, it's not like in today's industry having a great plot or moe troupes will guarantee success, neither does popularity in narou......


..... It was Cicily's underwear after all, right? It might be worth checking reviews later?


To be honest, from the very start I felt that green lighting this was in the tune one of Augusto's schemes :heh: :heh: Too bad I didn't joke around with "he is going to reprint it even" back then :heh:

Kyureki
2015-08-05, 22:08
Don't know any details. The stuff about second day shortage and emergency printing were simply in the author's progress report that came up along with today's chapter. Author was surprised it's selling so well too.

handoi1560
2015-08-15, 08:09
Is that harem in this WB ??

Hokoga
2015-08-15, 08:16
Is that harem in this WB ??No harem ..................

LevelSeven
2015-08-15, 09:30
chapter 15 is tranlated on japtem :/

well, normally im a fan of this slice-of-life-like-fantasy-school-storys but this one is really boring :/

the people are simply to one dimensional, exspecially the MC becomes like that too, actually, i only thought he was "more" at the beginning because he is a reincarnated person but he neither has a mature mind or anything else that shows "im older than i look (mind-wise)":(
i know that this story is about shin and the fact that he doesnt know how ridiculous OP he is but i wonder how many people will learn this? i thought it was necassary to keep it super-secret, now he suddenly uses it in order to f*cking teleport (which is a netional-treasure lvl spell) a student from school to her home and protect her...

all "protective"-feelings in honors but isnt this idiotic?
he even shows how he creates national-lvl treasures like nothing and he grants them to others too, i understand that the girl should be protected but if he simply went to take her from home to school it will be enough...
exspecially since the boy who wanted to do stuff clearly is the culprit if anything happens to silicy -_-

either way, are there readers who read the raws?
because i think i will drop this if it will stay on this pacing :/

Prongs
2015-08-15, 10:11
chapter 15 is tranlated on japtem :/

well, normally im a fan of this slice-of-life-like-fantasy-school-storys but this one is really boring :/

the people are simply to one dimensional, exspecially the MC becomes like that too, actually, i only thought he was "more" at the beginning because he is a reincarnated person but he neither has a mature mind or anything else that shows "im older than i look (mind-wise)":(
i know that this story is about shin and the fact that he doesnt know how ridiculous OP he is but i wonder how many people will learn this? i thought it was necassary to keep it super-secret, now he suddenly uses it in order to f*cking teleport (which is a netional-treasure lvl spell) a student from school to her home and protect her...

all "protective"-feelings in honors but isnt this idiotic?
he even shows how he creates national-lvl treasures like nothing and he grants them to others too, i understand that the girl should be protected but if he simply went to take her from home to school it will be enough...
exspecially since the boy who wanted to do stuff clearly is the culprit if anything happens to silicy -_-

either way, are there readers who read the raws?
because i think i will drop this if it will stay on this pacing :/


I can mtl for you if you interested

tsunade666
2015-08-15, 11:08
Irene, Cecily's mother. It looks like she looks the same as Cecile. So I really wonder if that colored illustration is about the mother than Cecily. its possible now with her description shown. Her hair color is a bit darker than normal and she looks a lot mature.

but what the heck is he doing to see her in the bed?

LevelSeven
2015-08-15, 11:30
I can mtl for you if you interested

would be awesome, thanks :D

Riz
2015-08-15, 18:54
I can mtl for you if you interested

me too please

Kristoped
2015-08-16, 00:04
chapter 15 is tranlated on japtem :/

well, normally im a fan of this slice-of-life-like-fantasy-school-storys but this one is really boring :/

the people are simply to one dimensional, exspecially the MC becomes like that too, actually, i only thought he was "more" at the beginning because he is a reincarnated person but he neither has a mature mind or anything else that shows "im older than i look (mind-wise)":(
i know that this story is about shin and the fact that he doesnt know how ridiculous OP he is but i wonder how many people will learn this? i thought it was necassary to keep it super-secret, now he suddenly uses it in order to f*cking teleport (which is a netional-treasure lvl spell) a student from school to her home and protect her...

all "protective"-feelings in honors but isnt this idiotic?
he even shows how he creates national-lvl treasures like nothing and he grants them to others too, i understand that the girl should be protected but if he simply went to take her from home to school it will be enough...
exspecially since the boy who wanted to do stuff clearly is the culprit if anything happens to silicy -_-

either way, are there readers who read the raws?
because i think i will drop this if it will stay on this pacing :/

I feel like they are dragging this "dont have any common sense" too far..
i mean... cmon, in every "other world" novel i have read the MC will learn about how that world is and how things are working, i can understand that there is a lot he dont understand since he have been living in the forrest and simply trained with his grandpa.

How could he not understand that he is really OP?
At first it was funny, now it just makes him seem stupid.

bludvein
2015-08-16, 00:30
If you were expecting some kind of semi-serious reincarnation series, then this is definitely not the novel for you. It's mostly just runs on gags that can get kind of repetitive. I like the series but I think it would've worked much better if Shin was not a reincarnation and was merely smart and inventive. Outside using his modern knowledge in magic, the reincarnation is almost completely unused in Shin's character or as a plot point.

LevelSeven
2015-08-16, 11:05
I feel like they are dragging this "dont have any common sense" too far..
THIS!
i mean... cmon, in every "other world" novel i have read the MC will learn about how that world is and how things are working, i can understand that there is a lot he dont understand since he have been living in the forrest and simply trained with his grandpa.
true...
but despite them telling him that it is something that nobody else can do he simply doesnt seem to get it :/ annoying :mad:

How could he not understand that he is really OP?
THIS!
At first it was funny, now it just makes him seem stupid.
yeah, it slowly becomes like that, i mean, yeah, helping is fine and protecting too but it somehow gets to far out of hand, even if the national-treasure-armor is a piece of cake for him, it should be obvious that it isnt that easy for anyone else :mad:
I like the series but I think it would've worked much better if Shin was not a reincarnation and was merely smart and inventive.
som storys like CCM and MAG should be reincarnation storys but this one could really be different, it would even make sense why the MC simply doesnt understand that he is super-monster with powerlvls over 900k :heh:

Rageth
2015-08-16, 11:09
It's something he can do easily, and without much effort. He's not conceited, so he makes the assumption that there should be atleast some people with his level of ability.

Like how Rudeus never considered just how rare chantless magic is, and so assumed that because Fitts was a court magician, it was only natural he could use chantless.

It's one of those "super obvious things" that you wouldn't notice only is obvious to yourself, because of the difference in knowledge.

Mangafreak44
2015-08-16, 12:04
It's something he can do easily, and without much effort. He's not conceited, so he makes the assumption that there should be atleast some people with his level of ability.

Like how Rudeus never considered just how rare chantless magic is, and so assumed that because Fitts was a court magician, it was only natural he could use chantless.

It's one of those "super obvious things" that you wouldn't notice only is obvious to yourself, because of the difference in knowledge.


And it isn't helped that he has spent the first 15 years of his life secluded in a forest with the only people to compare himself to being what many people consider legends.

After all it is plainly stated that he believed all the visitors to be just friends of his grandfather and are nothing really special.

Its like how some rich kids don't realize that not everyone can be as wealthy as them and take the things they get for granted as they do not know any better.

Hikmawan7
2015-08-29, 02:52
I can mtl for you if you interested

me too please..

MrClover
2015-09-04, 00:55
I can mtl for you if you interested

please me too ...

serbian otaku #1
2015-09-08, 16:06
A few questions:


1. Is this guy (http://i.imgur.com/ZqzvGst.jpg) Cart? Did he get "demonized" and Shin killed him off?
2. Is this (http://i.imgur.com/WCzIPoK.jpg) someone from that "demon race", or maybe he's Cart's father that's furious because of his son's death?

All in all, i think this novel is good. It obviously isn't written to be serious, or even dark. It's light-hearted novel that's a good pass time :D

And, what's up with female uniform's design? I like breasts (as any normal, healthy guy), but what's the point of having uniforms that protect you with that big of a hole...? It leaves a major body part defenseless (lungs, heart, spine...)...

Kyureki
2015-09-08, 19:03
A few questions:


1. Is this guy (http://i.imgur.com/ZqzvGst.jpg) Cart? Did he get "demonized" and Shin killed him off?
2. Is this (http://i.imgur.com/WCzIPoK.jpg) someone from that "demon race", or maybe he's Cart's father that's furious because of his son's death?

1. Yes to all of that.
2. It's his tutor that was responsible for turning him into a demon, is the first recorded demon that has retained their mind, and is the main antagonist.

Greenish Growth
2015-09-08, 20:17
And, what's up with female uniform's design? I like breasts (as any normal, healthy guy), but what's the point of having uniforms that protect you with that big of a hole...? It leaves a major body part defenseless (lungs, heart, spine...)...

It is better to look good than to...uh...be protected good. :D

NWJY
2015-09-09, 09:05
HI I new at here....
Just asking how many bizarre thing the MC has done??

IWEEDI
2015-09-17, 12:27
I think its sad. This WN is only a "side project" for AnmesicCat (from Japtem).
I would really like to keep reading but i get the feeling that there wont be new chapters anytime soon since i have been waiting for around a month already. Is there really no one else working on this?

Apoptosis
2015-09-18, 01:46
Rather, it seems Japtem itself is dead already.

IndexOfIdeas
2015-09-18, 10:42
I only visit japtem to see if there is any updates for magi's grandson

IWEEDI
2015-09-18, 10:59
Rather, it seems Japtem itself is dead already.

same.

but nothing comes.

ever.

so basically, we wont be able to read this since no one else is willing to translate it.

Prongs
2015-09-20, 12:55
what happened with japtem?

NWJY
2015-09-20, 22:36
the translator seldom translate some series should i say like this

guyy
2015-09-21, 04:02
You're not missing anything by not being able to read it... I've read it to chapter 58 or something and it's one of the worst novels I've had the misfortune of wasting my time on.

wuhugm
2015-09-21, 04:08
You're not missing anything by not being able to read it... I've read it to chapter 58 or something and it's one of the worst novels I've had the misfortune of wasting my time on.

Quick review pliz

Kyureki
2015-09-21, 04:13
guyy, perhaps you're reading this for the wrong reasons then. It's a slice-of-slice with comedy and the action bits are there only because the story requires it. The author even clearly stated so at one point. This WN is meant for a quick, light read without much thought required at all.

guyy
2015-09-21, 05:24
Quick review pliz
It's basically a gag novel that keeps repeating the same shit that weren't funny the first time. There is no proper plot or story, the characters are boring, their interaction is unrealistic and not funny. It has no actual content to it. The big bad guy is this one small fry man-turned-majin guy that no one gives a shit about and would be dealt with in the first arc he appeared in in any proper novel. The MC is boring and the OP magics and shit that he can do with his earth knowledge are boring.

My summary of the novel:
-MC is in the forest hut and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "oh no forgot to teach MC muh common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes to a school, meets some people and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes "nohohoon" and fights the antagonist, doesn't do his best and lets him run away like a retard
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC uses his magic some more
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense" "pls learn some prudence"
-MC: :confused:
repeat ad infinitum along with some teens going to school and training and going shopping while killing some trash peasant-turned-majin in boring combat and receiving medals and repeating some shit gags
I don't remember it all that well anymore but that's about how it goes

wuhugm
2015-09-21, 07:08
It's basically a gag novel that keeps repeating the same shit that weren't funny the first time. There is no proper plot or story, the characters are boring, their interaction is unrealistic and not funny. It has no actual content to it. The big bad guy is this one small fry man-turned-majin guy that no one gives a shit about and would be dealt with in the first arc he appeared in in any proper novel. The MC is boring and the OP magics and shit that he can do with his earth knowledge are boring.

My summary of the novel:
-MC is in the forest hut and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "oh no forgot to teach MC muh common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes to a school, meets some people and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes "nohohoon" and fights the antagonist, doesn't do his best and lets him run away like a retard
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC uses his magic some more
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense" "pls learn some prudence"
-MC: :confused:
repeat ad infinitum along with some teens going to school and training and going shopping while killing some trash peasant-turned-majin in boring combat and receiving medals and repeating some shit gags
I don't remember it all that well anymore but that's about how it goes

http://i.memeful.com/media/post/4wbk6WM_700wa_0.gif

So it's kinda similar to HP 1 Kara Blablabla
repeat ad infinitum of MC's stupidity

IWEEDI
2015-09-21, 10:21
It's basically a gag novel that keeps repeating the same shit that weren't funny the first time. There is no proper plot or story, the characters are boring, their interaction is unrealistic and not funny. It has no actual content to it. The big bad guy is this one small fry man-turned-majin guy that no one gives a shit about and would be dealt with in the first arc he appeared in in any proper novel. The MC is boring and the OP magics and shit that he can do with his earth knowledge are boring.

My summary of the novel:
-MC is in the forest hut and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "oh no forgot to teach MC muh common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes to a school, meets some people and uses his magic
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC goes "nohohoon" and fights the antagonist, doesn't do his best and lets him run away like a retard
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense"
-MC: :confused:
-MC uses his magic some more
-everyone: "amazing" "that's absurd" "I'm astonished" "as expected of MC" "MC has no common sense" "pls learn some prudence"
-MC: :confused:
repeat ad infinitum along with some teens going to school and training and going shopping while killing some trash peasant-turned-majin in boring combat and receiving medals and repeating some shit gags
I don't remember it all that well anymore but that's about how it goes

so basically, its like katekyou hitman reborn before it stopped being gag manga and started having a plot.

LevelSeven
2015-09-21, 11:38
so basically, its like katekyou hitman reborn before it stopped being gag manga and started having a plot.
to be fair, even the gag-storys became useful for later since the "near one-shot"-storys actually showed how tsuna came closer to his future subordinates :heh:

it is more similar to the 1HP-story (which i find funny since i only have read the 9 tranlated chapters (but the thing with the succubus/vampire-girl already began to irk me a bit :heh: ))

tsunade666
2015-09-22, 02:01
what do you mean with 1hp story? what story/title is that?

Kyureki
2015-09-22, 02:45
what do you mean with 1hp story? what story/title is that?

It was called something else before it got published, though I don't remember what. It's the one where the MC gets summoned and his status bugs out stating his HP is 1 when it's actually some absurd number and he's practically a god.

LevelSeven
2015-09-22, 06:21
what do you mean with 1hp story? what story/title is that?
basically what kyureki said, the english title is (i think )"Route to almightyness from 1HP" it has 9 translated chapters :/

wuhugm
2015-09-22, 06:38
^kusoo... I said it first goddamnit.....

Prongs
2015-09-22, 11:19
then I'll delete it from my bookmark

LevelSeven
2015-09-23, 03:26
^kusoo... I said it first goddamnit.....

you already compared them? :T_T: :meh:

HaseoTakiX
2015-09-28, 21:32
where can i find magi's grandson's translated chapter 16?http://japtem.com/projects/magis-grandson-toc/ only has up to 15 was wondering where to find the rest of them translated?

Kyureki
2015-09-28, 21:36
They aren't translated into English right now.

Schion93
2015-09-28, 22:48
it seems japtem isn't completely dead afterall...they all just took a month long break :heh:

Rageth
2015-09-28, 22:58
Seeing how they're "break" is over, we should be expecting Chapter 16 within a month or two.

Kyureki
2015-10-21, 03:18
Volume 2 cover has been released and...I'm not exactly sure how to react with the state Maria is on it....

Hokoga
2015-10-21, 04:26
http://2015oct.image.akibablog.net/images/18/column_famitsu/109.jpg

El Rue
2015-10-21, 04:48
Maria, your not an amazon or the Hulk.

Wait...wasn't she the one who often went to class in her pajamas?

Kyureki
2015-10-21, 05:04
Maria, your not an amazon or the Hulk.

Wait...wasn't she the one who often went to class in her pajamas?

No, that's a different person.

Okashira
2015-10-21, 05:13
Maria, your not an amazon or the Hulk.

Wait...wasn't she the one who often went to class in her pajamas?

Even if she is fully dresed, she is obviously running late there :heh:

I don't remember about any armor claded girl...... wait, she can't be the one that was "close" to developing a pseudo yuri attraction to the "saintess" in that joint school camp? :heh: :heh: Are they going to expand that part? :heh:

Aldheild
2015-10-21, 05:14
Hmmm... I just realized something very important.


Do bras not exist in that world?

Hokoga
2015-10-21, 05:52
Even if she is fully dresed, she is obviously running late there :heh:

I don't remember about any armor claded girl...... wait, she can't be the one that was "close" to developing a pseudo yuri attraction to the "saintess" in that joint school camp? :heh: :heh: Are they going to expand that part? :heh:The synopsis did mention something about a joint school camp with the Knight Training Military Academy.

Hmmm... I just realized something very important.


Do bras not exist in that world?Doesn't seem like it.

Kyureki
2015-10-21, 06:37
I don't remember about any armor claded girl...... wait, she can't be the one that was "close" to developing a pseudo yuri attraction to the "saintess" in that joint school camp? :heh: :heh: Are they going to expand that part? :heh:

She's Miranda. The girl from the knight academy that becomes friends with Maria after the first joint training camp.

El Rue
2015-10-21, 06:48
^I realize that a lot of my mental images for the rest of the characters are blurry & generic at best. I can't remember who's who anymore aside from the main ones.
Even if she is fully dresed, she is obviously running late there
She seems pretty excited to be late then. :heh:

NWJY
2015-10-21, 08:29
Is Maria going to be the next target??

Hokoga
2015-10-21, 10:15
Is Maria going to be the next target??Next target for what?

NWJY
2015-10-21, 11:23
To be conquer by Shin????

Hokoga
2015-10-21, 12:00
To be conquer by Shin????This isn't a harem series

LevelSeven
2015-10-21, 14:49
This isn't a harem series

really? :twitch:
cool :D

JamJackEvo
2015-10-25, 10:47
Why oh why are my eyes gravitating on Maria's crotch???

... ah! I get it now. The color of her panties make it look like she's going nopan and has Barbie Doll Anatomy.

Or maybe she does go nopan and I haven't read to that part yet?

Daike1234
2015-10-29, 10:37
The Illustrator is a Boob Man?
it always emphasize the boobs in his illustrations.

Prongs
2015-11-04, 02:50
Hmmm... I just realized something very important.


Do bras not exist in that world?

Maybe those girl is forgot to use it...

No harem? Sheesh

Prongs
2015-11-04, 02:52
Japtem is alive!!! Yay

Okashira
2015-11-07, 17:40
.....................


Did they screw? (http://i.imgur.com/StGXLi2.png) (End of vol 2)

Kyureki
2015-11-07, 17:43
.....................


Did the screw? (http://i.imgur.com/StGXLi2.png) (End of vol 2)


.....I'm completely blanking on any event in the WN that could possibly be. Either I forgot about it or it's a new scene...

El Rue
2015-11-07, 18:41
.....................


Did they screw? (http://i.imgur.com/StGXLi2.png) (End of vol 2)

I'm gonna' go with the usual MC powers of somehow being able to blow away a female's clothing into a state of close/near undress even if she's covered in armor, belts & several layers of clothing.

Daike1234
2015-11-09, 03:09
Probably new scene. or the scene was further than the chapters i read.

NWJY
2015-11-09, 07:16
MOre like accident trips onto her then strip her during the fall..............
a lucky pervert situation

iambill10
2015-11-09, 07:21
.....................


Did they screw? (http://i.imgur.com/StGXLi2.png) (End of vol 2)


I'm 99% sure that it's Sicily but I have to ask. Is she Maria?

Malicre
2015-11-09, 07:44
i got the impression from the web novel that Sicily doesn't really like Shin (at least not in a romantic way) and that Maria deep down loves him, just that she wont admit it because she thinks Sicily likes Shin.

SamVision
2015-12-09, 21:11
Okay I read all the translated chapters. Okay so far, but the tone is rather inconsistent. Also reincarnation was really unnecessary and doesn't add anything to the plot at all. The MC doesn't really act like an adult anyway.

Rageth
2015-12-09, 21:21
MC was a teen when he died, I think?

Anyways, Reincarnation is often used in web novels to explain why the MC's knowledge allows him to use magic that people in that world can't comprehend.
Normal people "just imagine fire" and that's it.
The MC "gathers oxygen and fuel properly, and ignites it", for stronger flames.

These are worlds where a basic understanding of chemistry and physics = super powerful magic, and are just designed to insert reincarnated characters for maximum OPness.

Unfortunately, the fact the main character is reincarnated isn't really used much in the story. It's sort of just brushed aside, and only mentioned a few times; "He has common sense, but it doesn't match with this world's" sort of thing pops up a bit. But like you said, his maturity basically reset.

Not really many authors who make a proper "reincarnation story", and most just do it for the wish-fulfillment factor, without actually utilizing it beyond that.

SamVision
2015-12-09, 22:40
I've yet to read a Japanese web novel that does reincarnation right. Every single one of them is just the author projecting their chuunibyou onto their story. I say just screw tensei altogether and focus on writing some entertaining characters and believable drama. But then again, web novel authors are mostly amateurs.

Tatara
2016-01-12, 02:20
It's me??.....I think after I read more than 40+ chapter it's started to get bored...

SamVision
2016-01-12, 11:57
It's me??.....I think after I read more than 40+ chapter it's started to get bored...
It's a reincarnation magic world story with an OP MC, but it is not harem. I take what I can get.

travelingbum
2016-03-01, 05:21
young ace up
ch0
ch1 april 5th

at least the art isn't like manuke fps lol

Okashira
2016-04-04, 12:11
Ah, manga looks like it's going to be a bi-weekly publication? At least this month has 2 chapters scheduled (one already out and one in 2~ weeks).

I'm a little conflicted on how they are drawing the jii-sans (the main draw for me :heh: ). Oh, the mamono bear has like, no freaking difference with an actual bear (I guess that's consistent with the light novel? I mean Karl didn't look in-human at all when he went bonkers).

Salante
2016-04-04, 13:26
Ah, manga looks like it's going to be a bi-weekly publication? At least this month has 2 chapters scheduled (one already out and one in 2~ weeks).

I'm a little conflicted on how they are drawing the jii-sans (the main draw for me :heh: ). Oh, the mamono bear has like, no freaking difference with an actual bear (I guess that's consistent with the light novel? I mean Karl didn't look in-human at all when he went bonkers).

There is no distinct visual difference between a normal animal or demonized one if I remember. Besides their mana signature and eyes.

Kyureki
2016-04-04, 14:33
There is no distinct visual difference between a normal animal or demonized one if I remember. Besides their mana signature and eyes.

For humans they only change eye colour, but for animals, they also grow bigger sometimes. But yeah, other than that, they don't really change much in appearance.

Okashira
2016-05-03, 04:17
* checks young ace *

Whoa~ , so young Merlin was a delinquent?? When does a prequel gets serialized? :heh: I want to read young Merlin's hot rod era version monologues on how he goes totally jelly over Merida :heh: :heh: baa-chan also does quite well; that game like outfit (RO's magician), she also earns plenty of points, good chap overall :heh: :heh: :heh:

Ruki0089
2016-05-03, 04:20
Prequel?? Merlin and marinda story??

Hokoga
2016-05-03, 06:58
* checks young ace *

Whoa~ , so young Merlin was a delinquent?? When does a prequel gets serialized? :heh: I want to read young Merlin's hot rod era version monologues on how he goes totally jelly over Merida :heh: :heh: baa-chan also does quite well; that game like outfit (RO's magician), she also earns plenty of points, good chap overall :heh: :heh: :heh:An I checking the right place? Young Ace (https://web-ace.jp/youngace/)
Because I don't see what your talking about. :confused:

Riz
2016-05-03, 23:38
* checks young ace *

Whoa~ , so young Merlin was a delinquent?? When does a prequel gets serialized? :heh: I want to read young Merlin's hot rod era version monologues on how he goes totally jelly over Merida :heh: :heh: baa-chan also does quite well; that game like outfit (RO's magician), she also earns plenty of points, good chap overall :heh: :heh: :heh:

An I checking the right place? Young Ace (https://web-ace.jp/youngace/)
Because I don't see what your talking about. :confused:

what he mean must be https://web-ace.jp/youngaceup/contents/1000015/episode/145/

BTW, that grandma got Bomb body when she young~

Hokoga
2016-05-04, 00:35
what he mean must be https://web-ace.jp/youngaceup/contents/1000015/episode/145/
Thanks Riz :D
Wow Merlin was a badassBTW, that grandma got Bomb body when she young~I know right?
No wonder everybody keeps mentioning how much of a babe Melinda was back then. :heh:

Ruki0089
2016-05-04, 01:01
Shin will create magic that made his grandma young again
.. And what happens next.... You know what right....

Riz
2016-05-04, 07:31
Shin will create magic that made his grandma young again
.. And what happens next.... You know what right....

Shin might have an uncle whose age (way too far)younger than himself in future. . .

Hokoga
2016-05-04, 08:58
^ Thanks for offsetting Ruki's dark and unpleasant scenario.

Ruki0089
2016-05-04, 09:02
^ Thanks for offsetting Ruki's dark and unpleasant scenario.

Seriously, if i was shin, i will do that for real...
and i will chris and Sicily virginity the moment i have change...:heh:

AnimeFangirl
2016-05-04, 09:04
Other than that, he doesn't seem like he was reincarnated even the slightest bit, which is a bit of a pet peeve of mine.
That's disappointing. It would be interesting if he kept using concepts or creating items from modern-day Japan (e.g. cars, trains, bicycles) to baffle the other people in his world, might make room for more jokes as well. If it's just an excuse to make him OP, boooo!

BTW, I see "Please do not repost these chapters/images without permission" on Japtem's website. Does that mean they got the author's permission before they started translating his novel/posting his images?

Kyureki
2016-05-04, 12:42
That's disappointing. It would be interesting if he kept using concepts or creating items from modern-day Japan (e.g. cars, trains, bicycles) to baffle the other people in his world, might make room for more jokes as well. If it's just an excuse to make him OP, boooo!

I think the closest thing he did to that was toilets. Though rather than creating jokes, it caused him to become rich as heck since everyone wanted to buy one when he opened up a shop to sell the things he invents with them being constantly sold out for a long time until supply could catch up to demand.

Ruki0089
2016-05-04, 12:47
He made toilet like gun ota MC?

AnimeFangirl
2016-05-04, 15:20
I think the closest thing he did to that was toilets.
That's what I'm talking about. That's the sort of thing that would have gotten me to read this novel... if it hadn't been for the borderline pornographic illustrations it contained, that is. :upset: I was all set to start reading too. -_-

Kyureki
2016-05-04, 15:50
That's what I'm talking about. That's the sort of thing that would have gotten me to read this novel... if it hadn't been for the borderline pornographic illustrations it contained, that is. :upset: I was all set to start reading too. -_-

I'm not sure what's the deal with those illustrations either. I don't recall them happening at all in the WN.

Greenish Growth
2016-05-04, 18:58
I'm not sure what's the deal with those illustrations either. I don't recall them happening at all in the WN.

I know at least one of the illustrations only occurred in the light novel.

Riz
2016-05-04, 20:27
^ Thanks for offsetting Ruki's dark and unpleasant scenario.
well, thank you~

Seriously, if i was shin, i will do that for real...
and i will chris and Sicily virginity the moment i have change...:heh:

if it's me, I'll take both Maria and Miranda Wallace of knight academy as well as a bonus :cool:

sandhy88
2016-05-04, 21:18
So, Manga already show Kyle McKane (forgot his name). Quite tame for Merlin & Melinda slaying their best friend. Become more curious for what the true tragedy that make Kyle become devil. It's not because Merlin marries Melinda right?:D:D Just because they had triangle relationship.

Stark700
2016-05-09, 07:17
Started reading volume 3 today:

Honestly, I think Shin should be more proud of his Ultimate Magician title.

sandhy88
2016-05-09, 08:20
Started reading volume 3 today:

Honestly, I think Shin should be more proud of his Ultimate Magician title.

It's not about title, but the naming sense.

And Ultimate Magician not as strong as Ultraman. Except Shin, they're equal with devilize knight, devilize magician, or devilize pro hunter. Just like demon, devil also has power level. if it's just devilize commoner/civilian, Ultimate magician can kill them easily.

BTW anyone know the nickname of other Ultimate Magician? What I know Just Shin, Gust, Maria, and Sicily.

Ruki0089
2016-05-09, 08:27
Well, let me guess their title with chuunibyo name like...
Gust, Magic Prince of Glory
Maria, Bloody haired of destruction
Sicily, The Bride of Ultimate Magician

sandhy88
2016-05-09, 08:47
Rank & Nickname of Ultimate Magician:

1st Shin (Demon King Satan)
2nd Gus (Thunder God)
3rd Maria (Valkyria) -> Pitiful girl who still seaching for boyfriend but the boys affraid of her Rank & Title.
?rd Sicily (Saint)
?rd Yuri (Guru Successor) <- Is this official???

I forgot the others. If I remember right, Rin (Destruction Magical Girl).

Hokoga
2016-05-09, 10:25
Rank & Nickname of Ultimate Magician:

1st Shin (Demon King Satan)
2nd Gus (Thunder God)
3rd Maria (Valkyria) -> Pitiful girl who still seaching for boyfriend but the boys affraid of her Rank & Title.
?rd Sicily (Saint)
?rd Yuri (Guru Successor) <- Is this official???

I forgot the others. If I remember right, Rin (Destruction Magical Girl).Wait, are those the actual titles in the story?
Because it's kind of weird for Shin to have the title [Demon King Satan], seeing as how he's supposed to be humanity's hero.

bludvein
2016-05-09, 10:39
Wait, are those the actual titles in the story?
Because it's kind of weird for Shin to have the title [Demon King Satan], seeing as how he's supposed to be humanity's hero.

This is because of a pun that doesn't work in English. 魔 can mean demon or magic. Maou can mean [Demon King] or [Magic King]. It started from a misunderstanding where Shin said something like "What do you think I am, a demon king?" Gus misunderstood and rolled with it. Besides, this setting has no maou so there's nothing negative associated with the name.

EvI
2016-05-29, 20:22
why was cecily crying in that illustration of volume 3? (just discovered this novel and i'm hungry for spoilers)

Ruki0089
2016-05-29, 21:05
Shin having affair and she find out:heh:

Okashira
2016-05-29, 21:27
why was cecily crying in that illustration of volume 3? (just discovered this novel and i'm hungry for spoilers)

Ah, that's probably when.......


Cecily was acting as a combat med in a castle with tons of injured; and there it was this one guy who she couldn't help regardless of what she did. Shin arrived later and he could heal that guy since unlike Cecily he knows how to do magical radiographies and thus can deal better with internal wounds which she doesn't understand.

The thing is that Cecily felt really powerless at that time, and even the wife of the injured guy was next to her as she tried to heal him which added pressure, I guess? In the end it was the wife the one that managed to cheer her up, I think she cries here?


..... Maybe? It's been a while.

SamVision
2016-05-30, 00:26
I think the manga does a much better job with regards to the visual portrayal of the characters. The LN illustrations are downright bizarre at times.

Sebazu
2016-05-30, 04:03
I think the manga does a much better job with regards to the visual portrayal of the characters. The LN illustrations are downright bizarre at times.

There's a manga?

Rageth
2016-05-30, 06:17
There's a manga?

If it's a Light Novel, it (probably) has a manga. Pretty much every light novel publisher at the moment likes to hire an artist to draw the manga, for those people that might be into the Light Novel if it wasn't for the walls of text.

KuroTian
2016-05-30, 22:25
There's a manga?
the is i've read it in mangapark

Ruki0089
2016-05-30, 22:54
Damn, the manga is so so good in the beginning.... it's so touching and I can't wait for more chapter....

EvI
2016-05-31, 13:59
Damn, the manga is so so good in the beginning.... it's so touching and I can't wait for more chapter....

i feel ya bro :heh:

we also need more Shin x Sicily moments

Ruki0089
2016-06-06, 07:59
Just finish read chapter 1...about shin killing a demon bear... Granpa Reaction was too funny...:heh:

Somethindarker
2016-06-09, 15:01
I'm currently reading it and found it entertaining the only reason he's OP is because he uses his past experiences to facilitate his magic, my only gripe though was him going to a "high school" I just groaned and rolled my eyes when they said that. Still gonna read it just not as enthused anymore.

Hokoga
2016-06-09, 16:03
I'm currently reading it and found it entertaining the only reason he's OP is because he uses his past experiences to facilitate his magic, my only gripe though was him going to a "high school" I just groaned and rolled my eyes when they said that. Still gonna read it just not as enthused anymore.A big reason is because from the very start he was taught by the best, be it his magic(which is different from everybody else's), his enchanting, or his swordsmanship.

Somethindarker
2016-06-10, 01:12
A big reason is because from the very start he was taught by the best, be it his magic(which is different from everybody else's), his enchanting, or his swordsmanship.

Yea loved the scene where he learned who his "family" really was, very funny sword master used to be a famous general, his grandpa is a world class hero magician, so is his grandma and his "uncle" is the king I was chuckling the entire time.

Rageth
2016-06-10, 08:23
I'm currently reading it and found it entertaining the only reason he's OP is because he uses his past experiences to facilitate his magic, my only gripe though was him going to a "high school" I just groaned and rolled my eyes when they said that. Still gonna read it just not as enthused anymore.

Yeah, the magic system in this world is conveniently easy enough for a high-school education to make him OP with just a bit of "proper training".
It's just for convenience sake. This happens a lot in "magic powered by imagination and nothing else" systems.

Somethindarker
2016-06-13, 13:31
Yeah, the magic system in this world is conveniently easy enough for a high-school education to make him OP with just a bit of "proper training".
It's just for convenience sake. This happens a lot in "magic powered by imagination and nothing else" systems.

I've read a bit ahead I think around chapter 46 or so and I got one question. Does the circle jerking ever end? Like the MC can't do absolutely anything without someone somewhere commenting about how great he is like, even in the bath we can't get a decent convo going without someone commenting how great the MC is, we get it he's OP we don't need to be reminded once every paragraph. Also is it just me or is Sicily literally only there to be a romantic interest? She's like air almost no personality other than being that cute girl. Those are my only real criticisms everything else is cool the prince, his grandparents even the big bad is cool the magic is also interesting. Gonna finish volume 2 and probably come back to it later when the story picks up more.

dmaxzero
2016-06-13, 13:48
The "hero masturbation" tag should be added.

SamVision
2016-06-15, 22:22
I get the feeling that the writer is just incompetent as an author. He quite literally doesn't know any other means of writing dialogue and exposition.

Somethindarker
2016-06-16, 19:55
I get the feeling that the writer is just incompetent as an author. He quite literally doesn't know any other means of writing dialogue and exposition.

What he needs is an editor that tones down his power fantasy for the sake of the story he could literally focus less on the ego wanking and use his time and energy to actually develop his characters. Hopefully the manga tones it down if not I'll probably drop it too and if it's picked up as a LN some rewrites fixes it.

edit; someone actually tagged "mc dick riding", my sides.

ShifuGamer
2016-06-16, 22:51
What he needs is an editor that tones down his power fantasy for the sake of the story he could literally focus less on the ego wanking and use his time and energy to actually develop his characters. Hopefully the manga tones it down if not I'll probably drop it too and if it's picked up as a LN some rewrites fixes it.

edit; someone actually tagged "mc dick riding", my sides.

Wait.... There's a manga version of Magi's Grandson already out?

Ruki0089
2016-06-16, 22:53
Yup, it's already out already...

SamVision
2016-06-18, 01:53
It's a reincarnation magic world story with an OP MC, but it is not harem. I take what I can get.

Oh my god. Did I actually post this comment? I deeply apologize for posting such a terrible opinion. I take all this back, just because a novel has a few elements that I like doesn't excuse it for being awful garbage. I'd sooner write my own novel than read something pandering to my tastes. I feel played here.

Somethindarker
2016-06-18, 08:18
Oh my god. Did I actually post this comment? I deeply apologize for posting such a terrible opinion. I take all this back, just because a novel has a few elements that I like doesn't excuse it for being awful garbage. I'd sooner write my own novel than read something pandering to my tastes. I feel played here.

It started off good so I can understand you posting your initial thought, it only starts getting bad a little after he joins the school, even then some parts of the story are good. The grandparents, Gus, the big bad, how the magic works and the MC's power are well written and interesting it's just that the flaws it does have are really holding the story down. Hopefully the manga fixes some of the issues.

Ruki0089
2016-06-18, 09:07
Reading raw.... the story starting bored me...

wuhugm
2016-06-18, 09:18
Just noticed the tags... the fuck :

mc dick riding, op mc circlejerk, shameless ego wank

Can anyone explain this mess?

Hokoga
2016-06-18, 09:21
Why is there a new releases tag?

Ruki0089
2016-06-18, 09:40
Hahahah
i don`t know who put those tags... but its better to remove it before Mod comings here~~

Somethindarker
2016-06-18, 09:57
Hahahah
i don`t know who put those tags... but its better to remove it before Mod comings here~~

Have any of you guys read the story? Pretty accurate if you ask me. Although, yea, too many I'll delete shameless ego wank.

Hokoga
2016-06-18, 10:04
Although I didn't add any tags this time and most of them are pretty accurate, but the new releases tag doesn't make any sense. :(

Greenish Growth
2016-06-18, 10:56
Yeah, the repetitive joke about...

"Wow! He's amazing!"
"As expected of him! Once again what he does defies common sense!"

"What? I don't think anything I did was anything unusual. Is there something special to what I did?"

....forever gets repeated over the course of the story. It's a long running joke. It's a little like the "Sakamoto-san is great" joke from the Sakamoto anime/manga.

Ruki0089
2016-06-18, 11:04
That's why I said that the story starting bore the readers...

Somethindarker
2016-06-18, 11:06
Yeah, the repetitive joke about...

"Wow! He's amazing!"
"As expected of him! Once again what he does defies common sense!"

"What? I don't think anything I did was anything unusual. Is there something special to what I did?"

....forever gets repeated over the course of the story. It's a long running joke. It's a little like the "Sakamoto-san is great" joke from the Sakamoto anime/manga.

But the thing about Sakamoto is it's a parody and the series in itself is a joke on how the typical MC would look to people around him. With Magi's Grandson it's not treated as such and it's shameless ego pandering to the max probably one of the worst cases I've ever read. The story aside from the pandering isn't bad, but after a while is just mucks up the immersion and investment into the story because the MC can't do anything without the people around him telling the reader how great he is, the main heroine is also flat as a character with barely role in the story other than being a main girl. The author really needs an editor to reign it in.

ChuckE
2016-06-18, 11:39
By the way, what was the age of MC when he died?

Somethindarker
2016-06-18, 11:51
By the way, what was the age of MC when he died?

Not 100% sure but I think mid 20's to early 30's.