AnimeSuki Forum - Conversation Between shelter and revan5

2011-07-17 19:09

revan5

got another one from my buddy Bmesias to motivate you to keep reading the second book.

Technically this is from the first book, but it was so lovely I thought you'd want to see it.

2011-01-11 01:48

revan5

How's that for a bunch of original characters from the second fanfic? I'm up to 32 reviews on the original, and if you ever feel like seeing the polished version, you can find it on fanfiction.net.

2010-11-14 22:42

revan5

The reviews are steadily coming in, and they all agree, you've got to read "Claymore: New Era"! Let's hear from some of the fans about their thoughts on Revan5's epic:

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A good Introduction to your setting, I do like that it is being told from a historical perspective, thought it makes me wonder who the narrator is.

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Ok, here goes revan5. When I started the story, I found the characters that were being used were new. This was a shock, hehe. But once you get past, the prologue, it is easy to follow and the way the characters are described gives and easy grasp of their personality and their appearance. I will say that I found the picturesque way which you described most incidents was well crafted and easy to visualize. Looking forward to you uploading all the chapters!

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Oooh, they're getting ready for some big action

, thank god I already have the story or I think I'd be dying of excitement.

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Alright so this chapter was awesome for the excitement, had a hard time editing it because I kept getting hooked on the story.

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I didn't think I would be interested in this story but boy ... WAS I WRONG! Chapter 8 was a classic!

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Also possibly one of the most, if no the most, epic chapter of a Claymore fan fiction I have read in a long time.

Have you been keeping updated as the story has been published on fanfiction.net? The reviews seem to be improving as the story moves along. You're missing out if you haven't seen the latest chapters.

A big thumbs-up for your help on this Shelter. It appears our team did a fine job.

2010-09-11 13:09

revan5

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAO4E...eature=related

"He's checking to see if each of the contestants is adequately hung over"

"Oh, it looks like illicit drugs have officially entered play"

"That's not the level of scorn I'd expect from a top competitor!"

"I haven't seen performances like this since last year's Douchebag Summer Games in out in sunny Santa Monica, California!"

2010-09-05 10:30

shelter

Yeah. I received your email. I'll be reading through it.

I doubt you need my approval for your story. The mere fact that you have done all those revisions is proof enough for that you've been doing something good. I'll look forward to seeing it on FF.net. That's the greatest thing for me.

2010-09-04 09:06

revan5

QUOTE]I think now that one of our favourite characters died, fanfiction would probably be the only appropriate way to remember & question all the what-ifs.

That #10 warrior is really some kind of cheat code.[/QUOTE]

The timing couldn't be any more unfortunately right on, as I'm just about to post this fanfic to fanfiction.net this month. Please let me know if the revised version wins your "seal of approval". I like to think this is the proper way Miria ought to have lived (in my fanfic), but obviously Yagi disagrees.

Oh, and Gangsta Spanksta said he loved how Dragonkin are introduced and portrayed in "The Silver-eyed Empress". I do think you'll enjoy the new work once its plot gets going.

2010-09-04 08:05

shelter

I think now that one of our favourite characters died, fanfiction would probably be the only appropriate way to remember & question all the what-ifs.

That #10 warrior is really some kind of cheat code.

2010-08-30 23:18

revan5

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=3880

"Just when I thought I was out, Revan5 brings me back in!" Oh sorry, I hope you don't mind me advertising the latest work on your wall. The first 3 chapters of "The Silver-eyed Empress" are now available, and I suspect will not need nearly as much revision as my prior work in "Claymore: New Era". Have a look and let me know. I think you'll find the change in scenery refreshing, although there are still some kinks to get out first.

2010-08-19 20:09

revan5

It's alive! By alive I mean a specific creature in book 2, buy hey, I'm sure me revising the Epilogue into the Prologue of Book 2, "The Silver-eyed Empress" wouldn't interest you. Nor the kick-ass chapter 1 that follows. Alright, so you'll probably enjoy these new works a lot! We can fix whatever isn't working in no time. Have fun browsing the new selections!

Big News though-the girl who did all the art in my sig is a month away from completing a cover page for my "Claymore: New Era" cover page. It'll be in color, feature multiple claymores, and probably rival anything Yagi's ever done in color. Ryus is of the opinion that Loivissa (who ironically can't find her AS password and told me via DeviantArt) is probably a better color artist than Yagi is. Stay tuned for new developments. I expect I'll have to post the first fanfiction, with some final polishing mind you, onto fanfiction.net in a few weeks.

2010-08-10 12:29

revan5

Shelter, I just edited the former "Epilogue" into the Prologue of the new work. Some edits were made, and should solve almost all of your prior issues in your review. You can find the the Prologue of "The Silver-eyed Empress" in the thread just under your last review. Don't expect chapter 1 of this new work for awhile though (two weeks at minimum).

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