Hmm... You're right about that. Okay, I can edit that, make it seem like Megane was too tired to do the teleportation herself. As for the other thing, hmm... I'll figure something out, but thanks.
Well, I know the miracle at the end of Clannad had to do with those glowing orb things and Tomoya had gathered a bunch by helping the other girls, but still. There's no point in Nagisa dying if that was just going to be miraculously invalidated anyways. Personally, I think the movie version ended at the right point: Nagisa dies, Tomoya mopes, his friends try to snap him out of it, make him face Ushio, and he gets on with his life.
I can't even begin to tell what's going on here, since it seems Rick keeps deleting Jimmy's responses. Why are you deleting them, Rick? All this does is destroy your case and completely discredit everything you say. Rather than sounding like a reasonable person, you make yourself sound like a petty child incapable of listening. Regardless, I'm not going to just stand back and let Rick have some silly temper tantrum because Jimmy points out mistakes.
Jimmy has already tried to help you. He has pointed out your errors and mistakes in the English language, yet your responses are of immature denial. What do you want from him? To fix your mistakes? You won't learn anything that way. Anyone can tell you that your grammar is bad, Rick. I have a hard enough time trying to read and understand these visitor messages of yours on this page. Rather than lashing out at people and calling them "jelows," work to improve your goddamn English. Don't tell me you can't because it's not your first language, and don't tell me you're just a beginner. There are many people here, myself included, that has English as a second, even third language, yet none of them has as atrocious grammar and spelling ability as you. 1 1/2 years is plenty of time to at least learn how to use a damn spell checker. You have no excuses regarding that. There are plenty of free programs that will do it for you, and I have seen people link you to sites that provide such programs.
I won't even go into your "art" but suffice to say I agree wholeheartedly with Jimmy's opinion.
YOU have no right to complain, because it's the bloody truth. Lashing out and people and giving excuses to hide that fact will not fix this problem. Only you can fix it by learning better English. Get off that false moral high horse you love to jump on every time someone says something negative to you. You are not the victim here. You are not the victor. And you are NOT RIGHT.
You can't even stand to look my art? Then why you needed to use the phrase "nightmarish to merely unpleasant"? more precisely, Why you needed to attack my Art in the first place?
Have no idea of wath is this "Record" of wich you'r talking about
I act as if I had the right to tell how your post? As far as I can see I'm doing what you did that time, posting something agresive against me when I had never even spoke to you, plus, If you can point out typos, I can sugest you tp do it trough PMs in wich they could work better
Sorry Jim, dead points, my precense just irritates you and I can't understeand exactly why? My grammar? As I said, I just learned to speak english 1 1/2 ago, I'm still rough, but I'm giving my best efort, of course, some people take this matter of the fics as something serious enough to "Critique and acuse" as you'r doing
