with the premise that I'm a total sucker at rewieing action.. well, I really liked it! ^^
your OCs are cool, they do mix well with the Code Geass character and the pace is nice! keep it up! *^_^*
btw - a littel suggestion: since the changes of scene are quite frequent, maybe inserting some spacing simbols (***) between the paragraphs as you change scene would help the reader :3