YAY! You've returned to us I was wondering when the next chapter was going to be finished. It's great that you are still keeping it up (Y)

in reply to your request:

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hf xD

Ah of course, I actually did mean to say Natsumi rather than Hinata. Whoops I eagerly await 4.75 however!

Nice ending to chapter 4. A Bleach reference aswell! Just out of curiousity, were we not supposed to know what happened to Ken and Hinata where he saved her life just yet?

I want to open that spoiler tag so much.

Soft M? More like a hard S. =| That isn't even cool. Placing a spoiler tag right in front of me. X(

So you are just a homage-writing subconscious writer? I sort of have to force myself. :| Then again I've stopped writing. xD I'll pick it up again sometime?

Okay, Good. I like Eternal Summer. Good writing. Once you complete maybe you could write extra stuff called 'finite days' to go with each chapter. Make like a parody or something XD. Sorry. Babbling.

I agree. But what about my friends who are girls? I don't want them to go "Ew! Arbitres is a perv!"... I'm trying to impress them with my icnredible arbitrator and pacifistic peace loving kindness! ;o

Dammit. Why must you torture me so? Vocalist Natsumi seems like a great girl and sort of like your type. Damn. Failed. Again.

I'm good at remembering lines. The 'most memorable' are like glued to me XD Yeah I love Gundams too.

Anytime. You are a bud, so I try to help. Hopefully college won't kill you. That'd be horrid. Especially before you finished Eternal Summer.

XD Put dat picture in a spoiler tag dude.

But thanks! I'll take that... and I also know who you are preferring. I knew Natsumi no.1 felt 'too perfect'. Bah x|

The line "This is where you are suppose to chase me" is from Louise from Gundam 00. I know it was in season 1 somewhere. XD

You like mind tricks, don't you? Dammit. I love Eternal Summer even more now. Very well done. You are a really good writer Paladin... Err.. Pala-tan I mean... 8)

Too bad you are busy. I totally loved the recent chapter. The "Perverts!" remarks never got old. Though couldn't you identify Natsumi's appearance more? I'm just throwing that out because I'm having a difficult time imagining her.

still can't get over the "This is where you are suppose to chase me" line in one of the previous chapters. Nice little homage.

By the way I'm wondering why you decided to have both of them named Natsumi? Isn't it going to be hard for some people to distinguish about which you are talking about? I'm sorry but I'm just throwing that out. Sorry if I'm bothering your VM board.

Paladin sounds cooler though. Pala is girly.

Actually I was asking for several reasons. Disregard it. Just my nitpicky nature Paladin.

I can understand being busy. How is college doing?

I'm just really looking forward to seeing how Eternal Summer plays out. It's interesting for sure.

... I've a question., Paladin.

...Is the recent chapter, or the chapter 'Birthdays were made to kill my wallet' a homage in some aspect? I'm just asking... I want to see how many other homages you put in there. I'll catch 'em all.

On that, I hope you keep doing a good job on it. I've been looking forward to more of it.