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The Librarians supporting the Enforcers on rush jobs like this (mimicking a race-against-time mission that we normally see in media) is a great way of making grubbing through books exciting, and also to show how essential these guys really are. Excellent as always, Dezo! :D I swear, I hit the end of the fic and I thought that it was Chapter 1 of many. Truly. *coughcoughhinthint* :) |
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Wait till you guys find out how Teana's part of the loop starts. :heh:
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Beyond the Edge Chapter Eleven: Allies, Enemies, or Friends? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5651895/11/Beyond_the_Edge “It's a little strange to think about another interworld organization like the TSAB existing side-by-side with the TSAB without ever really noticing each other.” |
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Needless to say, this whole thing left a grin on my face. :D I was always wondering if you would continue on with the whole Magical Librarian!Vivio aspect of the 'verse since you first posted a story about it awhile back, and this was decidedly awesome since we got to see just how the Library operates deep inside; not all that different from a field agent, really, even when they're using that power for different reasons. I am also now tempted to write a follow-up with Lutecia's side of the whole conflict, if only because it would be a lot of fun to write and you know Victor would get a kick out of seeing the usually calm, reserved Lutecia snappy and irritated. It's a very nice touch, though; it shows that even with the whole drama of the main storyline settled (what with Vivio being nineteen here), there's still occasional bumps and bruises along the way. I like, and it is awesome. :D I hope for more installments for this side of the 'verse! |
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Hmmm..... very very interesting short we have here! I really liked it and I'm interested in seeing how Vivio will access the Nexus and find the Book of the Dark Kings with her Godly (literally) clearance :D Also, I'd like to see this fight between Lulu and Vi developed. ;) I shall look forward to the next chapter *hinthintcoughcough* *digs a hole back in the ground and disappears* |
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Best time loop story I remember is the one from Xena: Warrior Princess. At one point she got so fed up she just killed whoever woke her up and went back to sleep XD As for Endless Eight comparisons, the difference here is that the parties involved remember everything and can actively try to change things. |
Time for part 3!
Window of Opportunity 1 Window of Opportunity 2 Spoiler for Window of Opportunity 3:
“Almost two weeks ago, a reconnaissance team discov—”
“We’ve done this!” Subaru blurted out in the briefing room, tossing a folder to the table. Hayate gave the girl a look halfway between disapproval at the interruption and amusement at the sudden outburst. “Subaru, we do this every time there’s a mission,” she said. “I’m not talking about briefings in general, Commander Hayate, I’m talking about this briefing!” Subaru explained. “I’m talking about this day!” All her outburst gained her was the blank stares of everyone else in the room, wondering if the girl had suddenly lost her mind. “Subaru’s right,” Teana said. “Events are repeating themselves.” “Since when?” Nanoha asked, putting a hand on her hip. “Since we went to Non-Administrated World #42!” Subaru explained, almost fed up. “We haven’t been to Non-Administrated World #42,” was Nanoha’s response. “Yes we have!” she argued back, then pointed at the others. “‘No we haven’t!’ That’s what you were gonna say!” “Of course that’s what we’re gonna say,” Yuuno reasoned, leaning forward on the table. … “Okay, bad example,” Subaru conceded. “Subaru, I’m not quite sure what to make of this,” Hayate said. Nanoha stepped forward. “If we’ve had this meeting before—” “—then why are me and Tea the only ones who remember it? I know, that’s what you guys said last time!” Subaru cut her off. “Well, I’ll venture a guess and say it has something to do with that Lost Logia,” Teana pointed out. Nanoha looked back at the screen, looking rather unconvinced. Subaru tapped at her wristwatch, looking at the time, and said, “And you’ll all believe us when Lightning Team shows up on the roof in… 4… 3… 2… 1…” Hayate, Nanoha, and Yuuno looked about, as if waiting for something to happen. Nothing changed, and Subaru nervously looked down at her watch, tapping it to see if it was off. “Lightning Team isn’t due back for another two days, Subaru,” Hayate said, frowning unamusedly. And then the holographic window appeared, with Griffith’s flustered expression appearing within it. “Commander Yagami, ma’am, we’re detecting an incoming dimensional transfer,” he explained. “It’s headed straight for the base.” Subaru’s fist hit the edge of the table in frustration. “So close!” ========== Shamal lifted up the flashlight and turned it on, shooting the light right into Subaru’s eyes, who patiently waited for the doctor to examine both before she blinked away the discomfort. On the bed behind her, Teana was having her blood pressure taken, and further back a nurse was fussing over Fate’s injuries. “You’re not going to find anything,” Teana said flatly. “We’ll need to wait for the lab results before we jump to any conclusions,” Shamal replied, jotting a note on her clipboard. “The results will be negative!” Subaru complained. Shamal only smiled. “Humor me!” she said, as Hayate and Nanoha arrived. “Well, Hayate-chan, I—” “Commander Hayate, ma’am,” Teana interrupted, holding up a hand to stall Shamal. “I know you’re thinking of postponing the mission, but there’s no point. We tried it last time, and it didn’t work.” Subaru accepted the thermometer that the nurse plopped into her mouth, already getting the idea that Tea’s argument will be futile. ========== Once again, Subaru found herself headed to the commissary after Hayate had decreed their mission postponed. She had an idea, too, about what was going to happen. She gestured with her hands, ticking off the seconds until… “Subaru, wait up!” … Yuuno came down the hall after her, intent to discuss the explanation they once again tried giving to convince Hayate not to postpone the mission. She sighed in acceptance of the inevitable and turned to face the archaeologist. They halted by the intersection as Yuuno spoke. “I was thinking about what Teana said, about a beam coming out—” “Four hundred pages of old Belkan script,” Subaru blurted, causing Yuuno to blink in mild surprise. “… right. The recon team took images of the ruins,” he went on as he brought up the window. “Looks familiar,” Subaru said, frowning. Guess speeding up things wasn’t going to save the poor guy. “But I’m not that great at translating stuff.” “No, I understand, I was just thinking, if you could give me more details about the layout of the ruins, I could—” And once again, Yuuno found himself slammed to the ground as a distracted Shari turned the corner, sending them both to the ground. Guiltily, Subaru realized she probably should’ve moved him out of harm’s way, as Shari spouted apologies for the accident. ========== Subaru knocked on the edge of the open door to Commander Hayate’s office, causing the woman to look up from her report as both of the lower Stars Team members entered her office. “Any word from Shamal-sensei?” Subaru asked worriedly. “We’re still waiting on the lab results,” Hayate replied. Teana shook her head. “If we delay any more it’ll be too late, Commander!” she exclaimed. “Too late for what?” “To stop this mess from happening again!” Subaru nearly shouted. “You realize, girls, this is a little difficult for me to accept, right?” Hayate said, propping her head up with her arm. “Hey, if it was just me, I’d agree!” Subaru said. “But what about Tea?! C’mon, is this the face of a crazy woman!?” Tea blinked and gave Subaru a side-long look. Subaru swallowed and calmed down. “Bad example,” she conceded. “Girls, what do you want?” Hayate asked, no longer willing to put up with this. “We want to go back to World #42,” Teana informed her. Hayate sighed, weighing her options. ========== Light flashed as the dimensional transfer finished, and Subaru, Teana, Vita, Nanoha, and Yuuno appeared within the entryway to the ruins on Non-Administrated World #42. Already it was blazing hot, and as they stepped forward, Raising Heart chimed with a warning. “A geo-magnetic storm is building,” came the smooth female voice from the red gemstone hanging from Nanoha’s neck. “Be careful, my master.” “That’s the Lost Logia right there,” Teana said, pointing ahead of them before headed down the steps at a brisk pace. She already had Cross Mirage set up. “I wonder how it works,” Vita said, frowning as she followed her with the others as they made their way to the Lost Logia. “Beats me,” Teana admitted. “We got interrupted when Nanoha tried to explain last time.” The scholar Bantam came around the corner of the ruins, not noticing the returned Stars Team as he made his way to the Lost Logia. “Freeze!” Teana shouted, aiming her Device at the man and causing him to halt in his tracks. “Hello,” he said, holding up his hands. “Whoa, easy,” Yuuno said, stepping out before them. Subaru shook her head. “That’s the guy,” she pointed out. She had her mother’s Revolver Knuckle out as well, ready to clobber him if he did something funny. “He’s the one who started all this.” Bantam merely looked confused. “I-I-I-I don’t understand,” he said, panicky. “Whatever you did, I want you to undo it!” Tea commanded, her aim not wavering in the least. “I didn’t do anything!” “Tea, I don’t think he knows what you’re talking about,” Nanoha said, looking over at the young woman. Do you think he doesn’t remember, Tea? Subaru asked privately, sounding unsure. Tea’s frown increased. “Oh he remembers,” she said. “He was the one pushing all those buttons.” “Please, I’m just an archaeologist,” Bantam explained nervously as he approached his bag on the Lost Logia altar. Tea’s aim followed him, making sure he wouldn’t try anything funny. “I’ve been trying to translate these symbols. I-I-I-I-I told the others who came before you!” “You mean the recon team?” Yuuno asked. Behind him, Vita was frowning, and had Graf Eisen in her hands, making the other archaeologist only more nervous. “Yes! But they, uh, didn’t point Devices at me,” he said, though Teana remained unconvinced. Panicking, he reached for his pack. “Look, I can show you my notes—!” “Ah! Don’t you dare!” Tea said, jolting forward. The women kept their Devices trained on him as he stumbled to explain, even as Subaru moved around and picked up the man’s knapsack from the Lost Logia. “I’ve been making periodic visits to this world for some time now, my research is almost complete!” Subaru pulled something out of the pack—a thin, metallic card, a Storage Device similar to the ones the Lieze twins used during the Book of Darkness incident. “What kind of archaeologist carries a combat device,” Subaru demanded, looking ever like a mother who’d caught her child with their hand in the cookie jar. “Um, I did, for a while,” Yuuno volunteered. … “Bad example,” Subaru conceded. She reached in and pulled out another device, like a PDA. Turning it on, she was immediately greeted with the image of a beautiful woman smiling at her. Bantam only got more nervous. “What’s this?” the cyborg asked of the man. “If you must know,” the man spoke, sounding defensive, “It’s a picture of my wife.” The PDA suddenly beeped, and immediately, the Lost Logia came to life as the tablet buttons started moving of their own accord. Subaru immediately backed away from the machine, as did the others. Teana made a soft curse under her breath. “Who did that!?” Vita demanded, as energy built up behind the group. “Nobody did anything, Vita-chan, it engaged on its own!” Nanoha exclaimed. “Well, turn it off!” Vita shouted. “I don’t know how!” “It’s drawing off energy from the ionization in the atmosphere!” Bantam blurted out, explaining the phenomenon. “There’s nothing Captain Takamachi can do!” “… how’d you know her name!?” Teana demanded, readying a magic bullet with Cross Mirage. “You told me!” he sputtered. “No we didn’t!” Subaru shouted back. “Not this time around!” Sighing, Bantam dropped his arms, as well as the act. “It doesn’t matter, you’re too late now.” “How do you shut this thing off!?” Vita demanded, aiming Graf Eisen at him. “Even if I knew, I wouldn’t tell you.” “Nanoha, it’s building up some kind of charge,” Yuuno warned, looking back at the ruins behind them. “Yuuno-kun, you know how to read this stuff, right?” she replied. “Try to shut it down!” “Are you kidding me?” came his incredulous response. “I wouldn’t even know where to start!” Behind them, a beam of energy lanced out of the nearest pillars, spearing through the smaller ones until it struck the array and activated it as Yuuno explained. “It could take years to translate this, I don’t even have enough—” ===flicker=== “… anyways, I’m sorry, but that’s just how I happen to feel about it,” said the voice of Vice Granscenic as light faded. “What do you think?” The spoon clattered into the bowl as Subaru dropped it, her palm quickly slapping against her forehead. 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Poor girls. Now they're on their way through the third time loop, though it looks like this time they got a little bit closer to preventing it. One has to wonder how long it will take before Subaru and Teana decide to just give up on trying to convince the others and go out to resolve the issue on their own. |
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Subaru's failed dramatic revelation made me laugh out loud :D. I wonder how many time loops it would take for Subaru to finally remember to pull Yuuno out of the way??? XD I like how both Subaru and Teana were suspicious of Bantam, nice to see that they're not fools. It's rare to see genuine competency in humour fics, so I liked seeing it here! |
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Anyway, why do I have the feeling that once someone points out that "hey, anything you do won't matter on the next loop" that they're going to do what Jack and Tea'lc did when Daniel pointed it out to them? ... Except they don't have a Stargate to launch golf balls through the universe. |
I've posted the first part of Window of Opportunity up on FF.net. But now, it's time for Part 4! Sadly, no Tea start yet.
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Nanoha approached the large holographic screen and opened her mouth to begin the briefing.
“Alright, here’s the deal,” Subaru announced before she was even given the chance. “We’re all stuck in a time loop of some kind.” That certainly got their attention. The three others present placed their attention on Subaru and Teana, both of whom were standing up together. “However Tea and I seem to be the only one who realize it!” Subaru continued. “Now there’s this Lost Logia on Non-Administrated World #42, that shoots this magic beam at the transfer array. It uses the…” Subaru fumbled for the terms and turned to Teana, a pleading look in her eyes. “It uses the dimensional barriers and the way the array travels through them for the effect. It’s powered by ionization.” Subaru was nodding rapidly. “From the atmosphere, right! Which is caused by… ah!” she held up a hand to stall Tea, who was just about to fill in for her again. “I know this one! It’s caused by… magnets?” “The geo-magnetic storm, Subaru,” Teana said patiently, rolling her eyes. “Of course,” Subaru said, turning back to look at Nanoha and the others. Hayate opened her mouth, but she too was cut off as the cyborg continued. “Anyway, we don’t know why none of you remember anything!” she explained quickly. “But I do know for a fact that there’s no point in having Shamal-sensei examine us again!” Nanoha looked over at Hayate, who returned the gaze before looking back at Subaru and Teana, both of whom nervously awaited their response. ========== Shamal lifted up the flashlight and turned it on, shooting the light right into Subaru’s eyes, who patiently waited for the doctor to examine both before she blinked away the discomfort. On the bed behind her, Teana was having her blood pressure taken, and further back a nurse was fussing over Fate’s injuries. “I ask you,” Subaru growled, getting fed up. “What could possibly be in my eye that could explain this!?” Teana looked ready to chew on the thermometer that was placed in her mouth. ========== “So what do you make of all this, Nanoha-chan?” Hayate asked her friend as they made their way through the base. “Well, Hayate-chan, when was the last time you heard Subaru use terms like ‘dimensional barrier’ and ‘geo-magnetic storm’?” Nanoha asked, shrugging. “Good point.” “And she actually used them correctly!” Nanoha continued, amazed at it. “For the most part.” Hayate gave the other woman a sidelong glance. “You believe them, don’t you?” “Well, I’m considering the possibility,” she admitted. “I mean, the more I think about it, if their right, the ramifications are huge!” “And next time time loops, this conversation will haven’t even have happened,” Hayate noted, her shoulders sagging. “I’m afraid so.” ========== Yuuno quickly gathered up the last of his notes on the recon team’s findings on the ruins, and stepped out of his temporary office, and right into Subaru’s waiting hands, which gently pushed him back inside. “You’re better off in here,” she explained. “I was just about to look for you,” he mentioned as moved back, letting both girls in. “I know,” Subaru said, halfway frowning. Yuuno set the report down on the desk and motioned to a holographic window he had up. “I managed to translate a section of the west wall,” he explained. “It appears to be some sort of planetary history—” “Yuuno-san!” Teana cut him off with a shout. “That’s very nice, but can we please focus on the altar!?” “Why?” the archaeologist asked, adjusting his glasses. “Bantam initiated the time loop by manipulating the symbols on the surface,” Subaru explained. “Figure out those symbols, and figure out how to stop this!” Oh yeah. Teana was really getting fed up with this incident. “Just because someone can recognize symbols on a keyboard doesn’t mean they know how to run a computer,” Yuuno explained to the girls, very patient with them. Thanks to Arisa back on Earth, he’s had a lot of practice at putting up with fed-up girls. “If I can translate the rest of the text, I can put up some sort of context and be able to figure out what it’s supposed to do.” “We know what it does!” Teana exclaimed, throwing her hands up in the air. “It’s a time loop machine!” “Well think about it,” Yuuno said. “Who’d build a device that loops time every ten hours?” “Who knows!?” shouted the redhead, then continued in a quieter voice. “But that’s what it does.” “But maybe that’s not what it’s supposed to do,” Yuuno pointed out. “I mean, for all we know, this may be an accidental byproduct of its true function.” Before their argument could continue, a new screen appeared by Yuuno, displaying a series of text that he quickly read. He typed a reply and sent his message back, closing the screen. “Shari has something on this.” Hope in their eyes, the girls bolted from the room, with Yuuno quickly hurrying after them. ========== “According to Subaru,” Shari began in the briefing room. “She and Teana witnessed a beam striking the old Belkan dimensional transfer array on Non-Administrated World #42, and then the resulting portal that appeared became energized somehow.” Hayate, Yuuno, and both Stars and Lightning Teams were present for this meeting, listening to what the scientist had to say. “And then back here, at the exact same moment, the portal that appeared here experienced the similar effect.” “Sounds about right,” Teana replied, nodding. “Okay, so, if we really are under the influence of a Lost Logia, the effect is clearly being translated through the dimensional transfer array! So it’s simple enough to stop it!” Shari declared excitedly. Signum and Vita were both nodding, understanding how the device worked—they could only transport things across dimensions one way. “We just need to connect to it ahead of time using another transfer array,” Signum said. “Right! A few minutes before this loop is supposed to begin again, we create a Belkan-style dimensional transfer to Non-Administrated World #42’s transfer array, and that way the beam can’t translate to this planet. It’ll get a busy signal, for lack of a better term.” Subaru and Teana looked at one another. Could the solution be so simple? “Let’s give it a shot!” Hayate exclaimed. ========== “Let’s do this, Graf Eisen!” Vita shouted, readying her dimensional transfer. “Jawohl!” the hammer Device replied, slamming a cartridge in. A blood-red Belkan magic circle erupted beneath the tiny Wolkenritter, in the courtyard that Subaru and Teana told them was where the transfer would occur. Back in the base, both girls, Hayate, Nanoha, and Fate stood watching through the window. Shamal and the others were waiting outside in case anything went wrong and Vita got hurt. Vita concentrated, trying to complete the spell, and Teana and Subaru waited with baited breath. After a few moments, her eyes shot open with an expression of shock. I can’t connect to the array! she yelled telepathically. It’s like it’s not even there! “What? That can’t be right,” Shari muttered. She opened a screen and ran a diagnostic on Graf Eisen, but the Device showed no problems—just an error message stating that the spell couldn’t be completed as the destination just wasn’t there. Suddenly, ahead of Vita, a second Belkan magic circle appeared, bright white in color. “Aw, crap,” Teana cursed, her shoulders sagging. Subaru groaned. Energy blazed out of the dimensional transfer, stunning all but two of them. Hayate whipped around to look at the girls. Subaru lifted a hand and waved goodbye, just as the light became blinding. ===flicker=== “… anyways, I’m sorry, but that’s just how I happen to feel about it,” said the voice of Vice Granscenic as light faded. “What do you think?” Subaru fell back into her seat with a sigh, her spoon clattering into the bowl once more. Vice and Alto both blinked at the action. “Ask me tomorrow,” Subaru sighed resignedly. After this the repeated "briefing announcements" stop, I promise. =X |
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