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Well my mains are a Priest and a Paladin in WoW. And I usually go for the healing character in any game, and I'm a trainee doctor IRL, hence my nickname 'The Cleric' or in this case 'der Kleriker'. :heh: Besides, I think we now worship the Boost class for all the cool tricks they have. There's a rogue up there I think, and Lowe's Kay should be a full arcane mage. Quote:
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Zoids New Century - Liger Zero Gundam Wing - Tallgeese for Jaegerform Gundam SEED - Avenging Wrath reinterpretation Casshern - Inner Barrier Jacket Full Metal Panic - Lambda Field, Whispers of the Ascended Archspace - Whispers of the Ascended refers to an in-game event World of Warcraft - Paladin (Most of the skills) Final Fantasy 7 Advent Children - Gemi-stigma Neon Genesis Evangelion - Gemi-stigma Starcraft - Zerg Warcraft 3 - Burning Legion Command & Conquer 3 - Scrin Robotech US - Invid (though I'm sure that came from somewhere else first) The Forever War - Tarsons Eragon - Dragon Rider (Though that can be anywhere) Intel - "Core Fusion" was a processor chip BLEACH - Flash Step (Also any shounen anime) Jigoku Shoujo - the first 3/4 of Confession is Enma Ai's pet phrase LASTEXILE - Claudia crystals DotA - Divine Rapier. My favorite holy weapon. HERE - Heterophobe legion The original henshin was based on the "Final Fusion", but Subaru got to it first, so I edited it out, and became a general random super robot combination. :heh: Phew! Did I miss anything? After all that was looong. :D I understand the problem of such a character. In fact, most of this file was never used. I personally keep it as a souvenir for fun, as a perfect example of what is fun to do but NOT good to do. :p No not that... Joke desu, you know? It was fun, tongue glued to cheek desu. lol But thanks. I thought I was about to be shot to pieces for posting something like that, even though it was really modelling my habit of grabbing little pieces around me to make into a new story. |
Ok first I'll reply to comments for my character and other things, then I'll review the new submitted characters. (Dang there are a lot!)
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@Skane Well, at least for my character, the "ranks" are used as an estimate of her ability. Not to mention her magic rank is B. :heh: I agree with what you say, though. I guess for new characters we have to mention how are the magic ranks used: if they are military ranks or just estimates of your character's ability. Example: In the first season, by the time Nanoha cast SB, her estimated magical power was AAA, but she had the experience of maybe a military rank B, or even C, mage. Quote:
About the Counter Combat Style, as you said it is basic. I wanted to add more to it but I didnt know what to add. :heh: I was just trying to emphasize that, with her ability to materialize any weapon on the fly, she specializes in counterattacking rather than trying to get the initiative. I'm glad you liked my assassin. :D Quote:
While I definitely liked Emiya Shirou's materialization techniques, having my character say, "I need a blade able to penetrate that barrier!!" or something, feels really out of place in the Nanoha-verse, as the creation of such blade would not have any logical explanation (using Nanoha-verse terms). My real inspiration was Kurapica, from Hunter X Hunter. :bow: Thank you all for your comments. I'm glad you guys liked my character. :D |
Ok, we've got plenty of unconventional, extremely capable Nanoha protagonists by now. What we need, therefore, are some antagonists ala Fate from season 1, for our protagonists to interact with.
So I made one. And then I read back through what I'd made, looked in the mirror, and told the guy staring at me, "...Man, you are MESSED. UP." :twitch: Spoiler for I can't believe this came out of my imagination...:
Now, as far as meeting the forum rules about commenting on other peoples' characters: Kha, it shows you put a lot of time and thought into those characters. Having said that, with the number and level of abilities you put into der Kleriker, I may have to start referring to you as Gah! instead of Kha. :P Definately an alternate universe character, though, with all the non-canon revisions to Fate's backstory. (Nothing wrong with that!) VERY nice detail in the visual descriptions. Enigma, love the concept. I've been expecting someone to look at how the Wolkenritter might have to face up to their past sins, and it looks like you're version has a lot of potential. USB500, just one question: where does Leonidas' stand on the views expressed by this board's 300? :) |
lol Wow, so many new characters to read^^ I'll have to read them all carefully before I can really comment on them, but I'm kinda busy right now (just trolling). Give me a couple hours and I'll have comments as well as additions for my charcter to boot^^
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I'm quite busy today too so I havent been able to check out the newly submitted characters. I'll check them out in order when I get home tonight.
For now, though, here are my comments for Keroko's character. - First, I wonder, did you come up with Aspect magic and all the dragons yourself? The whole story was very interesting. - I love the part about Keroko being good friends with Nanoha. I already pictured a scenario where my character, Sophia, meets Nanoha and the rest of the cast, too (with lots of encounters and blood... :heh: well, not that many...). I dont know if I should post it here or in the Fanfic thread... (not to mention I'm afraid some will consider it lame... :p) - More on Keroko and Nanoha's relationship: I find it weird that, in StrikerS, Nanoha didnt make a friend in a similar way and invited him or her to Hayate's unit. It would have made so much sense. And Nanoha being as popular as she is (the Ace of Aces), I would have thought of a huge group of Nanoha Fanclub members begging to join Riot Force 6. :heh: - Hyperdrive... Disgaea reference? ;) - Ok, lets see if I understood this: What Aspect mages do differently, when compared to Mid-Childan and Belkan mages, is that they draw their magic energy from one of the five great dragons. This energy is imbued into a magical device, which has a limiter to control the power (in the case of the Black aspect). - You know, it sounds fishy that the TSAB would allow mages to choose the Black aspect even though it is extremely unstable and full of dark and negative energy. Maybe you could have said that Keroko chose to become a Black aspect mage before she joined the TSAB, and that she had been corrupted by the negative magic and thus not able to stop using it. Then the TSAB applied a limiter to her device in other to keep her in control. (Whoa, I found Keroko's story to be quite interesting so I came up with different scenarios for her background. Of course, its your character, so this is just some fanfic about it... I guess :heh:) - Very good character. I really like her background story with Nanoha, as it seems very natural if added to the main StrikerS storyline. If you made a fanfic about Keroko when she was training with Nanoha, the fanfic could also go as a Nanoha fanfic about her days as a trainee. - The fact that Caro has a dragon summon can only mean one thing: Your Aspect magic may actually be for real. :eek: |
Loner, I really like that character, Shizuko, great description. When I read the way she converted energy into usable magical power I cringed. This girl is really messed up. Shizuko has a lot of potential, but in the end I don't think a little "befriending" would help too much.
I made some small changes to my character's description and added "Arcane Magic." The simplest way to explain Arcane Magic would be to use Final Fantasy XII/X-2's Arcane Magic(k) as an example. For one to use Arcane Magic, sacrifice has to made, such as dealing triple damage but losing a bit of HP yourself. This sacrifice is known as "feedback." Arcane Magic is really about manipulating the soul, closely related with the linker core. It's a very dangerous type of power that should not be used frequently and each use should be carefully planned out for maximum effectiveness and minimum feedback. Every Arcane ability has the possibility of affecting the caster. Here are some examples: Soul Siphon The most commonly used ability by Amemiya is one embedded in Sirocco itself. There are two types of siphoning, active and passive. Passive: collects only the excess, free-flowing magic power and soul power in the environment Active: forcibly leeches power from living beings and converts it to magic power. Has the potential to drain even the caster's power. Heat Removes some mental inhibitions of the target. Target may cave in to irrational behaviour (similar to Final Fantasy's Berserk). May have similar effects on the caster. Mind Cloud Softens situational awareness, allowing for greater deception and less attention to detail in a high-pressure situation (Similar to Confuse) Grim Reaper Target experiences near-death, being pushed on the brink of insanity. Only effective on those afraid of dying. Sweet Sorrow Similar to Grim Reaper, the target is assaulted by his own fears and failures. Caster must have knowledge of what the target is truly afraid of for maximum effectiveness. Soul Sacrifice Boosts magic output (for a single attack or for a period of time) while weakening caster's defense against Arcane Magic. Very dangerous spell if used frequently. Salt Wounds Boosts strength (for a single attack or for a period of time) while weakening caster's physical defense. Very dangerous spell if used frequently. You'll notice that a lot of these abilities are mindgames. If I can get through the Prologue of my fic, I think I'll be in good shape. I'll try not to make an original character the most prominent character featured. |
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Haha..The Gil Graham Screwed Love Chronicles, as cranky as it sounds, is serious. Imagine the original Nanoha season and A's only with young Graham and without a very happy ending, where both seasons has important women in Graham's life bite the dust. The first season being ARIA, and the second Lieze. As for where Lotte plays a part, let's just say she's Mary Jane in the ending of Spiderman 1 movie, only without a happy sequel for her. :P Spoiler for Aria:
I'm halfway through Admiral Lieze, but got stuck due to not being so sure how to handle her shotacon side (( She's 32, when Graham's 19 )) while still making her a strong, mature adult female and how to handle her 'death', so I'll give ARIA first...which has some problems too, but you know...flexibility. :) I had 3 "references" in my magic spells. Cookie to anyone who gets all right. :P |
lol this thread has sorta died down now hasn't it^^ well I'll see if I can spice things up a bit^^
I'm really loving everyones ides, really well thoughtout. My only thought is with giving a character uber ranks like S. Come on, your like making uber rare mages that are suppose to be few and fleeting I think a nice cap is AA, good but theres room for improvement^^ Ok Back to my character^^ For those who have forgotten, this is where she stands as of now http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...1&postcount=14 now on to chapter 2^^ Spoiler for How Aselia Joined TSAB, RF6:
Heres something for ppl to chat about. Let me know what you think, as well as suggestions to improve it^^ I'll post chapter 3 when I have it finalized. Here some hints, she gets he device and barrier jacket, and a familar face will join in the trainning exercises, try to guess who^^ |
I just love the characters you guys just posted. Give me some times so that I can comment each and every one of them. ;)
@ Skane: Well, I guess I should edit some of my future characters. I appreciate your feedback. @ Kha: ...did I sense shameless self-promotion? :heh: Quote:
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And no cookies for me, since I don't get the references :heh: |
Leopold Goe-- I mean, Grandeur
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Android? That's so new to me. And... Graham, you have complex! OHNOES! :heh: I heard someone needs an antagonist. So.... Spoiler for new antagonist:
Okay, done. Abilities, checked. Forms, checked. Background, checked. What else? :heh: Oh, yeah. I hope the Latin translations are correct, because I'm using online translator to translate the stuffs. |
Hm, I would have thought someone from Gault, Wizard or Sorcerer would be a villain, not someone from Schnee. Nonetheless it looks good, I hope you'll have her say "(insert country here) mercenaries! This is gonna be fun!" even though that's what Schnee 1 would have said... speaking of which, who is Schnee 1? You've got Schwarze 1 but no Silber 1 as well.
I hope someone will say "No rules in a dogfight, you just have to take the enemy out." I await the next batch of characters. I think I'm going to want to replay a campaign in Zero now... |
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If you're referring to my post, Schnee 1 would be Eleanor herself (she was a squad leader when the incident took place). Otherwise, Schnee 1 is Erich Hillenbrand, the Eternal 2nd Lieutenant. Don't worry. I'm sure Eleanor doesn't really want to be a villain in the first place. :) |
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Uh... No not really. His story's been developed over several short stories I wrote offline for the informal writing circle I was part of back in my home country, and I made sure I balanced it and kept it in canon as much as possible. :heh: @Loner: Revisions? I thought there was no data on her past in the first place as I thought the YnS illusion was based on Fate's wish for a happy family rather than fact. And so, I conjured up this scenario to insert a char believably into the story while not disrupting the canon events (which explains Kha's absence during all anime series) such that there's no canon trace that he's ever there, but it was because he's somewhere else when the canon took place. This only works if everything fits nicely with canon, which until recently was all anime-canon. However, my lack of light novel and manga knowledge impedes me from being 100% sure, and thus I am concerned, for my friend's gonna be using most of the proposed backstory so I got to correct it fast. As a Fate-fanboy and considering almost all of my fics has some conjecture related to Fate's past, I better get this straight. How much about Fate's past is there in canon across all media (light novel, manga, sound stage, anime)? Has there been contradictions amongst the media? Quote:
More skills for Nanoka and loli Capn. Tessa coming soon but in the meantime keep the comments coming! :) |
"the prefect antagonist would be the inverse of Nanoha..." - which i'm trying to do without making it look like a clone of Nanoha.
geez, no one even commented- figures that i can't do anything good in a three hour high-avail period. *sulks in a corner while thinking of something for the weekends. |
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Lemme see if I can give it a try...
The Aston Martin (European luxury car manufacturer, often known for their very expensive custom made vehicles) and McDonell Douglas (the latter formerly one of the largest aircraft manufacturing companies in the US, responsible for the development of aircraft such as the F-15 Eagle and F/A-18 Hornet. Later bought by Boeing after experiencing financial difficulties in the early 90s). :D |
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Now back to working on Tessa-chan... :heh: |
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