Nanoha FanFiction Discussion
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Hello and welcome to the Fanfiction thread! Everyone's stories are welcome here, so do not hesitate to share! This post will be edited constantly to try and keep track of the many, many fanfics posted here. Below are the Author's names and the stories of Nanoha that they have written. If you would like your name and story to be added, please contact me via PM.
When people post a link to fanfiction.net or some other website that is a place for your story, I will add them to this list. If you see one that I missed, please let me know. Be advised that because people post little snippets and teasers constantly on threads such as this, only links will be added on this post. -Please PM me if there is a mistake in your profile- This post is only for an archive or stories, please feel free to post your stories normally here on the thread. For the new members here, I have put together a small guide that may help you get started. You can find many of your questions answered by going here. Ilya has also gathered up many of the terms and names for pairings that you might have questions about. If you ever run across a term you don't understand, chances are you can find it here. TheShinySword has kindly gathered up all of the “shorts” that are posted here. A “short” is a story that was made for fun and generally only last for one post instead of becoming a story. The Shorts Archive The Crack Archive The Shorts Archive 2 Spoiler for Authors A-M:
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Title: The name of your fanfiction genre: romance? Action? Main couple: (can be left blank if not needed) Summary: (a brief summary of this work, to grab people's attention) Rating: K,T,M // P,PG,R ? Link: a link to your fanfiction.net posting of story, or if it's only available on AnimeSuki then the link to your post. If you have more than one chapter on AS, please provide links to each post. If you have one chapter spread apart multiple post, please gather them together and place them in a single post for the ease of the people reading (the fanfiction thread is a good place to post them!) Also, if you have a post profiling your OCs, please include it as well so I can add it in your profile. |
We... We can post right? :uhoh: I just noticed bad things went down last night and... Well er. Moving along.
This was posted in the (I guess old) thread but since it is locked and all. I'll like to remind people of something here: I didn't write this. This is written by my friend that is helping me with my little project here. I'll pass along all comments and such to him though of course. :nod: Spoiler for Arc-en-Ciel:
I also finished the 2nd chapter of School of Lyrical and will be updating it on Fanfiction.net once I get back from my English class in a few hours. And err... If we weren't meant to post like this. Sorry. :uhoh: *Flee* |
*Cracks knuckles* Right, new thread, new start. Since I can't whip up a new fic in a few minutes, I'll start of with a repost. It's been months since I last worked on this story, so a little review of what happened might be a good idea. :heh:
Now, this story is intended to dive into Ancient Belka, which -being a non canonical setting- means that there will be OC's apearing next to the main cast. They will be introduced, though, and I'll make effort to keep them limited. Legend of Ancient Belka: Fall of an Empire. Spoiler for Prologue:
Spoiler for Part 1 A burning vessel:
Spoiler for Chapter 2: Playing with politics::
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Well to be fair Keroko it was meant to be a teaser... :nod: So it was meant to be short enough to grasp your attention and get that exact reaction you just went through. So it worked. Bwhahahahahahah. :eyespin: And I'm sure in the full chapter you'd know Erika's full looks :heh:
But I'll pass along those comments when he signs back in. Working on uploading School of Lyrical 2 (Which means typing it) then I'll take a peek at what you posted. :nod: |
How do i killed thread? :uhoh:
that'll teach me to listen to the mods and not get involved in random snowballs rolling downhill... :p anyway, @keroko: is it just a coincidence that Alistinas picture bears a huge resemblance to your own avatar? ;) also, primarchs, the moment i read that i got the mental image of big burly men from WH40k, then the picture you attached came along for a mental image clash of the century, causing me to lock down for several seconds :twitch:... but i got better, really wish there was more though as the premise is interesting. well, as long as no emperors come around anyway... :D |
@Keroko: What's the name of that story?
Lyrical Days update will be on hold for a day while I situate myself. Next chapter of Saved by the bell should be started on tonight :D Also, if post here and have your Nanoha stories on FF.N, let me know so I can add you to my list. If you post stories here and don't have them on FF.N.... I'm trying to work out a system that could work :heh: |
Ow, ow. Sore arm sore arm... *cough*
So I finished the 2nd chapter of School of Lyrical. It is officially my longest piece of writing ever for a chapter at 2,364 words. Enjoy it please? ^^; http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4000626/2/School_of_Lyrical |
Broken link there. Any FF links with the word secure and live preview is accessible to the author alone. Click on your FF bio (and hope you did not click before adding the chapter) to find the right link. :heh:
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But as a random suggestion to make it neater...cut out the author's comments line? Unless if it's specifically requested, I don't think there's a real need for it. But that's just me. I don't have any specific comments to make, since I'm used to rambling in fics itself. Spoiler for And several other trimmings for neat look..:
I did suggest bolding and italizing too, but then that did be too much work. Point in fact, I think it is already too much work... *gives e-cookie to Satashi* |
Oh whoops, thanks there. I fixed the link :heh: Now to read some stuff 'ere...
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The full title is 'Legend of Ancient Belka: Fall of an Empire', mostly shortened to 'Fall of an Empire.' Eagle, Kriz, I'll comment on your stories later, promise. |
I remember the second chapter of that Keroko. It is good stuff, I like it. :nod:
It's interesting and well described :heh: I think I shift too much from a second and third person point of view in my own writings. |
Have you forgotten my story already Satashi-sama?!
I'm hurt! XD http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3854549/1/Road_of_Love There. Now my issue has been sated. |
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Good piece, Kriss. =3 |
Wow the Nanoha section is either heavily frequented or my works are actually getting a name for themselves considering I've broken the 200 hit mark faster then ever before. I used to be able to refresh every few minutes and see the hits going up!
All the comments make me very happy. Makes my time of writing it all out very much worth it. :nod: Chapter 3 won't be up until at least Monday. I think I'll drop by college to use their webz tomorrow, but I won't be done with it by then (I haven't even started it yet). Again this is not set in stone; at EARLIEST Monday. But it could be a longer wait. But I am aiming for a Monday release, failing that Tuesday... And so on. Once School of Lyrical is done I'll begin work on my... I guess you can call it masterpiece project :heh: A big word I know, but I don't think I've written anything of the scale I am imagining it to be. The overall thing me and my partner in crime dubbed 'Arc-en-Ciel', and you saw a snippet of the 'series' from the Varista point of view (From Erika von Cale's eyes). Mine would be seeing the stuff from the TSAB's view through Rune's eyes. I hope it'll be epic :nod: :heh: But it is a ways off. A lot of work to do... If you want, I can ask my partner if he wants to have chapter 1 done as a teaser or something :heh: |
archive post updated, please check if there are any mistakes in your section. If you are not added yet, please PM me with the information.
(Keroko please let me know what to add on yours) On that note, I'm going to start writing on my fics now ^^; Fast Lyrical Days. Sorry it's not too long but I want to start on SbTB as well tonight. Spoiler for Lyrical Days:
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Glad that Nanoha is looking a little better. Leaving her alone too much could have taken things to a bad place. As always quite the relationship going on with Yuuno there. Now for the next course of action. Has been a while since doing something with Fate. Just ignoring her isn't going to help things all that much. Have done plenty with Hayate so can spend a turn doing what we can elsewhere. Somehow don't think Fate would care that much how much money was spent on the date. So will go B this time. Though I'm not sure when I picked the winning one last...hmm Maybe I'm out of touch. |
Hehe, just remember kids, if you ignore a girl long enough, you get flashed! :heh:
And in case anyone was wondering, yeah, if you skipped buying a present last choice you go on an expensive date. |
*mulls* Augh, damnit. Such hard choices for once.
*thinks* *thinks more.* *rapid headbashing* Got it! I'll go B. Fate just strikes me as a person who wouldn't mind too much about the price of the Date. But then again, I could be wrong. |
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Saludos, Haru |
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And BTW, I don't have nothing against you Hayuuno :) Saludos, Haru |
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now, i'm also voting C On a sadder note i think i'll be refraining from reading any new fics for a while, i already got a few of the backgrounds they have for Fate mixed up... which confused me while reading lyrical days... :( ...or it's the pain medication from my tooth removal, either way, i'll be refraining to the three satashi writes for a few days at least... :sad: |
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What to do, what to do..... A will most probably lead us somewhere interesting but we can't really ignore Fate.... Hayate needs some checking too since she could over-exert herself and fall sick again.... I'll refrain from making a decision for now and will vote once I re-check the current status of all three girls, seeing who's the one who should get the least neglected for this choice :D |
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I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, and it is nice to see Nanoha feeling happy as well. Yuuno sure doesn't realize how good he has it there. As for the choices ... whoo boy, a tough call between A and B. A could lead to something interesting (and risque :p), but Fate needs some attention as well. I don't think she would care about money at all (not like she is spoiled in this aspect) and would be just happy to spend time with Yuuno. I think he should forget Hayate for now and focus on his "domestic problems" :p Lets see ... we probably scored a lot of points with Nanoha, which means her affection should be pretty high ... since Fate is high on the affection meter as well, makes me wonder: doesn't it only get worse if we keep shuffling between the girls and boosting points with both in the long run ? One is going to have a heartbreak sooner or later ... and the later it seems, the bigger it is likely to be. Ok ... gah. Nanoha and Yuuno make for a cute couple and i like her antics, but in the end Fate needs some attention as well, and it is not good to leave promises hanging. B Quote:
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Acting on impulse, I reached forward and popped the top snap-buttons on Nanoha's shirt open, revealing her breast fully. "Definetlly a ten on the stroke-o-meter. SCHWING!" [/Wayne's_world] How's that work for you? I think Yuuno would have gotten that slap after all with that one XD Either that or his pizza might have gotten burned >.<b I'd really prefer it if people read the story before they voted since their vote could be entirely off ( like how Haru is trying for N/F but is actually working away from it) But everyone is entitled to a vote. that means you too lurkers! Everyone can vote, so don't hold back. The point of an interactive story is to be interactive and hopefully make some people who don't post to come out from hidings and start talking more ^^ Right now I find myself awake at 3:30 AM with a headache and can't sleep. Going to try and write some or maybe scan some doujinshi. |
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...and replace it with pure crack or something, i could probably write stuff that would make even the OC thread wince a couple of times :D Edit: and mind you, they did have an instance where Spoiler for dunno, might actually spoil something.:
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Hahah, well that was interesting, although he so should have be slapped :D A is my vote. Let's see how far this goes. If it does infact go anywhere. Quote:
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When I start writing the proper story to my OC's I'll post it here if anyone wants to read it. It'll make sense I promise :p |
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And when you get any of your stories together, let me know and I'll add you to the archive and link them all so people will have an easier time reading and finding them ^^ Edit: @Eagle-chan: I changed your profile in archive, how does it look? I think I'll go with that if people think it's neater :) |
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Now, for options. With Nanoha saved, I'm leaning between B or C... however, Yuuno did promise he'd take Fate out one of these days... gotta stick to you words Yuuno. B Quote:
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Lyrical Days
Lovely chapter :D Was Nanoha acting slow on purpose or just was so shocked it took her brains 5s to process the upcoming information? Great moment. As for the choice, I'm feeling that Fate is in need for attention so B it is for this time even that something is bound to fail with this equal attention sharing. School of Lyrical I can't wait to read more of this but Spoiler for Spoilering comments:
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I don’t want to end up crying out of frustration again at one of your “destroy the happy family fandom” fics, so it would be better if I don’t waste my time and only read it when I’m sure that is NanoFate and not… something else. I have asked you which is the option that will guide the story to our good final, and you haven’t told us, so it is not my fault if my option is not making the fic’s way towards the desired end, since the succession of events depends more in your mood than in the voted option, because if you want to direct the plot to a specific path you can easily do it in a world with unlimited possibilities like this one, independently of if you’re “forced” to write something specific due to the selection of certain option. Because of this reading the “fic” will not help me to lead the fic where we want, since we can’t know what you are thinking for the plot and if effectively there are possibilities for that good end. Saludos, Haru |
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And no, I'll never guide the story the way I want. This is to be interactive with everyone and everyone's vote is what counts. If I wanted to do my own story, I'd just simply do it XD (that's why I'm doing three fics at the same time hehe) the best I can say is, yes, N/F is available. No, I don't mind if it goes there. But yes, Yuuno is the main character and thus his relationship is the foreground- so other relationships would be hard to get. |
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But, uh, side note... summary =/= summery. :heh: As for Lyrical Days, I have to say the premise is...interesting. Somewhat. O_o Since I didn't read previous parts, though, I think I'm just going to see how this unfolds. Quote:
Well, I'm just going to say, think outside the box. Or rather, don't think too far...the answer might just be under your nose. =P Any particular questions you may have? Though, of course, whether I may answer it or not is an entirely different question... That aside, I'm not much of a fic reviewer but...sometimes I either say too little or too much, which plays a hand in lack of commenting. So here goes my question to previous fic posters: Is there anything in particular you would like thoughts on? |
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There's no clear option set for a single route since this is not how it works, that being fairly obvious by now, and asking for a answer regarding that serves no purpose since it might go in a completely different direction by the next decision point. It's definitely not, as you put it, "forced", since the options were decided solely by the writer and each option thought out beyond the options alone and not after it was selected, with each and every scenario ready before the selection is done, as far as I understand by Satashi's explanation sometime back. The option that wins the most votes simply means it gets written, nothing including impulses after that. It is evident that a fair number of people who participate in the voting as well like their NF fics but do not mistake to think that they will share your opinion of non-commital participation as well. If the ending turns out not to be your liking, all I can say is that it can be partially attributed to the single-minded pursuit which backfired in the end. |
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first we went all around, then pursued fate, followed by hayate, people tried to wrench it over to vita but we instead went after nanoha for a sec and now it seems we're back on fate... :eyespin: |
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Nanoha has interest in him but my vote goes to supporting hayate. Not that I like the idea of him being ungreatful for fate chan's gourmet but the alternative leads to a worse outcome :rolleyes: *clicks C* On a sidenote...wow you guys actually got the other thread locked...lol... |
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