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White Manju Bun 2011-01-28 03:34

Madoka Magica - FanFiction Discussion
 
Welcome to the Madoka Magica FanFiction Discussion thread.

This thread is meant for Madoka Magica fanfiction and its discussion. Fanfiction works can be either posted in this thread or in the Fan Creations Forum and linked to in this thread. You may also link to Fanfiction works posted on other sites and discuss it here.

General rules of our forum still apply:
  • No sexually explicit material. Yes, this goes for text format as well.
  • Be polite to your fellow forum members
  • Have fun, but post intelligently

Please respect the authors, fanfictions are written in their free time, they have have no gain and owe you nothing; if they like a particular character and/or a particular pattern for their story, it's a personal choice and can't be blamed. In general, you are free to post constructive criticisms but not insults which (as in any other part of the forums) won't be tolerated. Remember that writers post here to get help and not to get troubles.

Thanks and have fun :)

BaKaBaKaOtaKu 2011-01-28 07:46

i love fanfics so i wanna read some homura-madoka ones. LOL.

panzerfan 2011-01-28 15:55

Ok. You wanted a fanfiction, well here's one. (ongoing process. pitch in if you are in some legal department)

Spoiler for Puella Magi Services Agreement, 2011:

Kismet-chan 2011-01-29 00:30

No sexually explicit content~? Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, bollocks. *puts away raunchy Mami x Madoka story* :'(

ronelm2000 2011-01-29 00:45

l.ol.z

Anyway, is there a section in FF.net for Madoka? I wish there is. XD

aeriolewinters 2011-02-06 21:50

Spoiler for If you're a believer in the 'Kyubey = evil' theory, here's my piece, it's a crossover with a fairly popular Magical Girl Franchise:

Here's my work so far :D

blitz1/2 2011-02-19 03:01

We need a index/madoka crossover fic NOW, with all the increase in Touma with Madoka characters (and you know a certain beat up Kyuubee)

Hagoshod 2011-02-22 01:29

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6764651/...isine_Critique

Spoiler:


I hope you like this story. I enjoyed writing it. Maybe a little too much.

panzerfan 2011-02-27 17:37

Ok. Here's to major case of blatantly taking Faust and apply it with only a fresh coat of paint.
http://pastebin.com/aEUXXwWJ

Spoiler for At Train Station:
Spoiler for In Gloomy Field:

Dark Wing 2011-02-27 22:48

Quote:

Originally Posted by blitz1/2 (Post 3494310)
We need a index/madoka crossover fic NOW, with all the increase in Touma with Madoka characters (and you know a certain beat up Kyuubee)

Well I wrote a quick short story about Toma facing off with Kyuube.

Note: I'm not that great of a writer so please excuse me if any of it needs some fine tuning or an over all...:heh:

The cool night air howled over the buildings while the last light of the moon started to eclipse by the dark clouds above as Kyuube sat on the ledge looking out high above the illuminated metropolis. At that moment Kamijo Toma burst threw the door leading to the roof of the old clock tower it's hands slowly ticking away to midnight which would signal the beginning of sacred ceremony of Walpurgis Night.

Beads of sweat rolled down Toma's face as he pants to catch his breath. "So, You've finally arrived...Kamijo Toma." Kyuube said, slowly as he turned to face the young man his glowing red eyes pierced the shadows. "It's a shame your too late Walpurgis Night will soon begin and then..." However before being able the to finish his sentence Toma ground his teeth and histed."How dare you!" Kyuube meeting Toma's gaze as he steps into the small patch of moonlight. "Now Kamijo Toma tell me exactly what have I to you in order to receive such hostility?...as a matter of fact as fare as I can tell you have nothing to gain or lose from this situation." Silents fell between then neither breaking his glaze from the other.

After a few intense seconds Toma closing his eyes and smiled while letting out a sigh "You're right I have nothing to gain or lose..However!" As his voice deepened and eyes began to burn with an intensity that would melt the strongest steel. "What you have done to these young girls is unforgivable!" Clinching his fists he continued. "It sickens me...Twisting their hopes and dreams for your own selfish gains, Promising them the world then leaving them with nothing, and walking away like you are not at fault!" Toma started walking slowly toward mystical creature. "They deserve better...to grow up happy and health yet you show not one bit of remorse trapping them with your lies and for the crimes you have there will be no mercy...I will destroy your sick illusions!"

sa547 2011-02-28 22:41

I will not be surprised if someone decides on creating an Eva/PMMM crossover.

ronelm2000 2011-03-02 07:56

Wait...there's a MADOKA category in FF.net now!

I MUST go to work. immediately!

Possible Upcoming Project: (for April)
Puella Magi Madoka Magica and The Lovecraftian Anomaly
Madoka (after the series, depending on how it'll work out >.>) would (assumed) to be a Puella Magi. The main premise is:

1. Madoka accidentally getting on other dimensions (huge crossover)
2. Madoka meets Houkago Tea Time (of K-ON!! Chronicles)
3. dunno about others.

sa547 2011-03-02 08:01

Writing a small introspective piece about Mami right now. Will post later. :)

MeisterBabylon 2011-03-02 09:40

Since there's no original character creation thread, I'll post her here too. She's the star of her own side-story. :D

BaKaBaKaOtaKu 2011-03-02 10:06

i hope somebody writes a mado-homu fic. xDD i'd begin reading fics of MSMM after the series ends. a post-series fic would be nice. XD

sa547 2011-03-02 13:50

All right, guys... It's done, but I'm not sure except I'll be fine with whatever C&Cs you can provide:

One-Tenths of a Second: The Short Second Life of Mami Tomoe
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6790620/1/

Hagoshod 2011-03-06 04:03

I think "What's Eating Mami Tomoe" would be a great title for a Madoka Magica fanfic, but I can't really think of a story to go along with it since I already wrote the Charlotte one.

:(

sa547 2011-03-06 04:25

^
To do just that, you have to go deeper into the mind of the average Japanese teenager, taking account of how he/she lives, desires, hates, and what they're looking forward to.

In that case... Imagine Mami trying to find the right hairdresser who could fix her curls. :)

Triple_R 2011-03-07 23:26

I've just started a fairly unusual Madoka Magica fic, crossing it over with a prominent comic book franchise.

To make it work, I've fused the two respective fictional universes of those two properties (Madoka Magica, and the comic book universe) together, and have crafted a detailed backstory for Madoka and her friends based on it. That I will reveal later, but I want Chapter 1 to start the ball rolling in a less "info dump" way that simply hints at some major revelations within my fanfic.

Anyway, here it is... Of Super Men and Magical Girls.

Any and all comments are welcomed. Even non-comic book fans are probably familiar with the comic book characters in this crossover. :heh:

This was inspired, by the way, by a discussion between Reckoner and I.

ninryu 2011-03-08 10:47

Anyone read The Shiny Sword's fanfic?

MartianMage 2011-03-08 10:52

Please post Homura x Mami fics :3

Hagoshod 2011-03-09 18:34

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7zaybWlXVdI

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSYiS52LsOM

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6791403/...on_the_Mamihod

Spoiler:

DJLowrider 2011-03-10 16:14

Just a little something I whipped up here on a whim.
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Spoiler for Can't believe no one else has thought to do something like this yet.:

sa547 2011-03-10 21:07

That was damn wicked. :D Can set that to a metal track.

Hagoshod 2011-03-11 13:36

Oh look, an alternate interpretation of the Timeline 3 scenario that (I'm pretty sure) doesn't violate any of the principles carried into Timelines 4 and 5.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6814603/1/Last_Requests

Midonin 2011-03-12 16:47

Some people make off hand jokes and leave them be. I make off hand jokes and turn them into stories. It helps that I'm sticking very close to the structure of something previously released. That was in neither of the fandoms this story involves. Written and published in the course of...this afternoon.


"We're the legendary warriors."

Hagoshod 2011-03-12 19:15

Quote:

Originally Posted by Midonin (Post 3528913)
Some people make off hand jokes and leave them be. I make off hand jokes and turn them into stories. It helps that I'm sticking very close to the structure of something previously released. That was in neither of the fandoms this story involves. Written and published in the course of...this afternoon.


"We're the legendary warriors."

So much Pretty Cure.

Midonin 2011-03-12 21:39

And yet the story itself is based on a completely different fandom. And even then, it's based on a DVD produced largely for crossover fanservice and jokes. Never let it be said that I don't stick to my lack of standards.

Hagoshod 2011-03-13 21:02

Hello Animesuki.

Are you having FUN today?

Are you feeling HAPPY right now?

Then please allow me to emotionally crush you again with the following Madoka x Homura story:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6816395/1/Everyone_Dies

Hagoshod 2011-03-18 19:30

I killed Cure Pine again.

I really should stop doing that.

kaigan 2011-03-19 22:34

my one-shot fanfic. no offense to mr. max ehrmann. i just can't get hold of myself.

Spoiler for QB's Desiderata:



i hope you enjoy ^-^

Laevatein 2011-03-21 15:12

Nice version of "Still Alive", DJLowrider. Actually, speaking of song parodies, I've got an idea stuck in my head for a Kyuubei version of "Poor Unfortunate Souls" from The Little Mermaid.

NeoEevee 2011-04-04 20:03

Hello all. Would anyone like to help me out with these fan-witches? xD; I mostly need names, but other feedback is helpful...

Witch #1: The witch of sunsets. This witch was originally a magical boy who used his wish to protect the ones he loved; but the pressure of the keeping them, and the world(s), safe was too much, and he became a witch (er, warlock?).

This witch has a selfish nature, and will draw anything that comes near into his barrier. However, he will not attack. He only sits and stares at the perfect sunset he has created. If an unfortunate person gets too close, however, they will be enveloped by [s]carnivorous marshmellow flesh[s] the witch and sent to the inner-most part of his labyrinth. You can distract him by giving him a particular flavor of ice cream.

This witch's barrier places all who enter on top of buildings and skyscrapers, with the witch clearly visible at the end of the maze; now the challenge is getting over to him without falling. If/when you fall, since witch barriers seem to be a large middle finger to physics and whatnot, you don't die or be injured from the impact, but you will be preyed upon by his familiars, as the bottom-most layer of his barrier is the darkest and most dangerous.

The witch himself is made of carnivorous marshmellow fluff replicated the form of the Twilight Thorn from Kingdom Hearts 2, with some more brightly colored armor a la the final boss of Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days; but the form that appears in his inner labyrinth is a chalk-white copy of his human form. His familiars... I'm torn between a whole-sale rip-off of the Samurai Nobodies and a Suspisciously Similar Substitute.

Witch #2: The witch of doorways. This witch is the brother of Witch #1; they share a heart and soul. So when one became a witch, the other went with him. Like his brother, Witch #2 draws all who come near into his barrier; but unlike his brother, it is out of a deep desire to make friends. Unfortunately, this often leads to him smothering his "new friends" with blobs of carnivorous marshmellow fluff.

I don't have any ideas for the Witch's design or familiars, but his barrier is made of doors; doors everywhere. Each room they lead to is different, and they frequently shift around.

Witches #3 and 4: Born from a common heart and supernaturally linked to Witches #1 and 2, these two are referred to as the X-witches ("x" being pronounced as "key" or "kai", for the record), and theirs is a dual nature. They share a barrier whose design is derived from the Bad Apple!!! Shadow Art PV: #3 appears as a white silhouette, and #4 appears as a black silhouette. The labyrinth itself is either a black or white background, and frequently features no scenery at all. While these witches only have the special abilities they had as humans (hey, wait a minute...), the way they appear can easily disorientate a person.

Witch #3 is the milder personality. He tries to only appear when the background is black, so you may see him easy. He will fight fair, will not use familiars, and will be careful to cast a conspicuous shadow when the background is white. However, while he fights fair in this regard, his attacks are merciless. Though he has less physical strength, he lands blows very fast, and he is the more resilient of the two.

Witch #4 is the opposite. He will hide in a black background so you never see him coming. He'll mob you with familiars and sneak up on you however he can. To make matters worse, his attacks are stronger and equally fast. However, one hit will send him sprawling.

Their familiars are creatures that change with the scenery, much like in the Shadow Art PV. Unlike the witches, their shade will change in either background so you may easily see them. Their shapeshifting may make them difficult to beat.

Witch #5: Sister witch to the above, Witch #5 is the malleable witch, with a curious nature. An able mind may shift reality however they see fit in her realm. She will let you do this, and will then take advantage of the new terrain. The only point where reality is fixed in her barrier is a small, grassy spot with a folding metal chair in it. Expect to be sitting in this seat surrounded by people congratulating you when you defeat the witch.

Most of the time, however, the barrier is blank white, and it is easy to find the witch if you believe she will appear. Her appearance, while it always looks like barely-animated sketches that've been colored with markers (maybe she ran out of ink?), is different depending upon who sees her.

Also, if she hugs you, you melt into Morning Rescue.


Okay, again, I mostly need names (and remember that Witch #5 is the only girl! xD;), but other ideas are most certainly welcome! ^^;

...should I be having this much fun creating monsters?

kaigan 2011-04-05 06:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeoEevee (Post 3558194)
Spoiler:

name suggestions, though no relations to the warlock/witch descriptions:

w1: Godfrey
w2: Gottlieb
w3: Grendel Konstantin
w4: Franz Wulfstan
w5: Astrid

omimon 2011-04-05 15:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by NeoEevee (Post 3558194)
Hello all. Would anyone like to help me out with these fan-witches? xD; I mostly need names, but other feedback is helpful...

Witches #3 and 4: Born from a common heart and supernaturally linked to Witches #1 and 2, these two are referred to as the X-witches ("x" being pronounced as "key" or "kai", for the record), and theirs is a dual nature. They share a barrier whose design is derived from the Bad Apple!!! Shadow Art PV: #3 appears as a white silhouette, and #4 appears as a black silhouette. The labyrinth itself is either a black or white background, and frequently features no scenery at all. While these witches only have the special abilities they had as humans (hey, wait a minute...), the way they appear can easily disorientate a person.

Witch #3 is the milder personality. He tries to only appear when the background is black, so you may see him easy. He will fight fair, will not use familiars, and will be careful to cast a conspicuous shadow when the background is white. However, while he fights fair in this regard, his attacks are merciless. Though he has less physical strength, he lands blows very fast, and he is the more resilient of the two.


...should I be having this much fun creating monsters?

You play Kingdom Hearts don't you?

Triple_R 2011-04-05 15:50

I'd be interested in reading a good Kyouko/Sayaka yuri fanfic.

Anybody here know where I could find one? Anybody here up to writing one? ;)

NeoEevee 2011-04-05 16:03

Quote:

Originally Posted by omimon (Post 3559302)
You play Kingdom Hearts don't you?

Yes. Far too much to be healthy.

Snork 2011-04-08 07:02

Quote:

I'd be interested in reading a good Kyouko/Sayaka yuri fanfic.
Fanfiction.net has a bunch of those already, mostly bittersweet romantic decadence revolving around the events of ep 8/9. I personally liked Matchmaker the most, it's touching and decent (despite being in M section, although I really can't see why it was put there, something like T would be enough).

Akashin 2011-04-08 10:01

Quote:

Originally Posted by Snork (Post 3562721)
Fanfiction.net has a bunch of those already, mostly bittersweet romantic decadence revolving around the events of ep 8/9. I personally liked Matchmaker the most, it's touching and decent (despite being in M section, although I really can't see why it was put there, something like T would be enough).

Its 'cause ff.net staff are fickle at the best of times; thousands upon thousands of easily NC-17 yaoi go untouched, but I've seen T-rated stories with little more than a hint of anything M-rated (I don't consider depictions of blood to be M-rated, but apparently they do; go figure) get taken down for less. Just better to err on the safe side if you're uncertain, and Matchmaker did have a hint of sexual content somewhere in there.

Edit: It isn't Kyoko/Sayaka, but Anything Worth Doing is Worth Doing Badly by ZipCode is arguably the best PMMM fic on the site. The rarity of the pairing (Homura/Kyoko) makes it that much better, though the style of writing is a bit jarring and the way it ends up leaving small details you wish were there out can get a tad annoying. Nonetheless, its definitely got the best depiction of Homura I've yet seen, and its depiction of just about every other character is just as good.

Riga92 2011-04-09 01:01

^ I just read that fanfic and wow, it is amazing.

The author depicted every character perfectly. Its so amazing that I imagined the whole story as I read in my head, as if I was watching an actual episode of Madoka.


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