Fate/ Series FanFiction Discussion
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This thread is meant for Fate/stay night fanfiction and its discussion. Fanfiction works can be either posted in this thread or in the Fan Creations Forum and linked to in this thread. You may also link to Fanfiction works posted on other sites and discuss it here. General rules of our forum still apply:
Please respect the authors, fanfictions are written in their free time, they have have no gain and owe you nothing; if they like a particular character and/or a particular pattern for their story, it's a personal choice and can't be blamed. In general, you are free to post constructive criticisms but not insults which (as in any other part of the forums) won't be tolerated. Remember that writers post here to get help and not to get troubles. Thanks and have fun :) |
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These are the main works I've been working on so far, regarding Type-Moon fan works: *A Moment of Truth - a fairly long-ish fic set two or three years after the UBW-Good ending of Fate/Stay Night, this tale introduces Seonac (Jonathan) Ó'Conaill, an Irish magus with the gift (or curse) of telepathy, as his interactions with the victors of the Fifth Grail War lead to a set of events in which things are not quite as they seem... (I'll be planning to start a follow-up story called Crystal Valley when I get around to it.) *Fate/Trans Form - another fairly long-ish fic (it's longer than AMoT) hybrid universal stream taking elements from both the Type-Moon and Transformers settings, a dramatic end to the Fifth Heaven's Feel sparks the onset of a new era. (Eventually, I'll try to work on a follow-up, Fate/Trans Form: The Era of Consequence.) *M3 - Only one part in this one done up so far, which may or may not be followed up on, it introduces Michael Mackenzie, a Nova Scotian with an unorthodox set of sorcerous abilities, who is sent by Waver Velvet to keep an eye on Fuyuki-shi - but while present, finds that he is drawn into the flow of events to a greater extent than he had realised. *When Types have Troubles - A rather less than straight-laced one-shot, in which a trouble Gaia gets on the line to talk things over with her fellow Aristoteles... Oh, and to give an example or two of something I've written up, here are a couple of short pieces I had entered into a short writing competition elsewhere. Spoiler for Oni:
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On the process of making one.
Prolly coincide with the UBW route, about a Japanese mage with a powerful gift of weapon projection and reality marble. Fights against both Shirou and Archer. |
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I've just finished fate/hollow ataraxia. I have a story related to it in mind too but I think I'll finish my 1/3 of my story on Fanfiction.net before I do anything about it. :eyespin: |
Nice! I didnt notice, that there are some fan fictions are out. Is there one, thats about Rin(and Emiya)? :D
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On one of the Type-Moon fan boards, there is a fiction tracker with info about various works that people have written, or are in the process of writing, if you are interested in taking a look.
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Spoiler for Rin X Emiya/Archer fanfic site URL:
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So, um... hi.
Anyway, I know this is kind of... deserted, but I felt I should try posting this here anyway, just for reactions. I'm not completely done with it yet, but I'm almost past the halfway point and I'd enjoy some feedback so I can fix any mistakes/characterization/whatever. As a note, I'm only familiar with the anime and manga of Fate/Stay Night. I know of the game through Wikipedia, and that's it. Spoiler for Five Times Saber Didn't Kiss Shirou (incomplete):
After scenario 4, I only have one more "when she didn't kiss him" scenario and the one "when she did kiss him" scenario. ... So what do you think? :heh: |
I like it.
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This may be one of the saddest examples of fan fiction out there, but I was (...am...) planning a Sonic sprite flash based on Fate UBW. I happened to play Sonic Rush and F/SN at the same time, now I can't help but think of Blaze the Cat as Saber. Just thought I'd put that out here...
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Thanks for posting....
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So I finished the last two "Saber didn't kiss Shirou" scenarios and am currently chipping away at the one time she did. Here's the whole thing, plus those two and the incomplete sixth one, which is causing me brain damage. I'd appreciate any suggestions on how to tackle it, I'm rather stuck at the moment.
Spoiler for Five Times Saber Didn't Kiss Shirou (one more scenario to go):
Okay, yes, I used the dub dialogue for the fifth scenario and for Bedivere's final quote to Saber. It's basically the same either way, so I didn't think it was a big deal. The dub is actually quite good. |
I dig the sixth one. Has some WAFFY feelings.
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Work in progress on one. A work following after the true UBW ending. Not posting anything online till I at least have 5-6 chapters done. I have a bad habit of dropping stories in the intro and leave my fans hanging.
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So here's a piece that I started today and finished in about an hour or so, and posted on Fanfiction.net immediately after. Basically me just playing around with a few "what if" scenarios that could have drastically changed the events of the Holy Grail War and the characters in it.
Spoiler for Rewind:
... Meh. Spoiler for Author's Ramblings and Notes:
FF.net link, for those interested in leaving a review: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4956479/1/Rewind |
Finished my F/TF fic!
Phew. |
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Woot! Go RadiantBeam! Never read that first fic of yours before, the five kisses one. Very sweet. Would actually be good to see it animated. I'm just snickering at the thought of Saber saying "I blame the voices in my head." *Cackles* |
I've looked on FanFiction.net, and only found a couple, but are there more RinxSaber pairing fics?
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There is one I found.
Rin and Shirou go back in time to find Arturia but it seems Arturia doesn't remember anything about the Grail War. Can't recall exactly where but I found it via a google image search somehow. The image was...I believe...Rin and Saber dressed up like old-timey kings or queens. Really quite fascinating and well done. Now I have to pose this idea to RadiantBeam, a Rin x Saber. >.> She's gonna kill me. |
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I couldn't finish it. When they got to the part about the Throne of Heroes and the Einzbern's...I just lost interest.
Before that it rocked though! :D They were so retarded for each other. Right now I'm working in tandem with RadiantBeam on...a number of projects. >.> |
Hi.
I will be launching into the full Crystal Valley storyline soon, but I wanted to start by providing a kind of preview of some of what is to come. I hope this will set things on the right path. Spoiler for Crystal Valley: Preview:
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I've got Crystal Valley up and running, if anyone's interested.
Spoiler for Crystal Valley: Prologue:
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im creating my own fate series... i call it Fate / Parallel Worlds xD
called it so cause im using characters from other animes as servants hehe its game based though... im looking for someone to help me finish it xD Complete Set of my 1st Batch possible Servants (story is only 20% done :heh:) 1) Hiraga Saito - Guardian Of Void From: Zero no Tsukaima Class: Saber 2) Sidoni - Thousand Changes/Metamorphosis From: Shakugan no Shana Class: Assassin 3) Beatrice - The Golden Witch/ The Immortal Witch From: Umineko no Naku koro ni Class: Caster 4) Enma Ai - Girk from Hell/ The Hell Girl From: Jigoku Shoujo Class: Rider 5) WitchBlade - Vessel of Destruction From: Witchblade Class: Berserker 6) Selvaria - Last Valkyrur From: Valkyria Chronicles Class: Lancer 7) Uryuu Ishida - Last Quincy From: Bleach Class: Archer hehe GG |
Lol...Saito certatainly is a good choice for Saber. Swordfighting, Magic resistance etc. He has them even in his story.
But to be serious it's more like Fate/Otaku worlds. Cause mages are summoning manga/anime heroes:D . At least it explains why they start the Grail War in Japan.:p But Enma Ai for Rider? The Rider class's speciality it's speed and the strong NPs. And I wonder how somone can manage Beato to submit... |
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@Enma Ai i think enma ai is a suitable rider class for she's got a very powerful mount... the hell ferry and her servant wanyudou. i dont specially assume that all riders should have high agility... a character only needs a powerful mount to be in this class, trust me. @Beato she's the most powerful in this set, making her submit is the worst case scenario xD her Noble Phantasm is a reality marble: Spoiler for NP:
thats how i call it hehe @Title i titled it Parallel Worlds cause an anime is considered a parallel world thats all haha.. your suggested title also came to my mind but the sound of it makes the story become a true parody (well i guess its already a parody :heh:) and lame. @story the setting is in present time and the Grail War is held in akihabara xD thats all i can give you haha (even though no ones asking for it, just wanna post it GG) |
Saito would have probably have something similar to eternal arms mastery. Just throwing it out there
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goin to make some changes xD Spoiler for servants:
lots of witches there haha that is the latest update story is still on the making... im sure you'll be shock with this one guys :heh: |
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*gigaloki- Hi, I'm not sure what Saito's Noble Phantasm does, but if it simply just makes him extremely skilled with any weapon that he happens to pick up, you might want to give him the skill Eternal Arms Mastery instead which pretty much does the exact same thing and change what his Noble Phantasm does. However, if it does something different or your already a good portion into your story and don't feel like changing it, it's perfectly fine. I just wanted to point that out. |
That's cause she was a gorgon...
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I announce my own FSN fanfiction too:
Fate/Twists Actually I am doing it for a while and it's currently at the 3rd chapter. A collection of one-shoots of 'what if' scenarios. Others' ideas are welcome. If I find them interesting I give it a try. The third chapter has some similarity with RadiantBeam's Faate:Rewind's first scenario. But I was actually motivated by a doujinshi named "Rin vs. Gilgamesh". Though I may got the whole idea for writing one-shoot 'what if' stories from that fic. Anyways I have many ideas for the next chapter: -Sakura vs Rin. If Sakura was raised like a typical magus. -Saber?: Hisui(from Tsukihime) is summoned by Shirou as a Saber class servant. More of a comedy though I try to be not OOC-ing anyone.(inspiration from a doujinshi called 'With more love than Amber'[Where Hisui substitutes Kohaku as Magical Amber for a day:)] ) -Kotomine Shirou: Shirou as the adopted son of Shirou. I guess we have a fanfic or two with that kind of story, but I give it a try too. -How should it be: A half-comedic variation of that remaining 99% when Gilamesh defeats Shirou in the end. I have some other in mind of course but those are my mayor ideas currently. Which one I shoukld choose? Or you have a better idea? |
How bout some one-shots dealing with how Rin would handle summon other servants in the same manner as the "Rin vs. Gilgamesh" doujin? In particular, I think that Lancer and Assassin would probably be pretty funny.
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I have a bit too much about rin...we need some other too.The very least in a Rin vs Sakura one we have new material. And anyways There's hardly any funnier summon scene than a Rin/Gilgamesh one...Actually they even suit each other well even if they would never get along.:)
But first of all I want to make my next one-shot about something other than the beginning. |
How about a one-shot where the Holy Grail hasn't been corrupted by Avenger and actually does what it's supposed to do and grant a wish in a normal fashion, but only if the wish is voted for in a democratic fashion by the a group consisting of the Masters and Servants?
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Actually I think about the case what if Shirou summoned Archer? No...actually it's a bad idea. More properly a quick bad end:p |
Without a catalyst, Shiro would've summoned himself. Archer couldn't attack him as long as there were command seals.
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I doubt it...first without a catalyst Shirou wouldn't have chosen for the War.
Secondly, Archer and Shirou differs in personality. But purely because they still have some mean similarities I guess maybe you're right. But maybe he would've summoned a different Archer(Archer-lily or something like that:D). Afterall I doubt there's only one copy of each Heroic Spirit for every paralell world. So it's possible to summon the same heroic spirit with the same name twice, but him/her having different personalities. And about the Command Seals...I guess Archer have the gar willpower to break free from the passive control of the Command Seals. And Shirou has zero knwonledge about the whole Grail war(so he hardly can activate a Command Spell) I am currently working on the rework of the first chapter. I want to make Tohsaka Sakura more distinct from Rin in terms of personality. I try to lean on the VN's original scenes even more less and rework the whole Sakura-Archer conversation into a more unique one. |
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