manga story
 

hello, been spamming with pages of my comic quite a lot but the story had never been so clear for either the reader or the writer -_-*. Now I must announce that I have an idea for one, not changing anything to my world of creatures I wanna create:

page 150:
http://molle.pandahub.com/chapter09/chapter09_11.jpg

... the explanation is not finished, that trollook just keeps babbling all the time =( but it all comes down to a story involving many dbz-fights. (YAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! XD)

ok, back to the drawing.

that's supposed to look like hinata, right. Its not just me?

yea it sorta does.

and you used the wrong "soul" it should be sole