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wavehawk 2011-10-02 03:11

...You know, maybe you should read Dune---there's some description as to why people in that universe still use swords and knives---mainly because personal shields protect against most firearms. It's not quite the same for IS, but you could probably get some ideas from that.

Quote:

"Orimura Ichika...don't you understand?"

"Haah?"

"That kindness is the most cruel thing a man can do to a woman." ""

"I don't really understand what you're trying to say..."

"Of course you don't." Although her voice sounded cool and confident as always, <Ren> sunk her trembling hands in her pockets. "If you did, if you ever understood everything the first time--things would have been different..."

Eratas123 2011-10-02 04:03

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Originally Posted by wavehawk (Post 3788564)
...You know, maybe you should read Dune---there's some description as to why people in that universe still use swords and knives---mainly because personal shields protect against most firearms. It's not quite the same for IS, but you could probably get some ideas from that.

Do you mind if I use/mention <Ren> in my fanfic? I'm currently writing chapter 4 and I'd like to know if I can.

wavehawk 2011-10-02 04:13

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Originally Posted by Eratas123 (Post 3788599)
Do you mind if I use/mention <Ren> in my fanfic? I'm currently writing chapter 4 and I'd like to know if I can.

- Depends. Where is she going to be used?

At risk of spoiling things, <Ren>'s story happens between the end of Vol.3 and the start of Vol.5 EG once Tatenashi appears on the scene, she won't be guarding Ichika anymore.

...though reading ZerXSeed's story makes me wonder what would happen to the <Ren> of that alternate universe...(Shudders)

Anyway, I have at least two more chapters to write about <Ren> that will hopefully explain her character a bit better. I won't post it to FF.net until all three chapters are done, because I'll have to revise the current chapters and fix inconsistencies as they progress.

Eratas123 2011-10-02 04:18

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Originally Posted by wavehawk (Post 3788608)
- Depends. Where is she going to be used?

At risk of spoiling things, <Ren>'s story happens between the end of Vol.3 and the start of Vol.5 EG once Tatenashi appears on the scene, she won't be guarding Ichika anymore.

I plan to use the Dunoa corporation as an antagonist for both Ichika's and Irish segments, need to know if I can use her since she'd be pretty interested in saving Ichika if that was the case:)

My story starts at the end of volume 1 and diverges from there, canon events still happen but mixing the events of both Kyuukai and Irish in which will expand more on them.

wavehawk 2011-10-02 04:22

Then I might have to ask you to check with me when adding her--since you guys are unfamiliar with the Arashikage ninja clan (and their protrayals in various series of G.I.Joe differ greatly). Plus, <Ren>'s own secrets.

Eratas123 2011-10-02 04:26

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Originally Posted by wavehawk (Post 3788619)
Then I might have to ask you to check with me when adding her--since you guys are unfamiliar with the Arashikage ninja clan (and their protrayals in various series of G.I.Joe differ greatly). Plus, <Ren>'s own secrets.

Don't worry:p The point of view when she's around will stay with either Irish (Ichika rescue arc) or Ichika himself (The rest of the time) so her secrets wont be compromised:D You can't read the others minds in first person view:heh:

DarkJak2050 2011-10-02 05:15

Alright, Ch. 2 of Project Silverback is up.

Project Silverback Ch. 2

Goddamn it... [Crashes on bed, face first]

Eratas123 2011-10-02 05:21

Congratulations! I'll read it after a while...writing chapter 4 right now.

EDIT: Chapter 4 prologue:

Spoiler:


Prologue of chapter 1, anybody please read and say what you think.

ZeroXSEED 2011-10-02 06:08

Damn it still struck at chapter 9
Decided to have a two rounder match at the very least
1. Yamada-sensei vs Rin & Cecil (short)
2. Yamada-sensei vs Ichika & Char (long)

Ichika & Char, while has no experience working together, last longer cause they trust each other and paid attention to their teammates. :p

Eratas123 2011-10-02 06:18

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED (Post 3788705)
Damn it still struck at chapter 9
Decided to have a two rounder match at the very least
1. Yamada-sensei vs Rin & Cecil (short)
2. Yamada-sensei vs Ichika & Char (long)

Ichika & Char, while has no experience working together, last longer cause they trust each other and paid attention to their teammates. :p

Can you make the fight with Cecilia and Rin longer? It's kind of annoying that these two are the designated butt monkeys when they wanna show how strong someone is, they are representative candidates so they should last longer:D

BTW- Just thought of a new draft thanks to agetreme's help, will post it later so can you please read and review if you're not too busy?

HasuMasu 2011-10-02 06:18

Another small part of my fic's latest chapter,
still working on it, feedback would help at
this point so I can make the necessary changes. :D

Spoiler for Phase 4:


Well, I guess I should say, even though this
is my self-insert challenge entry fic, unlike
the past chapters, this isn't written in my POV,
rather, from here on out it will be in Rin's POV
most of the time, the first 3 chapters you could
consider a prologue I guess, since this is where
the real story starts. :)


Btw, Chapter 4 is narrated by Rin years after the
story happened, hence why she sounds a bit more
mature than usual.

ZeroXSEED 2011-10-02 06:33

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Originally Posted by Eratas123 (Post 3788721)
Can you make the fight with Cecilia and Rin longer? It's kind of annoying that these two are the designated butt monkeys when they wanna show how strong someone is, they are representative candidates so they should last longer:D

I'll safe it for them vs Laura, basically, they Took a level in teamwork after the beatdown by Yamada-sensei.:heh:

As I said before, Rin and Cecil isn't weak, they're just too stubborn to work together.;)

Anyway, when I said physical, it's not really a slab of blunt iron, but a high frequency sword that generates a field of plasma due to the friction with air (hence their glowing orange appearance). If you can count the damage delivered it's like:
Spoiler for Lol:

Beam Saber is more effective at sapping shield, HF sword however has the advantage that it has better attribute as defense tool and parrying weapon (Since it has reasonable mass), you can say knockback effect.:heh:

wavehawk 2011-10-02 07:07

Read ch1-8 of Blits' Sacred Twins fic.

...

...damn you Blitz, if I write another <Ren> fic and it turns out to exist in your reality, I swear I will have to kill you.

ZeroXSEED 2011-10-02 07:12

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk (Post 3788765)
Read ch1-8 of Blits' Sacred Twins fic.

...

...damn you Blitz, if I write another <Ren> fic and it turns out to exist in your reality, I swear I will have to kill you.

Zero: "I'M NOT GOING TO LET MY CO-WRITER DIE!!! OOONORE WAVEHAAAWWWKKK!!!":frustrated:
*Deploying Sentries around Blitz' house using orbital launcher*

Seriously though...why?:confused:

wavehawk 2011-10-02 07:20

Because me writing a fanfic based on another writer's fanfic has only happened ONCE before...needless to say it was VERY well liked, to my surprise:
http://wavehawk.weebly.com/fan-work.html file: Illomk.zip

Thing is, I'm not even finished with <Ren> in her regular story yet, and now I have to deal with ideas...I blame Gundam Evolve #8 for this, dammit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzrifKdrEss
Watch that. Now replace the Ginns with Drone IS and the Strike Gundam with <Ren>-chan and you'll see what I mean.

"But <Ren> can't pilot an IS, right?
Right. She won't be in an IS.
"Oh crap..."

Eratas123 2011-10-02 07:27

@ Box- Good so far! Mature Rin is definitely better than Yandere jelly Rin :D Keep up The good work.

@ZeroXSEED- Draft I just thought of and cost nearly all my sanity to complete. Mood whiplash and Ho-Yay trope activated.

Spoiler:


*Pukes on the floor* Please read and review! *Faints*

ZeroXSEED 2011-10-02 07:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk (Post 3788778)
Because me writing a fanfic based on another writer's fanfic has only happened ONCE before...needless to say it was VERY well liked, to my surprise:
http://wavehawk.weebly.com/fan-work.html file: Illomk.zip

Thing is, I'm not even finished with <Ren> in her regular story yet, and now I have to deal with ideas...I blame Gundam Evolve #8 for this, dammit.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzrifKdrEss
Watch that. Now replace the Ginns with Drone IS and the Strike Gundam with <Ren>-chan and you'll see what I mean.

"But <Ren> can't pilot an IS, right?
Right. She won't be in an IS.
"Oh crap..."

Umm, I downloaded it and let's say my brains is fried by the sheer complexity of story....is that crossover or...something?:confused:


@ Eratas:

urp-BLAAAAARGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wavehawk 2011-10-02 07:33

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED (Post 3788786)
Umm, I downloaded it and let's say my brains is fried by the sheer complexity of story....is that crossover or...something?:confused:

- Sort of. The original basis for the fanfic is "Illusions", a long-runnign fanfic by Fred Herriot bealing with Bubblgum Crisis (Mainly), but throwing in stuff from Urusei Yatsura, Ranma 1/2, all the way up to Tokimeki Memorial and Sentimental Graffitti galgames. I tried as much as possible to make it accessible without confusing the new reader too much, but...well, it is pretty convoluted since the Illusions fic series has been going around since the early 90's....

I ended up collaborating with Fred on "Silent Storm", and some other guys who read it said they loved how I made my fic a Reconstruction of Cyberpunk--which is weird, because I wrote it while heavily inspired by Rainbow Six and Metal Gear Solid. IMHO it's not too bad, it's one of my favorites in terms of writing thriller/future fantasy...

HasuMasu 2011-10-02 07:33

PHASE 4: Happy Ending


See? I told you I'd be updating
more often from now on, well
at least I hope it can continue
like this, I certainly don't want
to repeat the 1 month gap
between Chapter 1 and 2. :heh:

Eratas123 2011-10-02 07:48

@ZeroXSEED-
1. Is my grammar that bad? >_< I thought for sure it was okay. *Sulks in corner*
2. Are you still writing the author fic?


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