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Yumi Chan 2009-01-01 22:07

My Story's
Hello. I have made these storys. I did NOT make the picture's though. By the way if it is bad, in your post,just post the positive things. i hope you Enjoy! Oh also, i will update some post's once in a while.^^

Spoiler for Character/Profile:

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Spoiler for Part 2:

TerranReaper 2009-01-01 23:05

This is interesting. I'd like to see more of it.

Yumi Chan 2009-01-03 22:25

Please Rate!
Ok people. all people that veiw,please just read and rate. you don't need to post it. but you can read it at least. so please rate and read.
~Yumi Chan

Shana 2009-01-03 23:41

I was bored :heh: and started reading this; I think the story's okay. Though I think there should be some things you should try to improve, like developing it more. I mean, like instead of saying "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends." you should use "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends. They've been friends since they were 2 years old." or something. And btw, the note that was left by Mrs. April, why was it directed to *just* Amanda and not the rest of the classroom too?

Oh yeah, instead of using the three options the poll has, why don't you make it like ranting it from 1 to 10? I think it'd be better. And sorry for all the criticism :heh: Keep on writing!

aahhsin 2009-01-08 03:13

hahaha what a nice cute story. I'm liking it, but I won't rate it yet, i'm going to wait how it turns out.

read mine too! in my signature!

asuki-chan 2009-01-17 18:42

So far so good! i can't wait untill the next chapter

TerranReaper 2009-01-18 20:27

Keep 'em coming.

Yumi Chan 2009-01-29 19:45

Im still thinking 4 part 3..... keep writing though!

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