Forum: Fan Creations
2011-11-30, 10:24
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-11-20, 10:33
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,684
Final Entry.
Title: The Last Train.
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Final Entry.
Title: The Last Train.
The Brother Leader sits on a honey yellow Ikea sofa, reading. Sometimes, especially just before dawn, he asks if his train has arrived.
The debris of a...
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Forum: Claymore
2011-11-08, 09:09
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Replies: 256
Views: 62,373
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Forum: Claymore
2011-10-16, 03:04
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
I think the dialogue is fine the way it is.
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I think the dialogue is fine the way it is.
What I meant is dialogue is best left as it is, or to stand alone with a speech tag (e.g "Let's go," she said.) In your case you describe dialogue &...
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Forum: Claymore
2011-10-14, 21:35
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
This is just the first chapter, so I can't say...
This is just the first chapter, so I can't say very much about it.
I like it that you've chosen to align your narrative to a young Clare. It ups the ante, and the expectations that readers have....
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Forum: Claymore
2011-10-01, 09:45
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
@Shiek
I've mentioned before that I get...
@Shiek
I've mentioned before that I get inspiration by reading the posts & stories on the Animesuki forum.
I try to rotate between Claymore characters so that I get a chance to write for each...
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-09-28, 09:23
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Replies: 19
Views: 3,848
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Forum: Claymore
2011-09-24, 09:15
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
Thank you Kinematics! I think in all my short...
Thank you Kinematics! I think in all my short time here on Animesuki I've never thought you were such a master proofreader.
Because of the lack of people such as you to keep me in check, I've...
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Forum: Claymore
2011-09-22, 10:46
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-06-05, 20:53
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-06-05, 02:56
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
Personally, I got most satisfaction out of...
Personally, I got most satisfaction out of writing about Raki. Both Isley & Priscilla act quite predictably, and every Claymore fan will know their histories, but in Raki's case, I felt I needed...
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Forum: Claymore
2011-06-04, 10:23
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-05-21, 20:15
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-05-20, 22:45
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-05-17, 23:47
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Claymore
2011-05-16, 09:52
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Replies: 4,157
Views: 525,529
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-04-08, 20:55
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Replies: 32
Views: 6,507
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-04-08, 04:29
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Replies: 32
Views: 6,507
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-03-30, 07:56
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Replies: 28
Views: 5,872
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-03-23, 10:47
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Replies: 28
Views: 5,872
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-03-14, 22:06
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Replies: 51
Views: 9,372
Final Entry:
SANDCASTLES
For Fadwa...
Final Entry:
SANDCASTLES
For Fadwa Laroui (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/rachel-newcomb/fadwa-laroui-morocco_b_829467.html)
And for Japan
These are days
when newspapers bury readers in...
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-03-12, 10:29
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Replies: 51
Views: 9,372
This is my entry:
First Draft
...
This is my entry:
First Draft
SANDCASTLES
Written for Fadwa Laroui (http://www.huffingtonpost.com/rachel-newcomb/fadwa-laroui-morocco_b_829467.html)
Reading today's news: I unearth
your...
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-02-14, 04:31
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Replies: 97
Views: 16,623
Final Entry
FINAL ENTRY:
Run With Me
14.02.2011
Run With Me
First, a footfall: our steps move
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-02-09, 08:24
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Replies: 97
Views: 16,623
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Forum: Fan Creations
2011-02-08, 10:49
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Replies: 97
Views: 16,623
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