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Old 2008-05-29, 12:25   Link #521
SpaceBrotha
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Finland
Age: 39
*Peeks in, sees insanity.*
Well, here's the next chapter, thanks for betaing go to PhoenixG and Aaron008R. Especially to PhoenixG for helping me hammer one scene into order.

After reading the comments on the last chapter, i changed the format again. Now there's an empty line everytime someone talks.

Oh, and this is the longest chapter so far, with 6800 words, have fun.

previous chapters: index post

Spoiler for Chapter 4:


There you go, comments?
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