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Originally Posted by DezoPenguin
Something About Fate-mama Just Bugs Me
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I thought this was cute.
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Originally Posted by TheShinySword
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"she reminds you you're" or "she reminds you that you're". I'm told I use 'that' too much, but I think it's needed here...
and "You" in the second quote? I don't know any other "He" that fits.
It was a great fic though. Seemed a little rough around the edges, but that's certainly well explained by it being your first foray into both the tense and viewpoint. The understanding people have of others that they've been in some sort of relationship with (i.e. friendship and better) for a long time was well captured. Awesome!
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Originally Posted by Satashi
Alton Brown
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I LOVE THAT SHOW.
