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Old 2010-08-06, 15:01   Link #26310
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Originally Posted by Nanya01 View Post
Spoiler for Material Days 32:
Whoo, hotel has wireless! Now if all goes well I should be hanging out with Yasanagi in a few hours

Anyways, onto this bit. I gotta say you should stop with all the did-they-or-didn't-they sex stuff. Getting kind of old, and since you've done it for all 3 Materials now I think it'd be a good time to stop.

I also think you can lay off the zealot bashing. You've done that several times already too. Well, atleast this time it has plot relevence. I wonder how they're going to explain where this new ship came from

Still a bit worrying with regards to Seikou's character development though, since she was able to kill those guys with no remorse. It's clear she now has a fondness for Yuuno, so the thought that he'd disapprove of her actions should cause some hesitation. Maybe she'll have to struggle with guilt when she lies to him about it. That would be good.
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