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Eratas123 · 2011-09-10, 11:57

plot summary for the story so far

Spoiler:

I'm planning to take a darker turn of the Infinite Stratos canon and have the IS be used by multiple corporations or countries (cant decide) for a power struggle behind the scenes and Ichika is a primary target of multiple organizations because of his IS capabilities and they wanna take him and experiment on him.

The harem and humor aspect is still present in the fic but I'll have the girls past have more adverse effects on their personality; the biggest change will be to Charlotte and Laura since they'll act darker on this fic compared to their canon counterparts. Charlotte will be more meek and mentally scarred( due to the physical and mental abuse she receives from her home) and Laura will be more cold and pragmatic (due to her past as a child soldier) and will take longer to defrost.

I'm going to use three main point of views to show the different parts of the main story.

I plan to have the story center around Ichika and the main cast, but there will be three primary conflicts.

1. Ichika's fight against phantom task,his origins which will explain how he can use the IS at all,the multiple organizations trying to dissect him for his DNA and of course the romance, which will be Harem based.

2. Kyuukai's (EthernalRain's OC) fight against the multiple corporations/organiations trying to destabilize the current treaty being held, he will have to go all over the world and prevent the conflict before it escalates. The romance will be with Laura and a big chunk of it will be him trying to rehabilitate Laura and make her more of a person and less of a killing machine.

3. "Irish's" (My OC) story will start with him in a terrorist group hoping to destroy the IS due to bad experiences in the past, he'll be captured by FRACTURE shortly into the story and be blackmailed/coerced into working for them. His story will deal with him and his partner (Tatenashi) trying to stop the possible duplication of the IS cores which will shift the balance of power and cause worldwide conflict. Romance I'm not so sure yet because he will be gynophobic due to past experiences and I'm not sure how a romance with somebody who's afraid of girls will work.

Two possible drafts for later

Draft 1

Spoiler:

Draft 2

Spoiler:

2011-09-10, 11:57	Link #1173
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	plot summary for the story so far Spoiler: I'm planning to take a darker turn of the Infinite Stratos canon and have the IS be used by multiple corporations or countries (cant decide) for a power struggle behind the scenes and Ichika is a primary target of multiple organizations because of his IS capabilities and they wanna take him and experiment on him. The harem and humor aspect is still present in the fic but I'll have the girls past have more adverse effects on their personality; the biggest change will be to Charlotte and Laura since they'll act darker on this fic compared to their canon counterparts. Charlotte will be more meek and mentally scarred( due to the physical and mental abuse she receives from her home) and Laura will be more cold and pragmatic (due to her past as a child soldier) and will take longer to defrost. I'm going to use three main point of views to show the different parts of the main story. I plan to have the story center around Ichika and the main cast, but there will be three primary conflicts. 1. Ichika's fight against phantom task,his origins which will explain how he can use the IS at all,the multiple organizations trying to dissect him for his DNA and of course the romance, which will be Harem based. 2. Kyuukai's (EthernalRain's OC) fight against the multiple corporations/organiations trying to destabilize the current treaty being held, he will have to go all over the world and prevent the conflict before it escalates. The romance will be with Laura and a big chunk of it will be him trying to rehabilitate Laura and make her more of a person and less of a killing machine. 3. "Irish's" (My OC) story will start with him in a terrorist group hoping to destroy the IS due to bad experiences in the past, he'll be captured by FRACTURE shortly into the story and be blackmailed/coerced into working for them. His story will deal with him and his partner (Tatenashi) trying to stop the possible duplication of the IS cores which will shift the balance of power and cause worldwide conflict. Romance I'm not so sure yet because he will be gynophobic due to past experiences and I'm not sure how a romance with somebody who's afraid of girls will work. Two possible drafts for later Draft 1 Spoiler: POV:"Irish" Location:Room 1059, IS Academy Lying down on the bed, I do nothing but stare up at the ceiling as time passes by. 'What am I doing here? I know we're supposed to partner up but why the hell am I sharing a room with her and in this academy of all places' "Hey hey Irish-kun, up and at them" I hear my "partner" say as she enters the room. "..." "Still giving me the silent treatment huh?" "...Tell me one thing" "Hm?" "Why am I here? we're partners, not friends, why do I have to stay with you in this damned academy?" "Well, I didn't want to have to pick you up from a prison cell whenever we have a mission" "..." Deciding I couldn't get anything more out of her, I turned to the left and turn my back towards her 'I better gather all the data I can on her during our missions, she'll probably be an enemy later on' "Hey, are you listening to me?" she said loudly next to my ear. "SHIT!" Nearly getting a heart attack, I jump off the bed and turn to face her. 'How the hell did she sneak up on me?' "I was just asking if you were listening to me, why'd you act so scared?" 'Damn it, I don't have the suit to calm me down,wait! "why'd you act so scared?". She doesn't know about my gynophobia! I need to make sure she doesn't find out then' "...Just surprised that's all" "Well, I said I'm gonna go shopping" "Have fun then" Without another word I make my back to the bed and lie down on it "You're coming with me" She suddenly said. "Like hell I am! Like I said I'm your partner, not your friend. Last time I checked, partners don't go shopping together" "You don't have a choice. I promised the commander I'd keep an eye on you when I asked you to be transferred here, now get up" "No" "No choice then" She said as she grabbed my legs and tried to pull me off the bed. Acting like an immature child I immediately grabbed the beds railing and held on as hard as I could. "C'mon, I'll get in trouble if you don't go with me!" "I don't care, now let me go" "Alright then you asked for it!" She let go of my legs and tackled me while I was on the bed" "Get off me!" She didn't seem to acknowledge my reply as she proceeded to put her arms at my side. "Last ditch resort" She then proceeded to start tickling my sides. "Ahaha-let-ahahaha-go-ahahahahah!" "Will you go with me now?" she said as she continued the onslaught. "Ahahaha-ALR-hahaha-IGHT!" "See, that wasn't so hard was it? 'You win this round'[/I] "Onee-chan" Looking to the side I saw a girl with glasses and light blue hair standing at the doorway looking at us in shock. "Uh, hehehe, This isn't what it looks like Kanzashi. You see what happ-" She couldn't finish her sentence as the girl ran away in the middle. "Im gonna have some explaining to do later" "Hey" "Hm?" "Get off me!" Draft 2 Spoiler: POV:Irish Location:Mission Control "You know what the mission is, right Irish" "You infiltrate the party using the invitation your family got you, I provide recon outside" "Not exactly" "What?" "BOTH of us are going to the party, capturing the fugitive will be easier with the two of us" "Last time I checked the party was female only" "It is" "Then how the hell do I-" It was then that I realized that she was smiling and hadn't removed her hands from her back. 'OH NO! Oh GOD NO!' "Well, you see, they said they'd let me bring a maid along if I wanted to" she said as her smile kept getting bigger. "AAAAAAAAHHHH!" Time skip: 30 minutes later "I HATE you" "Aw, cmon, you look so cute Airi-chan" "...fuck you" Looking at the mirror, I saw my reflection staring back at me. 'I cant believe this' Staring back at me was a short girl with long white hair reaching up to her waist dressed in a skimpy maid outfit. 'Fuck my life' Well come on then Airi-chan, lets go!