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Old 2012-01-14, 16:52   Link #120
Sheba
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
Age: 44
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Originally Posted by Key Board View Post
To me StrikerS had one problem. It seems to lack one clear focus.
It had a bit too many conflicting storytelling elements.

Compare this to the first series and A's which focus was a lot clearer in comparison.

Thus, my suggestion on how to improve StrikerS:

It should have been Nanoha StarS instead of Nanoha StrikerS

Just focus on JS, cyborgs, Teana and Subaru, and the whole drama about Quint.
Drop Erio, Caro, Lutecia, and Vivio
Stay consistent with the anti-magic/machine over magic theme

If they really wanted those other characters, save that for another season.

Of course doing all of the above would have made Subaru the real heroine of StrikerS, and.. I suppose... they didn't want to do that... too bad...
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