THIS IS NOT THE LATEST CHAPTER. Just saying.
It is a peek into the rewrites I'm doing of Volume 1. Readers with good memory will notice I merged chapter 1 and chapter 2 of the first volume. Both were far too short on their own. This is the first pass at revising volume 1. You'll notice some shifts in tone, plot changes, some retrofitting of information to improve foreshadowing and such. Just wanted to show how story rewriting can go. Tap. Tap tap.
I haven't decided whether to overhaul this thread or just encourage people to "buy the book" however that works out. One thing is for certain the 50,000 character limit on a post is turning into a major annoyance.
Chapter One “Are You Gonna Be My Girl?” (version 0.95)