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Originally Posted by larethian
The problem is, this wasn't a 'harem' series when it started but turned into one...... romance with other girls is more like a subplot to move the siblings' relationship dynamics to me, and it didn't even start till v5.
When the author 'force-fit' Kanako into the mix of people 'dere' towards Kyousuke, it became a blatant problem for me.
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It wouldn't be the first time someone set up a great story premise but then didn't lay out the framework for the entire epic, tripping and stumbling at the end or even crashing outright with some kind of "pulled out of the air" ending.
However, not calling anything until the last page given this author's obvious enjoyment of pulling the chains of different fan factions.