maxxus0923 ---strongly suggest you read some books by Philip K. Dick. Your idea has lots of merit, it's just in the delivery that you need to be careful. Too straightforward it'll be boring. But if you deliver it in a way that at first seems odd and unsettling but eventually grabs the reader and takes him along for the ride
My pick of what's best to read first, then apply that same style to your idea:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ubik
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flow_My...Policeman_Said