Though as you said the whole story is very condensed, this ACT II is overall a much easier read than ACT I. The reduction of dialogues and those power level/description boxes made the manga flow much better in my opinion. There are small problems with the placement of speech bubbles which may have came from erasing content that was once there that I'm sure you'll address.
The biggest problem for me this time around is just this one page where I don't know who is saying what and just kind of doesn't make sense in general:
Other than that, I think this is definitely a step in the right direction. Keep it up!