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Old 2023-04-11, 11:27   Link #18
frubam
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Hmmm... not sure what to think about this one. There are a few things that are a bit off-putting, like MC being a bit scatterbrained when he needs to be extra diligent with his work due to his siblings, and the younger sister talking like she's an adult, but otherwise it was okay. MC just reached his independence, only to lose it by the death of his father. Although I feel that he would be exactly the same, even without having to take care of his siblings, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt and assume he has a lot on his plate than just manuscripts. So it wouldn't be surprising if he falls behind while taking care of those things.

fMC seems very "standard"; straightforward, diligent, nice. Frankly I found her kinda boring. I do hope its like Lex79 said, and we'll see her in a more "seriously quirky" manner due to her upbringing, alien, or otherwise?
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