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Old 2008-11-05, 16:56   Link #83
Marina
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Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Seattle
Age: 31
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Originally Posted by P.G. View Post
so here's my tweaked ver.

erase some of the sharpened & blurred parts, added another b&w gradient etc.
Looking pretty good PG, definitely one of my favorites so far. I like the edits you did, I wasn't such a fan of the mix of sharp and blur in the last one, but they look just right in this second version. Good work
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Originally Posted by Sagasu View Post
Decided to join this contest =o

Couldn't find any good military anime renders so.. I used this one.
Not bad, not bad. I like the background, but the characters look like they were just slapped on and some outer glow added. It would be nice if you could try to blend them in a bit more and try to integrate them with their surroundings. I look forward to seeing a revision!
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