107 - Lose the black outline around the figure of your character. Either Apply it to the whole border or just leave it out. Never have an incomplete border unless it actually looks appealing.
6.5/10
Don't get discouraged, fix that little outline problem and come back to get a new rating =).
For a first attempt, it's good. The background's focus blends well with the character though
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Lina Inverse - Not bad. I liked your previous signatures though. The first thing that comes to mind is the background really doesn't go well with the picture of... (I don't watch Shuffle so I don't know -_-). I like the angling of the shot, it creates perspective but the fact that the edges look pixelated, I hate it. Overall,
6.8/10