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Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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Originally Posted by krisslanza
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So you've placed a rude, smoking, tomboyish girl in Fate's house? Although it does seem she can be nice if she feels like it. Hmm, I wonder how much Yuuno/Nanoha/Fate triangle drama we'll get.
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Originally Posted by Eagle8819
Spoiler for And several other trimmings for neat look..:
Ignis Fatuus
Genre: Drama/Romance
Main couple: Fate, Nanoha
Summary: If things were not what they seem to be. An illusion. A misleading truth. Is there even a truth? AU fiction. FateNanoha.
Rating:T
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Comatose induced memories? Funny, I've been playing with that idea recently as well.  Now, curiosity is one of my weak points, and I'm dying to know just what happened in Nanoha's memories.
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Originally Posted by Satashi
(Keroko please let me know what to add on yours)
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Will do.
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Originally Posted by Satashi
On that note, I'm going to start writing on my fics now ^^;
Fast Lyrical Days. Sorry it's not too long but I want to start on SbTB as well tonight.
Spoiler for Lyrical Days:
I was never really one to shop for girls but Nanoha's comment this morning was still bothering me. I knew she was just teasing but there was still something in the way she said it, some faint hint of sadness, that I couldn't help but pick up on. This thought ran over in my mind again and again as I looked at what was before me. Nothing caught my eye right away and I almost gave up on the store before finding something that looked promising. The glass jewelry cases in the middle of the store grabbed my attention, or rather a bracelet inside of it did. A medium sized linked silver bracelet was sparkling in the light almost as if calling out to me. On it was one matching silver charm in the shape of a heart.
'A charm bracelet,' I realized, looking at the several types of charms that could be added to it. 'Simple, pretty, shiny, and it just screams Nanoha.' I stood up straight and met the clerk's eye to call them over to me and ten minutes later I was back out in the cold, now fifty dollars lighter. Although the blow to my wallet stung, I was rather pleased with my purchase. Nanoha was always there for me, it was about time I showed my appreciation.
“I'm home!” I called out as always when I opened the door to the house I now shared with two girls.
Nanoha, as always, came to me with a smile. “Welcome home. You hungry?”
“Starving.” My reply seemed to make her happy. “Something smells good.”
“Pizza,” The girl informed me while rocking on her heels while waiting on me to finish taking off my shoes. “How was Hayate-chan?”
“A lot better.” Walking in, I held up the bag so she could see it. “I have something for you.”
“Oh?” Her face lit with curiosity. “What is it?”
“It's a box.” I took out the long slender jewelry case and held back a chuckle at Nanoha's reaction to cover her mouth in surprise. “Sure are happy about a box.”
“What's in it?” She reached for it and pouted when I moved it away. Trying again, she stood on her tip toes and reached for the case when I held it up. “Stop teasing me!”
“But it's fun.” I let her try once again before bringing it down and handing it to her. “Here, I hope you like.”
“I will,” She assured me before happily clicking open the case and fawning over the simple gift. “Awwwww, it's so kyute!”
“...Did you just say 'kyute'?”
“What on Earth made you buy me a gift?” She sounded happier than I've heard her in the past month or so. “Aw, I love it. A little heart and everything.” The bracelet was put on and looked at again now that it was on her wrist. “Thank you!” I got a tight hug, which I returned.
“I just thought I'd get it for you. No reason really.”
“You're the best.” To my surprise Nanoha got on her tiptoes and pecked my cheek. “Thanks a lot.”
“Welcome.” I touched the spot I was kissed and felt my lips turn up lightly to a smile. “You haven't kissed me in ages.”
“Well, if you would do things to warrant it, I'd kiss you more often.” She had a faint tint of blush on her cheeks, keeping her eyes on the sparking bracelet still. She stared at it for a moment longer before suddenly gasping out. “The pizza!” Quickly she ran to the kitchen and pulled the oven door open, quickly taking out the food. “Oh thank goodness, it's just a little brown on top.” Sliding it onto a cutting board, she went to dust her peel with corn starch before slipping the next one onto it. “Yuuno-kun, this one is yours. It'll take about six minutes so get comfortable and I'll bring it to you when it's done okay?”
“Hmmm....” I hopped on the kitchen counter instead and watched her. “It's quiet tonight, where's Fate at?”
“She ate dinner and conked out. Said she had a hard day.” The girl closed the oven door and walked over to me. Turning around, she faced the same way I was and leaned back against me, pulling my arms to wrap around her front. “It's a little chilly in here.”
“Put on clothes.” I teased. The girl was in her pajamas, which consisted of nothing more than a large shirt that went to her knees.
“But this is comfortable.” She protested while playing with my hands, eyes still darting to the gift she was wearing. “And you're warm.”
“Keep moving my hands like that and I'll end up feeling you up.”
“I don't mind,” She replied airily. “Go for it.”
“...I really will if you say that.”
“Then do it.”
“...I'm not in the mood.”
“Sure,” She giggled to herself and I couldn't help but chuckle. “Ne, question?”
“Yes?”
Nanoha looked over her shoulder at me. “Am I feminine?”
“What do you mean?” I blinked. “Such a sudden question.”
“Hm. Well,” She thought about it. “I kind of get love letters every now and then, but they are normally from people I don't even know. I have a fanclub you know?”
“I know.” I hated those guys. A group of about fifteen that basically worshiped the ground Nanoha walked on.
“But besides those, I don't really get any attention. Am I not feminine enough? Am I attractive?” I pondered it, allowing her to turn around in my arms and look at me. “Even you don't ever look at me when you have the chance.”
“I look at you all the time.”
“Not when I'm naked.”
I blinked. “You want me to look at you naked?”
“No!” She shook her head. “I mean when the situation comes up, when I walk across the hall in only a towel or something. Your eyes never once dropped to look. Am I not feminine?”
Acting on impulse, I reached forward and popped the top snap-buttons on Nanoha's shirt open, revealing her breast fully. “Hmmm.... I give you about an eight.”
Her face slowly turned scarlet but stood there a full five seconds before letting out a 'kya!' and turning around to button them. “Pervert!”
“Yup. I get that way around very feminine women.”
Nanoha slowed down her buttoning and looked back over at me, smiling. “I'll forgive you this time.”
“Thank you,” I teased back.
“But next time,” She winked. “I might just slap you.”
“You want a next time?”
“Maybe, nyaha!” With that she went over to the oven and checked my food. I didn't understand girls sometimes, but right now I could tell Nanoha was happy. She really wanted attention and a little encouragement that she was pretty. I had given her both tonight and her smile was really cute right now. It was this simple moment that made me glad we shared a house together.
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Sunday again; a day off with nothing to do. From the burning smell of death coming from my door I could tell Fate was trying to make breakfast. After a glance out my window I saw Nanoha outside playing in the snow. I knew already that Hayate was going to be shopping today so she could get out of the house. As for me...
A.) Nanoha was so happy last night, I really should treat her to something today to make sure she knows that I appreciate her.
B.) I did say I would take Fate out sometime... but since I bought a gift, it will be a cheap date, would she even like that?
C.) I can probably meet up with Hayate for lunch, if I don't die from Fate's breakfast. A good meal sounds good.
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Blunt Yuuno is blunt.
Now, for options. With Nanoha saved, I'm leaning between B or C... however, Yuuno did promise he'd take Fate out one of these days... gotta stick to you words Yuuno. B
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Originally Posted by BPHaru
I'm not reading it since it can have a bad end (Fate or Nanoha X someone else), but I'll read it if we get the good NanoFate end, that's why I'm checking the alternatives and choosing the ones that I think will lead to the desired final, since you are not going to tell me directly what I must choose for that route.
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*scratches head* You know... not to sound rude, but could you at least try to read the chapters you're voting for? It just seems... odd to me that you can vote without even having read the story.
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Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha
Clearly you should have some of this stuff they gave me after they took off my tooth, seems to erase most bodily feelings that resemble pain in any way... 
...and replace it with pure crack or something, i could probably write stuff that would make even the OC thread wince a couple of times |
I dunno, after close to a year of Kha-crack, there's little that can make me wince.
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Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha
Edit: and mind you, they did have an instance where just to mention one  |
That's an exageration. 
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Originally Posted by Satashi
How about we tie up Fate instead?
Spoiler for NSFW text:
Nanoha smiled proudly. “You loved it.” She got a dark blush but no protest. “Fate-chan, do you trust me?”
Fate smiled softly at the request. “Yes, I trust you.” The look she got in return was priceless, melting her heart with the sheer cuteness and pride suddenly showing in her lover's eyes. “What did you have in mind?” She knew Nanoha liked to experiment in bed but always held back in an attempt to better please Fate's simple desires. Occasionally, like now, she would brave a request and ask permission to try something. Normally afterwards it became something they would do occasionally but for the most part their love-making was simple and romantic.
“Well,” Nanoha reached into the plastic bag and rooted around a moment before pulling out furry handcuffs. “I kind of...”
Fate's eyes went wide. “...Wow...”
“...Is it okay?”
Slowly nodding, Fate offered Nanoha her left wrist. “Mm... I trust you.” The blue eyed one smiled lovingly, gently taking Fate's wrist and clicking it within the restraint before putting the other half to their headboard. Shortly after her right wrist followed suit, leaving her bound shyly. “This is kind of...exciting...” Her wrist moved testingly, finding that she was, indeed, cuffed with her hands spread out above her head and attached to their bed frame.
Nanoha reached back into the bag. “One more thing...” She took out a blindfold that had the same fur around it as the handcuffs did. “You're not going to see any of this.” After the initial shock her lover gave a small lopsided grin and lifted up to allow Nanoha to place it on. “Is it okay? Uncomfortable? Are the cuffs too tight?”
“No, they're fine.” Fate felt her cheeks still coloring, suddenly wishing she could see Nanoha's gaze on her current position.
But since the cake is still a lie, this piece will still go un released *halo* |
And what if I told you there is a way to get to the cake?
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Originally Posted by Liingo
When I start writing the proper story to my OC's I'll post it here if anyone wants to read it. It'll make sense I promise |
Well, you can do what I'm doing to Fall of an Empire and change it a bit. The original draft only had Vivio as a CC, as the Wolkies were part of Nighty's Saga of Saga, but to make the fanfiction version easier to read (it's usually more fun fo most people to read fanfiction about CC's then OC's), I'm introducing them to this version.
Last edited by Keroko; 2008-01-11 at 07:49.
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