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Wild Goose
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
Age: 38
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Niiiice
. I like.
Only quibble is that dialogue seems a bit stilted, most obviously with Coach's wingman. I'm guessing he's not a native speaker of English, hence he's taking more pains with the language?
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