@ Kirika-chan, Thesinwithin, TheShineySword -
Thank you for the feedback! It's encouraging to come back from class to such nice responses to your work. *blushes, feito-style*
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Again @ Thesinwithin - Dude, that's fantastic. I had a Marimite image of Fate recognizing Nanoha in her panda suit from far away, running through the crowds of officers, to be held gently by her "warm, panda hands"
@Kha - It's very nice to meet you, but you shall not be able to compel me! I am impervious to cheese.... XD I hope....
On Mirrored Souls: If I didn't have work, I would totally claim Nanoha... I want to see a young and shy Fate-chan be perceptive and noticing when Nanoha is feeling really down about being away from home, despite putting on a brave and cheery face for everyone: "Everything will be okay, Nanoha," She says quietly, surprising Nanoha with how this fate knows when to comfort her, just as her Fate does. I don't know, if it's viable when I get home, I'll do it for sure. Plus, Nanoha's side needs to get some action going so... yeah. I'll check back then and stop rambling now.