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Old 2012-02-04, 18:14   Link #5602
Justin_Brett
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Location: Canada, Sault Ste. Marie
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What would having several chapters of Thoma knifing trees and scrounging food add to the story that the fashbacks didn't already tell us?
Emphasize to the reader that he's the kind of character who can survive for that long out in the middle of nowhere, at seven or eight years old?
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