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Old 2012-02-04, 21:06   Link #5603
Adeptus Animus
Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 31
Originally Posted by Justin_Brett View Post
Emphasize to the reader that he's the kind of character who can survive for that long out in the middle of nowhere, at seven or eight years old?
Which the flashback already told us. Stretching that flashback out over an entire chapter would tell us nothing new, and just slow down the story.
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