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Originally Posted by Allquall
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Finally found the time to read all four chapters released this far and I'm really impressed by the story. The whole political fare going on is definitely fun to read and I personally enjoyed this chapter more than the more action orientated third one because of all the plot twists and political talk. It also feels sort of refreshing to see that they are fighting something that can't really be solved with a few Starlight Breakers.
Unless they decide to assassinate Lethir. Looking forward to see how the plot develops!
On another note, regarding the not so serious parts of the story: WHO in their right minds throws
mashed potatoes around, on the ground and on people?! That's wasting perfectly
good food! 
Sheeesh. (
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Originally Posted by Dusk_
My entire collection of character drabbles are up on FF.net, along with one extra piece that I wrote up to close everything off. You can find it all here:
Into Perspective
And here's a small teaser from a longer story that I hope to write  .
Spoiler:
The gentle sunset touched his face, illuminating his handsome features with a dazzling glow. His sparkling eyes gazed fondly into hers as he leaned in closer, his hand rising slowly to her face. She gasped slightly in anticipation before his smooth skin lightly grazed her silk-like hair, softly caressing her locks. Closing her eyes and shuddering, she felt him move closer, whispering sweet honey words into her ears.
“Ever since I saw you I was entranced. Your very presence leaves my knees weak; your simplest words make my heart race. I couldn’t stand a life that didn’t include you. Suzuka, there’s something I have to tell you.”
Her heart was pounding in her chest, his every word filling her soul.
“…WAKE UP!”
The girl was unceremoniously woken as her bed covers were dragged from the mattress, carrying her with them. Groggily she rubbed her head before slowly opening her eyes, looking up to whoever had decided to act as her alarm clock. She regretted that instantly, however, as she was met with a very irritated looking Arisa who seemed convinced that glaring daggers could, in fact, kill.
“Mou, Suzuka! I knew it; you stayed up late reading those trashy romance novels again!”
Four friends from the past. Two now weave their trails in the sky, but in the life that was left behind two continue on. This is their story.
Life goes on
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The ending short was a really nice way to wrap the whole story up.
As for the teaser - there is a definite lack of Arisa and Suzuka stories. This seems like it will turn out a good one.
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Originally Posted by labpartner
Thank you Satashi-san, for your amazing fics.
P.S. first post after lurking around for ages,.
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Aah, new person!
-has somehow missed your post last time reading the thread-
.Welcome to the thread, but more importantly enjoy your stay and have fun!