2011-06-05, 09:57	Link #6
Midonin Last Engage Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Florida	Spoiler for The Hotel King 10 - Bats in the Belfry: Come on, Jiromaru. I believe in you as an author. But both you and Tamaizumi are trying to go with old people as your inspiration, with varying results. Run it through a few more drafts first. As for Ohana, while I do appreciate her "do what must be done" style of thinking, that doesn't mean she should jump to conclusions and try to leave either. I can understand wanting to work when you're sick to the point of being bedridden, well, there are things that must not be done. Shine, Ohana. Shine like you always wanted to - your greatest enemy is yourself.