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Old 2010-03-08, 09:59   Link #70
PreSage
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Join Date: Nov 2006
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Originally Posted by ganbaru View Post
There's still 11 day; it's plenty of time for doing a good entry... unless the real world keep you from your computer .

Anyway, I reworked my entry; corrected some pixels on the render and changed the text for something more meaningfull ( even if my translation d not fully satisfie me ). C&C would be welcome.
The silhouette looks a bit squished or not proportionate.

This is such a good theme but I'm going to have to sit this one out - no time.

Good luck to all.

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Originally Posted by LKK View Post
The English text should say "More than 6 years have passed, and I haven't met her again." in order to be grammatically correct. I just noticed that the top of her head looks flat and cut off. The top should be rounder to look more natural.
And that is why we call you "Sensei".
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