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Old 2009-01-12, 18:40   Link #3141
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Originally Posted by Hari Michiru View Post
Editing time .

Spoiler for saving space:

The whole horsey thing threw me off there. It seemed a bit too OOC for my liking, along with Raki's giggling...

Wow though, good job editing that. I appreciate it.

Looking back on it, I can tell I made them pretty OOC too. I'll have to work on that, especially for my light-hearted chapters, which are more prone to it if you ask me.

I did the best I could editing it grammatically though.

Heh, I know the small preview things for the next chapter are corny. If everyone else thinks so too, and doesn't really enjoy them, I'll get rid of them.

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