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Old 2009-01-14, 10:34   Link #3143
Every word must conjure
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For Chps 36-41:

I see that you've decided to pursue a kind of side-story here. Although Flora & Zhao Yun were already a so-called couple previously, you seem to have devoted these 6 chapters to them & their budding relationship.

The following section is my technical analysis:

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