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Old 2012-12-09, 21:30   Link #1779
kuroishinigami
Ava courtesy of patchy
 
 
Join Date: Jan 2009
I like the massive world building, I just hate the timing when it's done by the author. When you have a magic battle, which supposed to last only for a moment, you don't do explanation in the middle of the battle. You do it before or after the battle.
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