Thx again for the update.
Spoiler for Ending 2:
Well what can I say about this ending.
Well all I can say is my eyes were wide when I'm reading that section
. I expected the possibility that Hitomi might die but, I never thought about the possibility of Madoka despairing and becoming an ex-drug addict who want to help those similarly afflicted. Kudos to you for bring a pretty unique possibility while still retaining Madoka's canon personality.( you troll
)
Anyway, everything about the ending is plausible. But, I have a hard time picturing the Madoka breakdown scene in the classroom especially the lines
"Get away from me" and “Don't touch me! My life has been nothing but sorrow and misery since you and that reckless white rat entered into my life!”. This lines doesn't feel like Madoka at all even a Madoka unhinged by despair. I feel that any anger that Madoka will feel will be more self directed than aimed at other people judging by the anime. In fact, I can't remember any situation where Madoka showed anger in the anime I feel - she's more like to think its all her fault before she even think about blaming other people.
Other than that I feel that this ending is great and really really really surprising.
I really like what you've done with the development of Sayaka and Homura's relationship. Its nice to know that they actually have a chance of getting along if Sayaka did not cement Homura as the bad guy after the Mami "incident" - not that Homura helps her case.
The non-canon H-chan route is interesting. Choice A gives more information but Choice B seems to make the relationships go more smoother regarding Homura and Sayaka and between Homura and Madoka. If I'm ever going to go at this route I'll choose B though.
And finally Kyouko is coming.
Btw, where is that anime reference? lol
I cant see anything except for what Kimidori pointed out which I totally would not get without wikipedia.
Sky haired, Blue eyed knight = Flame-haired Blazing-eyed Hunter