Well now things are moving along. You knew they were going to get shot down to a degree with their first manuscript. Still the criticism wasn't bad and should help them moving forward. Agree that Mashiro should make sure to add his opinion earlier. If there is anything up with the story it should be discussed before they go too far with it. Otherwise they are kind of just wasting their time.
Wow that seating arrangement at the end
. Sure might be easier to get the mail info now, though with those two it's going to be tough. Wonder how their year is going to go with them being so nervous beside each other.