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Originally Posted by ninryu
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16 years old Ritsu never liked her fancy orthodox school and the boring well-behaving rich girls, but her life was destined to change as she
mat a mysterious straying girl, a shy odd young lady, and a sweets-eating lazy-ass.
There'll be more where that came from..(the spelling errors...) =P
Also...each new dialogue is usually a new paragraph. (Rules in English?)
Other than that...it seems cool to start off with.
(Oh damn...my projects got delayed due to my RL issues...Writing RUSH!!!)